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SmokaJoka666 vs. Tonya~Montana
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no dickryde/hate/crew/fan votes no recycling or biting verse due 24 hours after thread is made (just in case one of us isn't online when thread is made) peace 4:20 |
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^^u ain't gotta post tonight if ur tired.... peace 4:20 |
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like an Off Flow CADIAC ARREST you dead Beat~
my BLAZIN Rhymes are like Cops, you Fled HEAT~ you ain't DROPPIN DOPE, like walkin thru with FEDS-in -the-Streets~ I KICK mentally off the DOME, as if your HEAD-met-my- FEET~ my PUNCHES landing HARD like feelin the concreted PAVEMENT~ yea I'll KNOCK you Down MONEY, like a DOWN PAYMENT~ grab ya hands and Clap ya back, with CLOCKS touchin ya SPINE~ then Spend you around in a CIRCLE, and made you TURN back the HANDS of TIME~ dam DAWG{Dog} you been SPAYED, therefore you ain't commin at me when I Bring Blaze~ and set you a STEP BACK like KIDS who Sink GRADES~ .....i'm out g'luck! |
^^ good shit
but ya shi wud just look unforced if u didnt caps all ya main words in ya metas an shit foreal good shit but smoka comes wit heat |
Don't Get My Punches/Wordplay Or Personals...Don't Vote...Every Line Has It..Catch It!!
U A Transvestite Scarface, Bitch Got 'Play'ed Lines, Well I Just Bought 'Park Place'.. Talkin Shit?? Ur Breath Got A Fart Taste, So Much Silicone Even Her Hearts Fake.. 'Pirated Prostitutes' On My Island So I'll Drop The Anchor On This 'Land-Hoe'.. U Got A Retards Punch..Ur Hands Slow, 'Drowned Thousands' With My 'Grand Flows'.. I Raped Ur Mother When She Was Pregnant, So Tonya Was Born With Stab Wounds.. Not Seein A WIN, So U MAC Whom? A Woman Tony Montana? This Drag's Doomed.. I Destroy Pipelines, U Must Wear Bongs, Only Grooms U Attract Are Haircombs.. U Ain't Gettin 'A Head', Claimin U A 'Man'....U Must 'Shave' With That 'Bare Dome'.. I'm Phat Like 'Bonecrusher's Fingers', U Can't Even Fit In The 'Ring' With Me.. Simply, I Spit 'Three Fold' Like A 'Old Fat Mans Gut' Ur Rhymes Are 'Wrinkly'..(old) peace 4:20 |
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=90552
hit it up honestly..ill be back to vote............. like i said before smoka u gunna drop ya shit or wut |
^^i've already voted on that battle...lol....man i can't believe this is bein slept on......
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ay who voted for you joka.....i don't see who explainin a vote!!!....
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^^me either....lmao...i think dude that replied forgot to explain when he said he would vote.....i'll PM him...or some shit...
peace 4:20 |
yea do that.........
thats fucked up !!! ................................ ....................................... .....................holla! |
i did i felt smoka had better punches
but nun the less tonya u came coo an all but smoka just out did u in everything personals punches mulites..not alot tho V- smoka http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=90529 ^^it dont have a poll voting..so just drop a text vote if u peep |
my honest breakdown......sorry for the missunderstanding in loke vs. PAK N HEAT battle tonya......coo
opener-tie...both were corny closer-tonya punches-hmmm...didnt like the punches but smoka gets it for not being as corny personals-smoka complexity-smoka multi's-smoka originality-tie...cuz tonya had played shit, smoka had transvestite shit enjoyment-smoka overall-smokajoka666.......no hate..just honest opinion peace |
Hard 2 explain but I'll try.
Smoka's verse was tight but I didn't like the way it was structure, I didn't read ( and recited ) very well. but Tonya's way dope all the way. I aint the kinda cat that can give advice 2 ya smoka but you got some ill linez jus structure it better. Peace |
aight..coo... uppin............................................. ............................................
peace 4:20 |
flow: Tied
Punch: Smoka..just Metas: Tied Structure: Smoka Enjoyment: Smoka Vote: Smoka this battle was pretty nice...smoka edged it on punchs...nice verses from both http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=90744 hit tht up if you aint already |
Voting Tonya here because Joka came a bit played. When battling femcees, it's always the same ole things. Fake boobs, she's a ho, etc. I'll admit, Joka didn't come as played as I've seen other people. Tonya, though, hit hard with funny metas and wordplay. That "money/down payment" line killed this for me. Plus, when you compare the closers, Tonya was hard with wordplay and funny. Joka's about the old, fat man's gut was just, I don't know. Wasn't a great visual to close the battle with. Yuch. So, better punches and wordplay for Tonya. Thanks. Return the favor.Vote here!
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^ Disagreed
Flow- Tie Structure- Definetly SJ... Tonya Stop Usin ~ And Herbish Shit Punches- SJ Enjoyed- SJ Originality- SJ Vote- SJ |
<<never battled a femcee...lol...but...appreciate the vote duke...........................
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^^comment was made for tobias...not Token.....aight...let's get the last vote in here...nice battle Tonya.....
peace 4:20 |
uhhh....uppin #4 or 5...one of those...i'll have to back and check....lol.......................
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OK, HERE'S THA BREAKDOWN:
TONYA like an Off Flow CADIAC ARREST you dead Beat~ my BLAZIN Rhymes are like Cops, you Fled HEAT~ ^^DECENT OPENER you ain't DROPPIN DOPE, like walkin thru with FEDS-in -the-Streets~ I KICK mentally off the DOME, as if your HEAD-met-my- FEET~ ^^^DECENT PUNCH my PUNCHES landing HARD like feelin the concreted PAVEMENT~ yea I'll KNOCK you Down MONEY, like a DOWN PAYMENT~ ^^NICE, BEST PUNCH OF VERSE grab ya hands and Clap ya back, with CLOCKS touchin ya SPINE~ then Spend you around in a CIRCLE, and made you TURN back the HANDS of TIME~ ^^EH, THE CLOCK/BACK THING IS PLAYED... dam DAWG{Dog} you been SPAYED, therefore you ain't commin at me when I Bring Blaze~ and set you a STEP BACK like KIDS who Sink GRADES~ ^^WEAK CLOSER and SMOKA U A Transvestite Scarface, Bitch Got 'Play'ed Lines, Well I Just Bought 'Park Place'.. Talkin Shit?? Ur Breath Got A Fart Taste, So Much Silicone Even Her Hearts Fake.. ^^WEAK OPENER, SECOND LINE OK PUNCH 'Pirated Prostitutes' On My Island So I'll Drop The Anchor On This 'Land-Hoe'.. U Got A Retards Punch..Ur Hands Slow, 'Drowned Thousands' With My 'Grand Flows'.. ^^NICE FLOW, OK PUNCH I Raped Ur Mother When She Was Pregnant, So Tonya Was Born With Stab Wounds.. Not Seein A WIN, So U MAC Whom? A Woman Tony Montana? This Drag's Doomed.. ^^OUCH PERSONAL I Destroy Pipelines, U Must Wear Bongs, Only Grooms U Attract Are Haircombs.. U Ain't Gettin 'A Head', Claimin U A 'Man'....U Must 'Shave' With That 'Bare Dome'.. ^^^HA HA NICE PERSONAL I'm Phat Like 'Bonecrusher's Fingers', U Can't Even Fit In The 'Ring' With Me.. Simply, I Spit 'Three Fold' Like A 'Old Fat Mans Gut' Ur Rhymes Are 'Wrinkly'..(old) ^^1ST LINE WAS GOOD, WEAK CLOSER Vote goes to : Smoka, egded out Tonya wit better personal punches, but was close... no beef Tonya, good drop too |
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