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Toner vs Pedro Nok
Yo 10 linez roughly?
No bitin No shit votez You spit first? - is that cool? Checkin In.................. |
Yo I 4got that u said I should spit first so I will. Hopefully you'll have checked in by tha time I've spit ma shit.
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Checkin and spittin..............Evil Pedro............Killin Herbz and smokin Toner
With no winz and 2 losses…How you gonna compete with me With a name like S-Toner…How can you even claim to be an mc? So fuck Toner…Never win a battle,You must be lyrically cursed I peeped ya other verses…wack battlez, got carried away in a hearse Beatin Toner into submission…I’m lyrically strong but Tonez weak You get beat of plain skilled newbz…But beatin you ain’t a hard feat In the street, me and Tone Blow for Blow? ...One winner in this shit Getting This Lightweight Suicidal…Plaguing Rb, Buggin with his wrist slit My Sig Sayz Lyrical Soldier…Battlin in the trenches, Beatin Herbz This guyz been fucked and Ditched…Lyrically Kicked to The Curb…….. Peep this shit |
Yo I gotta go.......I'm gonna drop 2 moz....Sorry Dude.............................................. .
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aiiiiiiiiiiiiiight then..................................drop tomorrow..............ya better not be runnin ha ha.....................
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Yo, thanks for your patience dude, much appreaited.
Apprarentally I need to elevate - verbally / Watch me smoke this Cat - Herbally // Bitin Rapers styles like head lice / Includin your verse Tu Pacs been murdered twice / Playin this Cat like I spat this verse thrice / Type Cast gansta, like De Niro does Heist / Coll down Nok'd, while I put this bitch on Ice / Exorcise the Dawg in yer like I'm Jesus Christ // Yo Nok'd on your verse you trip, get a grip, learn to rip / You make bitches sick,Wipe your lip, cos u been ridin dick // Take a lesson from me - in your verses involve pschology / Structure around reality, cos you oozin ideology // You a gansta? kid that's just an illusion/ Your bogus rymes intoxicate my air like pollution// Spittin gypsy shit - Like I'm cursed, I've took Worst/ When I'm tooled up - your first, Flip this shit, roles reversed// From beyond da grave ma rep's been nursed, like a leppa/ I'll be stone cold dead before Mancheser's the North West Reppa. Peace |
Should be 'cool down Nok'd'............................................ .................................................. ..
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Yo now we should be able to get some votez on this shit..............................................
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Flow: N
Punchs: N Metas: N Structure: N Enjoyment: N Vote: N This battle wasnt strong...N had harder punchs n all tht shit...keep elevatin Toner you got potential http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...15&pagenumber=1 hit that up witta honest vote |
uppin for votez............................1st up..........................................Good votes with good explaination needed
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Uppin fo votez....feedback needed fo vote please............................................ ....................................
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constructive criticism n personal vote
cant vote coz he's ma boy but nok'd did have this down wid punches and shit......toner was aight but nah vote if i cud=nok |
Structure: N
Floh: N Punches: N Overall: N Vote: N pretty easy to decide... toner needs to elevate... no hate to any.. could ya'll hit this battle up, its 1-0 my lead... vote fairly.link is in my sig.. thanx |
Open- Toner
Metas - Toner Creavitity - Tie Flow - Nok Finish - Nok Dek's Abuse Meter- 8 for Nok, 5 for Toner vote = Nok toner u had sum decent ieas but they could have been worked better to hit with more fire. plus, sum of the lines i just don't get...like ya finish...prolly cu i'm not from the uk Best line: This guyz been fucked and Ditched…Lyrically Kicked to The Curb…….. Return feed on my battles. |
Uppin this shit.............................................. .................................................. ...........................
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Uppin................2nd.....................vote on this shit...............Plz
It's draggin my battlin down.........stop sleepin |
3rd uppin opp................................come and vote on this shit.............................................. ...............................................
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need votes...................................uppin 4th............................................... .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................
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Got respect for Nok, but afraid Toner got the overall best of this battle, Nok I feel had a betta flow but on terms of punches... Toner grabs my vote.
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Quote:
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uppin final time so don't sleep on it............wanna win this UK battle
WICKED |
Yo Funn Demantal 4got to vote...fool. Lets face it I need the votez............................................. .................................................. ..
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yo, toner, your structure laged, keep elevating tho, and i cant help but think that you took the extra day to prewqrite that shit, i give this to nok, he took ti fair and square....... my vote nok...
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Kna dude, I not against Nok man, that would be whack....but at least your honest.....hard to find on this site.
Peace |
My vote goes to toner, although his flow was a lil off, he carried a lot of punches, nok'ds verse's came a lil bit too weak.. Not hatin', jus how i see it..
Vote: Toner |
OPener: Toner
Closer: Toner Flow: Nok Personals: Toner Punches: Nok Win: Toner No hate just a vote |
gotta give it too nok for sure on this one he utilized better wordplay with more skill and overall just came harder than you to this battle keep trying though toner your on your way to a couple in the W catergory my vote
nok. peace |
i took away nitros vote, fucka quote vote, if you want his vote put back on, PM him and tell him to explain it in his own words.
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Toner, your verse was good and had good punches and all, but you know the end is important to make sense of the whole verse. Your ending just threw me off, I just dont that Manchester line.
Overall i say nok took this, no hate i respect Toner and all, he was the first dude i battled ova 'ere and he beat me but thats not why i vote this against him, just feel nok did better. |
Okay i get it now, but nok still wins, sorry tone.............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .....
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yo this shit gonna get fucked up in a minute dogg
oh no run for your life ITS THE FUCKEN END OF THE WORLD!!!! ************************************************** |
Where'z my win gone?????????????????????????????????????
Whats goin on????????????????????????????????????????????? |
Flow: N
Punchs: N Metas: N Structure: N Enjoyment: N Vote: N this was a hands down battle. |
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