Jay-R - The Mic Life
 

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1) raps most wanted - youngster in da place
2) fgee - Park Life
3) Handcuffs - fukkaz
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"The Mic Life"

[VERSE 1]
THE PAST!
Ever since I was a mere child i've had rhymes compiled
Figured out my style and thus learned my words reviled
Wantin to be famous had me livin on hopes and wishes
So when i'd fall apart it felt like rap was my stiches
I was me, that possed a threat to da majority of society
They knew i was the only N.B. emcee with such a variety
Me and a mic directly connected which was to be expected
I was rejected, neglected so it's the life I respected
My mind drew out blueprints and released em as a thought
They were the buildin blocks of a dream my heart sought
I dropped out of school and learned to write a hook
The concepts of rap can't be found in a history book
Everywhere that i've been I carried a concealed weapon
When men got pushy it was a pen I done pulled on them

[CHORUS]
It's the mic life!
The trials and tribulations of a man
It's the mic life!
When the underdog gets the upperhand
It's the mic life!
Hard for the normal bein' to understand
It's the mic life!
That made me the man that I am

[VERSE 2]
THE PRESENT!
Today it's the same way, my struggle's still wit me
I pray for better days but my prayer's must be on delay
Still waitin for my time to shine wit polished rhymes
I can not be defined, can't describe my verse lines
My skill is like a pill that will make your body ill
My mind is like a water mill that's filled, ready to spill
I listen to da world through my head set wit no regret
But yet my eyes can't be hid from the preset of life's debt
Feels like i'm on vinyl when I get scrathed by needles
This aint a metaphore for drugs, i'm pertainin to people
And if given the chance to advance i'll do at first glance
Anything to enhance my current stance and increase my finance
You can't shove me into gear, i'm automatic engineered
Isn't it clear? I'm a pioneer to help hip hop persevere

[CHORUS]
It's the mic life!
The trials and tribulations of a man
It's the mic life!
When the underdog gets the upperhand
It's the mic life!
Hard for the normal bein' to understand
It's the mic life!
That made me the man that I am

[VERSE 3]
THE FUTURE!
It was at the age of 10 when it happened, I begun rappin
My life's been planned out, I know what's comin and when
Maybe some day you'll cop a CD and hear my rhymes play
Or you could get the mp3 on yo PC to betray the R.I.A.A.
As of now it's my dream that I will one day reign supreme
Take over the mainstream and bring true skill to the scene
I'm gon add a new twist that not any body could resist
Assist the industry persist wit the content my lyrics consist
I'm not Pac or Biggie, so why be Jarule and pretend to be?
Yo situation's crazy when you get lazy and fall of this early
The future awaits us to enter it wit success and dominance
Given our freedom to express whatever we think is best
Anyone who knows me realizes it's somethin I won't let pass by
The guy waitin for the oppurtunity to reach out and touch the sky


[CHORUS]
It's the mic life!
The trials and tribulations of a man
It's the mic life!
When the underdog gets the upperhand
It's the mic life!
Hard for the normal bein' to understand
It's the mic life!
That made me the man that I am

It's the mic life!
Hard for the normal bein' to understand
It's the mic life!
That made me the man that I am

UPPIN FO' FEEDBACK!

that shit was hot man, i like the whole three tier concept, past present and future, nice touch. Good flow. I liked the multies.

Good work keep droppin

DAMN...KID...HOW OLD R U.....(UR FUTURE SAID 10 IN IT SO JUSS WONDERIN)

BUT W/E UR AGE..THAT SHIT CAME LIKE IT WAS ON FIRE...

GREAT WORDPLAY..GREAT VOCAB..GREAT FLOW

GREAT CHORUS...NOT MUCH IN THERE I DIDNT LIKE....

BUT LUV'D THE WORDPLAY..CUZ I LUV WORDPLAY...LOL

BUT DAMN KID...KEEP THIS SHIT UP..AND U'LL GO FAR SOMEDAY...


GOOD JOB

PEACE
(if pos peep mine....juss was bor'd wen i wrote it)

Yo, I'm 16 dogg

Thanks for the feedback

Yo. . . I was feelin this piece. Not bad at all. Vocab was good, it flowed and that's the major thing. Wordplay was good, Multi's were great, Flow and Multi's made the piece strong this time round. Try to Up ya Vocab next time and even it out. Have a fair proportion of everything, ya feel me? Hook was ok too, just nothing really to brag about it. Little bland, but the verses made up for it. Keep droppin man.

-Formula.

** Peep Full Circle from me aiight? **

i really liked the structure of this post, and the word play. you had this shit as nice as it gets. you can't make this much better.
dope piece man. keep postin'

yo nyce drop dawg i liked it Keep That shit commen aiight


Peace (v)

^Thanks

yo like everyone else has said really good drop wordplay was off the hook and flow was pretty much right on sometimes got a little off beat but came right back so maybe a few touchups here and there but overall really good verses and chorus wasn't bad either overall man this was a really tight drop i liked it. sounds kinda like some of my writings sometime we should collab on somethin. hit this up w/ a response to and if u wanna collab pm me or write it in my drop
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=90760

nice shit i'll give u an 8 out of 10

can u give me a honest vote here plz cause i aint gettin no feebaack on my battle
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...8748#post898748

IM FUCKIN LOVIN THIS MAN. SUM REAL TIGHT MULTIS N SHIT. FEELIN WHAT U SAYIN.....................................

ILL SHIT HERE!!!!!Enjoyed this piece....everything sharp and on point................8/10 maybe 8.5/10............ILL

Good lookin' y'all. Keep the feedback coming!

I can relate to this... so i understand. 10/10 for obvious fire and previous knowledge of self involved. go head and drop son...

^Thanks for hittin' this up dogg

ay real nice shit homie, open mic a da month, and make sure u check ya PM.

return da favor at my RENEGADE (remix)

PEACE

Aight dogg. Thanks for the postive feedback.

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QUIT SLEEPIN...

ILL AS FUCK KEEP UP THE GOOD SHIT I WAS FEELIN" IT FO SHO, GOOD DROP

THANKS!

i had a feeling this was gonna be fire and im glad i wasnt dissapointed nice work concept and delivery keep it up

i wuz feelin this drop 4 real one of the best i seen so far, the hook wuz simple but still fit the song perfect, the use of multis wuz crazy to, like everybody else said keep droppin much potential..

PS_read and critique CHokedog aka Youngnut

yeah that shit was hot

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^I'm down for a collab. I PM'd you dogg...

UPPIN!

damn, i havent read your stuff before but i'll be lookin out for your stuff later, this was incredible, keep it up man it was all there, pz man..hit me up for a collabo if ya want pz

Thanks alot dogg!

good shit, hooah? lol, liked your drop kid, had meaning, purpose, good shit... i really enjoyed the read, your flow was impeccable, and your vocab is nice as fuck, keep it up,
~PVT

Thanks fo' yo feedback...

man you laced that shit up tight lil man. keep up the good work. I look forward to hearing more from you, you have everything in your grasp. I was just wondering how long you have been writin'/flowin' growing up? hott punch lines

peace

^I been writing for like 6 months I think...

Anywayz...Uppin!

Mo' feedback needed y'all

ok shit was hott, and obviously really popular, ou got a nice flow for 16, so do i, ...so help out your fellow teen, being that ur so blessed with responses, and hit my three open mics, or one of em, any f em, jsu read em at least