Rap~Jesus~ vs. StraitJakit
 

10-15 lines
5 votes win
3-0=ko
no crew/dickride/hate votes

checking in................................................ .................................................. ......................

peace

My Verse:

Im runnin to win it munchin through lyrics till their 'nothin to win with'/
Fuckin dimwit, your only 'shitfaced' cuz im rubbin you in it//
Your punches miss fit, this bitch thinks hes gonna be a fuckin rich kid/
Cuz when the ATM said 'enter your pin' he went an stuck his lil dick in//
your workin oral to all the guys you've felt/
Cuz the only way you can get votes is when you 'apply yourself'// (damn !)
As this bitch gets jumped, im feelin ya pain, ready to end it wit tha pump/
Your a reject, went out with tha trash can and still got 'Dumped'//
You really dont wanna battle, dick is what you swallow/
Treat you like 'Ichabod Crane' and spit flames that make ya brain 'sleepy' n 'hollow'//
if you aint fearin me you ought to be psychotically/
constantly droppin these monstrosities respected like philosophies//
perform lyrical lobotomy on emcees that are fuckin wannabes/
I give you my sincerest apologies, but your first verse im 'Callin/Colin' a 'Mockery'//

peace

First i'm gonna teach you a few lessons
for christmas you should ask for some "lyrical presents"
i spit shit so sick that you'll get a diesease
to add to your list of various s-t-d's
you aint shit kid i'm sick and twisted
the only punches you felt is when your mom got fisted
your constant masterbation causes you humiliation
i really hope your ready for anihillation
your verse was nice, it was good for a laugh
now i'll bend over so you can kiss my white ass
i've seen the best and i've seen the worst
now i'll watch you ride away in a hearse.......
cause i just lyrically murdered you

upping for votes, plz ppl vote quickly........................................... ..........................

peace

come on ppl upping............................................ .................................................. .................................................. .........

peace

Rap Jesus killed this dude even though ya verse was prewritten like a mahfucka......
Strait didnt come all that bad except that his punches were basic simple played ones......Rap came pretty original in my eyes cuz i havent seen those yet....but u win anyway......

weak battle though......pre writing is really gay

vote-rpa jesus

uppin .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .........................................y'all

uppin .................................................. ....................

thx man............................................... ....................

peace

ya... Rap jesus killed it........... thats juss how it is..... no hate....................... but strait jakit holla at em if u wanna battle..............

wow both of yall need to elevate in this shit they were both pretty weak. but i got a vote

punches-rap jesus
flow-tie
multis-rap jesus
structure-rap jesus

overall-rap jesus

return da favor at the battle with me and NEW RAP ORDER

ok ki will...... if i find it... neway 1 more vote for KO, some1 plz vote......................................

peace

Opener: straight
Closer: Jesus
Flow: Jesus
Personals: Jesus
Punches: Jesus
Winner= Jesus
Hit up this sight with an honest vote please! http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=91338

ok i guess i win......... nice battle dawg, gdluck to future battles........... thanx voterz..........

peace

ok some1 plz close this.............................................. .................................................. .......................

peace

str8jakit
this line was ill dawg _______
you aint shit kid i'm sick and twisted
the only punches you felt is when your mom got fisted

but other than that the rest was lame
rapjesus your shit was ill but ill the whole time ---ya shit flowed well and punches were decent

you killed this kid but ---if hee would came with more punches like the one above he mights beat you

vote + RJ

aight man....... but i doubt it................................................ ...................

peace

Meh...
Vote- Rap Jesus,,,


Better verse...
Period