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Redragon Vs TeckNine
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1.Crew votes allowed 2.No D/r Votes 3.6 bars 4.you know the rest |
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been like 40 minutes still no sighn
in Bitch slapped i sadi we gotta drop by tonite kido ..............................................Snif ff sniff...pussy? Red is wut ill leave u swimmin in the way im spittin flames to ya head.. Have ya verse prewritten for a vet,How can u be a Mic killer when u only battle in text.. Ill have ya brains rattlyin down ya neck, My punches are so Ill they Diagnosed u wit cancer..Ya Sexuality is like the 76ers witout Allen they aint got the answer.. my lines blaze herbs..the only way that you spit heat is when you read my verse and my words and ya lips meet I'ma do ya like Toni Braxton...make sure ya never "Breathe Again" too late to reverse ya fate...a hearse is what ya leavin in RedDragon receive a win...Do or Die couldn't "Picture This" ya typed a 50 bar novel mac.. my 10'll leave ya scriptures ripped |
U needa understand the personals an punches an metaphors...
hes takin dayz so hes typin a 50 bar novel..get it...Lol jk.. im jjust hella blazed.off sum bud...fromthe club... Damn kid talk about takin dawyz.... |
dood its midnight over here...if you were in the same situation I am in right now you'd be too tired to write a 6 bar verse for some guy who can't wait.Just chillout i'll drop tommorow.Be a man and wait.
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for a fukin prewrit shit fuk that...u needa drop now..
its 1 o clok here nigga..u dont see me bitch an 6 bars is short..kiddo drop now or get dqed.......................follow the rules |
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wow........sounds like a big fat vagina |
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You already put him one vote up in the poll dumbass^
But w/e I told you to be a man teck..but your over here bitching so I guess you coulden't handle being a man.. . . . .. .. (Start Time 7:06) My Words Are Scornful..You Aren't A Homemade Bugle Boy So Stop Blowing Your Own Horn Bro// My Text Make It Storm Hoe!..Overtake You Cause I'm Continuesly Fucking TeckNine Like Rewinding A Porno!/[1] You Rhyming Is Mournfull.....Fact Is These Wack Kids,Think It's A Joke Till I "Applaude They Hats" And Clap Lids// Bitch I Crack Wigs..TeckNine Got Enrolled In A Class With Aids Paitents,So He Could Be A Part Of Class Sicks!!/[2] ..Think About It,This Isn't A Nightmare It's A Fucking Fable// TeckNine's Punches Are Soft 'Round Edges Like Unfished Tables/[3] You's A Queef!!........Man Ur Done!!....I'll Put "Jungle Gyms" On Ya Spine To "Play Back"!!// Get Slayed Jack!!........Not Near Me Cuz It's Like "Givin Perms To Mobsters" Cuz This Fags "Straight Wack"!!//[4] Your Gunna Hate Gats!!......Like "Yogi With Heat" I "Bear Nines" Bastard!!// You Wanna Compare Mines After??!!......Cuz Menace'll "Scalp Ya Forehead" And Have This Fool With A "HairLine Fracture"!!//[5] You Dare Decline Tha Master??!!.......Dumb Fuck!!....You Only "Donate Sperm" Then Post A Reward For "Lost Kids// Can't Define My Lo-Gix!!......Cuz I'll Kill This Kid And Leave Him With His "Head In Tha Dirt" Like An "Ostritch"!!!//[6] (End Time,7:23) ..Now Uppin for Votes |
Uppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp #1
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LOl this kid puts in the start an end time like Its really true..u posted my boy yaverse that u orginally wrote last nite againt me an all u needed was one more line..then u saw my shit an rewrote ya whole thing..LOl
your gunna get DQED fag..thats just gay... FAke ass Mc |
this battle was good..almost like tha battle ov played lines..
well teck came nice...hella played lines but a couple of em' you tried to freak it another way..disses hit iight..punches did'nt really have no spark tho..flow was good..nice opener red came nice also..he had played lines also but he had a lil more heat...his opener was good...disses were betta..you edge on punches cause you change em up a lil bit..good battle overall tho vote red... |
^^SLut..if u cant read...rad had a ver up then he changed it cuz i came sum wut hard..an so he posteed that PRewrite shit..wut a fag....foreal...
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^^^ya moms a slut!!!!^^^go jack off and drink it!!!!@teck
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OK but REd broke the TIMEl imite if u dont no how to read..
an trust me i no like a dozen guys that been all up in ya ..clit.. An i merked u..so hmmmmm your the slut... Uppin 4 honest votes..>>>EVEN THO RED BROKE THE TIME LIMIT |
opener-pak
closer-pak punches-red personals-pak multis-red originality-tie..both played complexity-tie enjoyment-red structure-pak creativity-pak overall-hmmm...pretty close one.....but i go with red dragon....just harder hittin...no hate for real ... yo teck...i know i voted against u here but can u please go poll in my battle with smoka |
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RED TOOK 32 hours to spit had a verse done then deleted it cuz i spit sum heat..sum shit heat but still he got scred psoted the next day tryna Bullshit THE TIME He SPIT IT In KID we all no u ain that GOod LOLOLOL wow |
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Deleated it?..fag if you go to the first page of this battle,you'd see that my verse is still up there in plain sight.I'm not a herb like you I dont delete my posts or take d/q's,I'm actually a man I can wait for a emcee to post.Well this isnt closed cause you arent a mod asshole so still uppin for votes.Btw wheres this so called "heat" you said you spat?..I don't see any exclamation points all I see is a few personals maybe 1 or 2 thats it. 1 |
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Lol u need all that quote bull shit an pretty shit around ya words to make it hit..lil bitch..u are wak..lets have a new battle then ill fukin merk ya ass..U had a day more time...an i saw ya wak verse u sent to my buddy..Lol...u dum fuk that was weak an then u got scared.....lol wow kid your a bitch...its a text battle..an u r suppose to keystlye it in like 30 minutes not 12 hours..
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vote = tech
ya lucky i can't vote red. frankly...how long did u spend writin that shit...i would expect sum much better punches for that. techs punches wasn't the shit but at least they flowed n at least they was off the cuff. |
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i think im gonna agree with pak on this one..
he came lot harder.. peep my battle: we need honest votes http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=91404 |
i mean teck-nine. i was listening to 2pac thats why i said pak..it was an accident
peep my battle: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=91404 |
multi's to red.
punches to red. flow to teck structure to teck......aint feelin tho stretched out lines red but yeah redragon had those hard clever punches in there, but the whole stretched out line thing doesnt work for me. when i read text it i rap it out in my head and it just wasnt workin, wasnt feelin it. cuz that shit down somehow and it would of been like a rerally really ill verse. my vote teck both a yall please hit this up right quick pleaseeeeee http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=90336 |
close i guess.....
flow=tech punches=red structure=tie creativity=red wordplay=tie overall=red even though red probly did type up another verse for this or posted a pre-writ we still have to vote----red came harder i think more witty even though his concepts were played that's how it looks---tech ya verse was aight but u'r punches weren't hard enuff......... peep and honest vote back here---on my battle with born thanx |
^^^HMMM IVe beat u twice slut stfu........
HAting ass herbs......i beat em an they vote aginst me..wuts rb comin to..damn..if u arent blind ....hit this up..wit a true opinion.. fuka cutastrafag |
Upppp #3
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i'm a hater of stretched lines... really...
mic king deff. had a better structure... strong punches n personals... fealt it... but u had a lot of fillers redragon... SSSSTTTTTRRRRREEEEEEEEETTTTTCCCCCCHHHHEEDDDD LIINNEEEESSSSSSSSS....lol... really tho... ur shit would be dope as fuck if u shortened em' i still give ya the win.. even tho it was strethced... it flowed wit multis... usually people can't come hard.. wit shit like that but u did... my only advice is u shorten dem lines |
red dragon got this he ccmae stronger overall and his punches hit hard.....Vote:RD
plz return da favor honestly http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...5147#post905147 |
Aight good battle guys
opener-pak punches-red personals-pak multis-red structure-pak creativity-pak closer-pak winner-pak Hit this up http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=91471 |
Yeah this was a pretty good battle..
Pucnhes: Tek Structure: Tek Multies: Red wordplay:Tie flow:Tie Overall it was a good battle but my vote goes to Tek, Props to both though...Vote= Tek |
Can i get this closed............................................ .................................................. ................i merked this kid hows it 4-44444444444444444444444444444444444
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well this forum got some drama
not gonna say much it was a decent battle someone checkout my battles names vs verse112>2-0 names vs angellicalr>0-4 ______________________________________________ |
word...i gotta say Teck got this...no hate....he had a better structure....and personals......most def. structure and flow though.....over half of red's punches didn't seem to hit hard cuz i had to scroll left or right just to read his lines....u had one good one i remember though (the porno line) but Tech got it because he had a much better flow...and structure....if red's barz were shorter i'd have to give it to him...but his punches were weak and practically ineffective due to that fact.....
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