|
Topical Battle (J~Dubs vs TR)
Topic: Horror
Line lenght is 12-16 No Votes by: Crew, Hate, D/R... Verses due by Thursday 11/13/03 11:59pm eastern standard time Best of Luck |
checkin in
.................................................. .................................................. ...... |
It was a dark and stormy night, on the opening day
Minutes until curtains raise, the light dim the stage Her lines were implanted in her head, hearts racing Director pacing cutting loose threads, props placing The turn out was grand, floor to ceiling to the stands All the stand-ins were standing, selling teddy grams Opening acts were stage magic, then chorus singing Vocals sounded tragic, two misses with baton spinning A profound hush came over the crowd, the quiet warn Parents were proud, came to see their child perform Lights dimmed, final call then the red curtains rose Her mouth, her tongue, her eyes, all her body froze Her heart gave a great fight, her death just ain’t right No has ever died of horror... an extreme case of stage fright |
[I’m like Jason wit the machete cuttin tr’s head so it forms thin strips of spaghetti] 1
[or I can be freddy tearin ya skin up wit my nails till ya body turns into confetti]2 [..do u like micheal myers cut of ya head ,leave red gushing from ya masked head]3 [cause like I still know what u did last summer I’ll shoot u in 2 ya grave to make sure u dead]4 [leave ya liver in ya mailbox like that cat off scream but this time I’m takin out all ya sibs]5 [it will be a notha nightmare but this 1’s at tr’s crib,slice his brains up and eat them like ribs]6 [I be like tha blair witch killin yo ass in the woods,eat tr’s body quicker than Hannibal could]7 [cause like most killers in every movie I don’t mean to do what I do I’m juss misunderstood]8 [I bring out tha chainsaw and be a notha leather face,like snoop dogg murder was tha case]9 [u small like the leprechaun in space, be sick an cut off all ya skin so we can see ya white face]10 [it can like can be a notha child play but I’ll knock off tha letters in ya name so that it forms real]11 [leave in a casket tightly sealed,cause in this battle tha realist had no choice but to get killed]12 explanations 9:snoop dogg song... murder was the case 10: white face=skull |
wtf dubs... u gon hit up our battle or not? damn............................................
.................................................. ..... |
uppin 4 votes
.................................................. .................................................. .... |
well.... dubs... i liked urs.... Real... ur shyt was kinda plain n simple... vote... dubs tite battle tho
|
considering the fact that dubs wrote a battle verse and not a topical verse....
vote=TR ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
^^dumb fuck are topic was horror u dumbass cant u see my verse was all about horror u idiot theres a such thing as dissin someone while staying on topic
|
a topical battle has nothing to do with dissing someone....
topical battles are poetry, meaning you write a poem with the topic being, in this case, horror.... go to sacred scriptures(the topical battle league) and see some of th ebattles there....you will understand my point.... |
what eva dogg this is a battle no a poetry contest...if u have anything else to say pm me plz dont freepost in my battle thanx dogg
|
hahaha
i liked j-dubs flow better it was more sick dont get me wrong tr had some good shit to can u check this foe feedback and votes names vs angellicalr , 0-4 names vs verse112 , 2-0 ___________________________________________ |
uppin 4 votes
.................................................. .................................................. ... |
uppin 4 votes
.................................................. ...............................333333333333 |
Quote:
Dats Why He Isnt Allowed To Vote... Illiterate Bass-Turds... TR Def Got Dis... Dubs Was A Verse... TR... You Came Pretty Nice Dawg... I Seen Betta Topicals From You But I Like Dat Ending... Vote... TR... -P |
Yeah Dubs verse was basically a battle verse when this was a topical and either way TR came better with the topic than Dubs did, it was a good read though for both verse but TR gets my votes, props to both though, Vote=TR
|
word....Dubs ur verse was a battle verse....plain and simple...whether the topic was horror...u wrote about horror things....not in a topical way though........Realist stayed with the concepts...and sticked to what the topic was...period....Dubs had better vocab and flow....but his structure was fucked...and he swung punches and disses which was not on topic........Realist got this just for that reason....
peace 4:20 |
look yo i dont fukin care if he was on topic or not...but ure shit was sooooooooooo fucking strechted man that shit didnt flow for shit i dont care who read it whether it was a fast rapper or a slow mutha fucka it dont matter shit woud not flow for shit
second it was wack played as hell and weak TR decent verse the ending was tight vote - tr |
This was quite funny...
A battle verse in a topcial.... So very wrong... Vote- TR for obvious reasons.... |
| All times are GMT -4. The time now is 09:51 AM. |