Darkest Knight Vd J~dubs
 

10 lines
no crew
no hate
no d/r
u drop first

nah fuck the u drop first rule we both can drop in 20 minutes a blind spit Holla
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ight that works for me...so yea im'a post my shit up now.....pce....................................... .................................................. ..........

Listen ive already won so u mite as well call me god
In order 2 beat me u’ll need the whole mob squad

U spit like a tru mime, no 1 can here you
This nigga is coughing up my lyrics 1 by 1 he thinks he’s caught the flue

Ive stolen ur heart and soul niggaz cant help but 2 call me a thief
Ur rhymes crack me up, see me laughin(haha) I have no time 2 grief…..

Over ur lost, kid ur a waste just like my cars exhaust
Save ya self, don’t make me heart turn cold cause then I wont be able 2 defrost

U so wack if we put ya in a class full of beginners u wouldn’t be able 2 rule it
This rap shit u entitled to, u need 2 quit it

Pce..lol

i ment 2 say over ur lost...so thats wht it means, i have no time **to grief over ur lost, then continues

dont make my heart turn cold**

[Mob squad my ass… nigga I don’t even need my brain to beat u]
[I’ll rip u so bad I will make u switch genres have u listin to blink 182]
[my rhymes leave mutiple wounds like Thompson submachine gun]
[u must wanna lose cause my rhymes come sicker than magic Johnson]
[my rhymes got u gaggin like a bitch as if they grabbed u by u throat]
[this nigga couldn’t win this battle if I spotted him by four votes]
[I'm not freddy cougar but I’m ya worse nightmarre eva to hit ya skull]
[you could have solid punches if ya hand was hard as a brick wall]
[My punches connect like there Roy Jones jr jabbin ya dome]
[Lyrically I’m causin concussions sendin yo bitchass home]

J-dubs had better wordplay and metas....It was more creative......
......gotta elevate........................................yo hit this yall.........

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=90414

uppin 4 votes
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u forgot to poll vote Nite
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Uppin 4 votes
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Uppin plz dont sleep
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dark u need to help up dis so we can get votes na mean.............................................. .............

yo yall niggaz hook up this battle, yo j dubs nicely spit dawg....ight yall just vote on it i just wanna elevate so yall help me out

VOTE YA"LL I"LL RETURN ALL HONEST VOTES
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JUSS DROP A LINK

it was close

flow=jdubs
punches=jdubs
structure=tie
wordplay=tie
creativity=tie
overall=jdubs

jdubs just barely got this he came with more punches though and that's why he get's my vote.

yo return a fair vote on my battle's in the sig
most recent is with born.

uppin 4 votes
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ima go wit J~Dub on dis one... overall he was juss better... J~Dub.. u wanna battle? set it up if u wanna do it....

this was a good battle
j got this one though
can u check out my battle
names vs verse112
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JDubs took this shit....

Better Punches, Better Flow, Better Wordplay, and More Creative

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=91199

hit it

ye not 100 yet but whatever...

darkest night - sorry man i though this was brutal. just my opinion

worst line "Save ya self, don’t make me heart turn cold cause then I wont be able 2 defrost" wtf

J-dubs - ye..lines were solid. i though ya could have brout it harder but i read ya drop first. after readin his i understand.

i'll keep an eye out for both of ya once i can vote for sure...so this is just a free up. but check my battle against poetic tendenceez if ya got time . pc

sum 1 forgot to poll vote
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Yo J Dubs merked this cat on this one...better all round, alot easier to see this flow. Knight got tha right idea though, wantin to elevate an all.

Peace

Yo hit up my battle with Pedro No'k if ya can. It would be appreaciated.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=90990

newbi battle in my eyes but here it is:

flow, n pretty much tha basics was: J-Dubs

check minez vs names....