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Tökën (HIV) Vs. Dominator (LS)
Damn I Can't Wait Till We Get Our Name Changed...lol
Rules: No D/R Votes No Crew Votes No Hate Votes 10 Lines Max Deadline: Hour After You Check In If You're Late With A Good Excuse Then No Problem... We Friends Let's Make No Beef... |
No hate fo sho' izz all good.... This is not my checkin..... Im @ college so lemme finish some shit up and ill see if I have time... if not ill spit by 7 PM tonight.. ill make sure I checkin tho....
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k im in... due by 11:30 est....
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Yo send me a PM and il be sure to vote on this battle iight.
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Alright Homie... I'm Done... Took Me 13 Minutes...
When You Drop I Will... Hoping You Can Make It Earlier... |
I have 8 of 10 lines done.... just drop....
ill drop right after......................................... |
^ Lol Okey Dokey... You Got 1 Minute After I Drop Mine Then... :D......................................
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1 min? screw that lol.... I cant even refresh a site that fast on this comp.... im'a drop at 11:29 lol you can drop then if you want too
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MerKiN iN AcTioN
I'll be 'dropping' Token's like motor vehicles passing through tolls I could be a presidential incumbant the way i'be controllin this poll H.I.V. couldn't even survive my army with magic, Tok' will be diagnosed far beyond aids I'll be leavin ya with Hades - beatin ya like a red headed step child who got bad grades Ill cause fricton 'pon your world, leave ya lookin like governments than shoot hostages Dawg just cuz you look like Tony Danza don't mean you's 'The Boss' of this You land punches like you shoot a gun - you don't know how to aim right Only time you'll be tight is when I put you in a coffin, unexposed to daylight Bustin ya in half like a broken record, leavin ya soundin more whack than yo rhymes After 'beating this faggot' i'll be wanted in 50 states- theyll be callin it a 'hate crimes' Merkin FinIsHed ***Line 3- Magic Johnson had H.I.V.... and was a survivor... hense they couldnt survive even with magic... just a lil wordplay ;) **** ***Line 4 - Hades is the Ancient Greek god of Death*** ***Line 10- You get H.I.V. from sex w/ me, hense the gay punch / BEATING him will be a hate crime ;) *** |
Explanations:
His Sig Says "Fighting A War Against All" Executive Is One Of His Best Members Who Is Going Against My Member EyE QuE 10 Lines... Middle Weight?... Please... You're More Like Slender I'll Even Give You A Link To The Emergency Wackness Center 16 Posts A Day, Doesn't Mean Your Dominating Rapbattles.com Your Lines Are So Chopped Up I Was Thinking You Was Vietnam I'm Coming Half Assed But It's Ok, Your Full Is My Quarter Cuz Of You, RB Needs A Banning Forum Named... Wackness Transporter What Kind Of Crew Leader Has 300 Some Posts And Still A Middle Weight You're Declaring War Against All Cuz Your Wins Are Limited To Eight How Can You Run A Crew, Half Your Members Have More Experience Than You Executive Is The Only Pro You Got And His Loss Will Be Decided By His EyE QuE I WIN :d |
OOPS... YOU GET H.I.V. from sex with men... not me... lol
it was in explanations anyways not the verse .................................................. . |
^ Lol I Was Wondering What You Were Talking About...
Uppin 1... Oh And At The End Of My Verse It Was Suppose To Be... I WIN :D |
lol too bad that is far from you... damn dawg ive seen you come a LOT harder.... im suprised especially since this is a crew battle.... Your verse can't handle my Tony Danza punch ;)
lol UPPIN X 1 |
far from true*
Wow I cant type.... but uh yah... voting commence .................................................. ........................................ |
^ Dogg... I've Never Seen You Come Your Hardest So I Don't Know... But That Was A Weak Verse For A Crew Battle... No Offense We Homies But I Was Expecting Your Hardest... I Didn't Come My Hardest Cause That's All I Needed :D
Tony Danza Punch Made No Sense... Blah To That lol No More Vote Swaying For Either Of Us Uppin 2... |
Shit with all the freespoting I thought this battle would be almost over by now. Despite the dialogue though their were two decent verses.
Token, I liked your structure a lot better. You should have put a little more into it. Dominator, I hated your structure, lines were too stretched. I liked the venom you put in the words though. You was coming tight. So I give my vote to dom. Even though the structure was lacking, he was coming a lot more agressive. And that's what I like. |
^^^ i couldent disagree more...
Dom's Lines were Medicor... no punches , no real agression, nothing to say DAMN!!! at, Token, you Came Harder but Not "HARD" but in this aspect it was enough flow=tie structure=tie punches=Token Personals=token, Just cuz of tha post count and crew leader things meti's= token multi's = none Vote Token Nuff Said!!! |
Whateva........................................... ........
Uppin X 2................................................. . |
punches - token
flow - dom personals - token creativity - token Vote - token Good battle but token just edged it |
Thank You... uppin 3................................................. ..................................
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hmm....this is close to decide...u both were pretty equal on personals.....u both had nice punches but i think Token edged it on punches a bit.....and dominator had a better flow....here's a breakdown for u two....
BREAKDOWN Multis - Tie Metas - Token Wordplay - Token Punches - Token Personals - Tie Creativity - Token Complexity - Token Flow - Dominator Overall - if dominator would've had better personals...this would be a hard battle to choose....because some of his punches seemed weak in some parts.....but i think Token got this only because of punches....nice battle though...no hate...just a vote....... Hit One Of These Up: SmokaJoka666 vs. Tonya~Montana SmokaJoka666 vs. -Brixton- peace 4:20 |
token had better word play and harder punches my vote goes to him i felt him more he had me rolling dominator needs to come harder next time
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Flow: Tie
Punchs: Toke...Wackness emergency line = lmao Metas: Toke Structure: Tie Enjoyment: Toke Vote: Toke Doms punchs wernt to strong..Tokes W.E.C punch won this battle..tht shits hilarious..yup token wins again :( http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=90804 hit this batle up with a avote |
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