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(LM)cutastraphe vs. (HIV)TECH-NINE aka Paknheat
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no crew, hate votes dr or feeding due in say 2 hrs. give us sum time fo the hell of it. but i'll be postin soon blind spit after we both check-in check in!!!! NOBODY GETS THIS WIN!!! -Jay Pana |
LMAOOOOO NIGGAS HIGH AS FUCKKKKKK THAT'S LSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS LYRICAL FUCKIN SOLDIER GONNA RUN U TO THE GROUND AND STEP ON U GET OUT MY NINE U KNO THE REST-------LOL
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checkin kid........... This shud be titeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeee ;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;; |
teck nine with his best-rhymes, 'fuckin sucks'and i'm not talkin bout his 'sex'-crimes/
nigga culdn't get 'outa ' bar and even with his 'stretched'-lines/ beat me before but who runs with 'HIV'? they aint 'hard'-core/ my skillz a far-more, wut arts for-he culdn't make a 'hit' comin out the 'closet' from a 'car-door'/(gay ass nigga) This crew battle is hype, and i can see this kid already-losin/ while i'm steady-provin want to make me 'look wack' then switch 'cut' with 'revolution'/(the thread says LM...get it LM's in The Revolution) want's me to end this abusin, nah though i'm a keep-on/ cuz gettin 'pussys' rare and he still watches 'HBO' to 'Dream-on'/(dream on: old datin show on HBO) raps easy to sleep-on, not to feed-on-but he'll always serve 'beneath' me as summin to 'pee-on'(peon)/(peon:look it up the) lose the keyboard and mic and he'll be screamin dear god my career's-gone/(lol...) tennnn gl pzz |
my name ain't Dean Cain but Teck nine came to "rip" cutastraphe..
"Believe it or Not" blood leaks from severein every artery quickly.. Nine stays shifty..unpredictably witty..never takin falls.. it's blood sport..not pool..but still known for breakin balls.. create withdrawls..cuz when I spit..ya look like Jodeci.. "Fienin" for my lines with the shakes waitin hoplessly.. provokin me's.. like "suicide"..cuz in this zone ya got found.. with the BPC lookin like the "Jim Jones" compound.. I'm runnin through you.like I was an I.V.you comin tight.that's highly unlikely.. only chance of votes for cut is if they die typing.. Ya punches where typical for an average heavy weight differential.. This mite be a crew battle but ill hand u back half ya crew intials..(L M half of it is a L) |
aighttttttttttttt nice spitttttttttt liked the ender---------let's get sum votes---------------------
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i read 2 lines from cutastraphe drop then i just stoped reading it..........
im just sorry.... ................................................ Gone -Axe |
u'r fuckin wackkkkkkkkkkkkkkk ya have to have explanation vote this is a crew battle. and ya alredy polled for him? wtf ya just hatin on me so stop it befo i merk ya ass too. explain ya vote otherwise we takin ya poll away.
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^^^^^^^6wuteva im up 1-0
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Bring this to investigated reports....... that vote does not count.... especially in a crew battle..............
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THIS WAS A HOT CREW BATTLE NOW FOR DA BREAKDOWN:
OPENER:CUT CLOSER:CUT LMAO VOCAB:TECK MULTI'S:CUT WORTH READING:BOTH WORTH BATTLING:CUT PUNCHLINES:CUT THIS WAS A ONE-SIDED BATTLE TO ME KNA MEAN CUT'S VERSE WAS CREATIVE AND ALSO VERY FUNNY ESPECIALLY HIS LAST LINE WHILE TECK'S VERSE WAS JUST WELL JUST A VERSE IT DIDN'T STICK OUT OR ANYTHING TO ME KNA MEAN SO MY VOTE GOES TO CUT WHAT... |
u forgot to poll dawggggg??????????? and i'll try to bring it to IR see if i can get that vote taken off cuz that's just wack hate vote by the wang.
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on sum honest vote .^^aite...uppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn |
Flow: Teck
Punchs: Tied Metas: Tied Structure: Teck Enjoyment: Tie Vote: Teck You got no idea how hard this battle is to vote on...cut had some nice punchs...but i heard all tht shit before..mostly played..teck was more original which is what wwins him my vote...punchs were at the same level...this battle is hella close http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=90832 in return...hit that up |
yo honest
flow-TECH metas-Cut by one personal-not really finisher-Cut vocab-TECH opener-Cut Punches-Cut Good verses but Cut took more areas.............honesty only......... (I dont know yall like that to hate vote)........................................ Could yall return the favor............................................. ............... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=90920 |
this was an embarrasment... cutastrophe easily lost this battle.
I understand why wang didn't explain... its not needed. Your punches were unoriginalk and the wordplay sucked... grade 3's can come up with that shit. And please don't explain the punches in brackets after the line... if it's that important then do it at the end of the verse... all you had in this verse was multi's with shitty punches. ..they let you in a crew???? Anyway. Teck. That was the cheesiest opener that ended in the most lack-lustre punch I've ever seen. Fuckin horrible man. second punch worked..actually nice...would've been cool to see something personal tied in there though... verse was marginal after that, closer..meh. not bad. but same idea with the brackets after the line, takes away all the effect. Teck won this because he tried to be more original than cut adn he actually tried to punch, even if he missed a few he came closer definately. also...cut... try to make your verse more readable, then asthetically it's more pleasing and better to read and understand. vote- teck |
k..so i can't poll...don't have 100 posts, but i'm more worthy than any others....
..... good for you then cutastrophe. |
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............if you have to explain every fuckin line you spit.....then obviously there is something wrong............ |
oh wutevaaaaaaa shut the fuck up so i didn't put my explanations on the bottom and it fucked up the whole structure of the flow-----and i didn't explain every line but just where it needed it--wang ya still have to break the shit down but fuck that ya vote dun't count ya lost ya chance to explain shit. Atleast that nigga philo explained ish whoev the fuck that herb is i kno we both spit bad verses here and i wuldn't care if u did have enuff posts to poll philo---atleast ya dropped an honest vote---fuck all the jibber jabber--uppin and one kid still didn't poll----uppinnnn
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^^^^ LOL your a fag.......arent you??????????????????????????????????????????????? ??????????.......................
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damn close battle here i gotta say....u both were pretty much equal with punches and metas....tech had a better flow...and u both had an equal vocab....here's a breakdown for u two...
BREAKDOWN Multis - Cut Metas - Tie RhymeScheme - Tech Structure - Tech Punches - Tie Creativity - Cut Vocab - Tie Overall - i gotta say that Tech only got this mostly because of the style he used in his verse (rhymescheme) no hate to u cut..u had some dope lines...but some chopped up barz...feel me....but i think this was a pretty dope battle with u two.... peace 4:20 |
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Teck killed this on da real, way more structure an' flow... better punches fo-real too...
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Honestly I think Teck Nine won due to his punches hittin harda. Both verses were good, but Teck's punches inched out a win for him in my opinion.
vote=TECK NINE Vote on this honestly: Infinite Skillz vs. Nitemarre- http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=91269 |
uppin to get this closed............forealllllllllllllllllllllllllll lllllll
fuk red dragon............................................ ....fuk that fagat.... |
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well it was good
dont no who got it from this point i'll hit it up im trying to get 100 posts right now meanwhile some one check out my battles names vs verse112>2-0 names vs angellicalr>0-4 _______________________________________________ |
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Mic KIng Is DQ'ed For UPPIN Too Many Times... You Have That Many Wins And Yet Don't Know The Rules?
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