severe vs. champ
 

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YO MAN JST GIV ME A QUIK BATTLE ASWELL NA.8 OR 6 LINES.................YEH?........................ .......PZ

oli-dogg i said i would when i finish my other battles.
i'll pm you when there done.............................................. ...........................

HEY YO CHECK
SEVERE YO MAN U GOT A GOT AN OK REP BUT U CANT CUM NEAR
THIS IS THE NEW KID ON DA BLOCK AND IM READY 2 SIGN 2 D-BLOCK, BUT THE TIME IS TICKIN FOR YOU 2 STOP BEIN CHICKIN
AND GET IN TO LICKIN INSTEAD OF SUCKIN-COCK I GOT THIS ON LOCK LIKE BIG-L IM PROBABLY GOING STARIGHT TO HELL BUT WHO GIVES A FUCK COS MY LYRICS ARE AS GOOD AS YOUNG BUCK IN HIS PRIME IS THAT A CRIME I THINK NOT
YEH ONE DAY I HOPE TO TIE THE KNOT TO A LABEL BUT UNTIL THEN I WILL HAVE TO MAKE THE NAME-SEVER SOUND LIKE A FABLE!!!

ima spit first since he aint never say who was goin to

here i go...

Ur b-days in December? But u came out last
Ur not a real contender, in this battle, you’ll come out last
I almost went crazy, simply by listenin to you
Gettin a W,aint happenin, like Hitler kissin a jew
Jus a newb, he thinks im a handyman when I say I carry hammers
Maybe u should think bout retiring early like u were barry sanders
Ur the best since big L? but don’t you think its funny how no one know’s you
There’s a decision at the top of the screen, but its funny how no one chose you
U really don’t stand a chance, cuz ur not jus a pussy, ur a cunt too
I’ll end this battle jus by statin, he sent me a pm sayin “I want you”

damn that was wierd.. we dropped at the like exact same time.............................................. .........................................

sever got this shit obviously i aint even gonna break it down---champ didn't have any hard punches it was all cluttered too ya need split ya shit up betta yo-----severe had betta [punches, wordplay, structure]

vote=severe

peep my battle in the sig.

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battle was ass

but severe got this
specially da fact dat nothing the champ said made sense
least sever attemtped to use punches

vote = severe

hit this battle up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=91418

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severe Burned this shit.........Dropped him on the doorstep like dANDO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Yeah.........Flow burned, Punches Burned.......The Champs still sizzlin!!!!!!!!

Vote:on the outclased rule..............Severe

Hit this up with an honest vote

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=90792

Ta

severe wins this easily
champ...man you need help
go to WEC and find out what structure is and then maybe
you can drop a decent verse..but that was wack
severe has some work to do also..but at least his structure
was half way decent...punches didnt really hit and his wordplay
wasn't that good..but it was easier to read overall
so.....


poll vote=sever lyrics

champ needs to proofread his shit before his drops his verse
just some free advice