damurderousone VS teKnique
 

12 lines max,
u spit first,
no hatin, d/r, crew, etc votes
jus do yo thang

dis is da boy checkin in yo, lets do dis duke squad up................................................ ............

shit fucc a checc in lets see sum barz.......>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

its da murderous one a.k.a. young hugh hef/
i taught ur girl a new teknique how to make a banna split wit her chest(titty fuck)/u get on da mic and everybody start to laugh/
not because they was hard but because they was ass/
put u 6 feet deep u startin to grow roots/
i was born wit knowledge dats why when it hurt i pulled my wisdom tooth/
ur flow game starvin it need to eat only way it can is if u bite me/
hear my songs and steal em you straight trash/
my pockets phat like trina ass
so ur pockets look like cleveland's arena before they saw james and da cameras flashed/
da murderous one got his name for reasons i even murdered a sperm in da race tryin to get to da egg when we was semen(holla back)

hurry up cuz what da fuck takin so long spit some bars tryin to find dat written and shit...........................

yo a shame to da game, committin a rap treason, wacc a popular slang term n u da main reason/
how many times must i tell you wanna be rap acts, dat doin yo momz weave da only way you rap a tight tracc/
enuff wit da corny punch lines, cuz u cant touch mine, stop lyin to deez niggas online, yo real rap name probably sunshine/
or possibly rainbow, you rap like a retard, when u succin yo daddy up da only way sumthin cumin out yo mouth is hard.../
leavin yo body chopped up limbs in my baccyard, goin against dis rapstar will leave you nuthin but shame, and a bad re-cord/
so ima leave you wit one last tip, neva again oppose teknique or da loon-e-toon clicc/

fucc man i keep stoppin too short n shit......................>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>dam fucc it o well

its aight long as you got enough punch lines............................................. ..............

uppin for votes>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

yo i rekon damurderousone took this because i kinda hate long lines but ya both did but hay i was feeling his a bit more and he didnt have as longer lines u should try not to drag th line on. damurderousone had nyce punches but this was a pretty decent battle but not 1 i would hope to read often Aiight Peace (v)

Vote<->damurderousone

ooooooooook uppin for votes again dis is up #2 so i aint got many left where ol boy at he need to start uppin too.................................>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

uppin numer 1................................................. ...............'''''''''''''''''''''''

damurderousone came in with one hell of a intro and his flow was nonthing less but hell of a good job so if I could vote on this one it would have to go to damurderousone.

uppin uppin
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dats 3-0 cuz .................................................. .........................................

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uppin for votes...........betta checc how many i have left cant be fuccin around gettin dQ'D>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

i got 1 more up left cum on yall dont sleep on it wake up>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>><<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<

uppin for votes c'mon yall if u can vote please do it................................................ .................................................

DIS IS MY LAST UP DAM PLEAZ VOTE ON DIS BATTLE>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>uppin uppin uppin UPPIN

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murderous how many ups u got left????????????????????? u gotta use em bruh cuz im out of em so u gotta get to craccin>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

damurderousone won this due to harda hittin punches. U both need to work on eliminatin fillers. This will shorten ur lines.

vote= DAMURDEROUSONE

honest vote infinite, lets jus close dis bitch>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

u wanna just end it now it look like ima win yo................................................ ..................................

u cant jus end it its gotta get voted on>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=91941

sonufabitch i need 1 more vote on dat battle dammit, dis battle ill probly lose da otha one ima win jus need 1 dam vote any1 who votes dis shit vote da otha 1 too

there need to be a rule yo dat if u gotta 100 posts and is alowwed to vote u have to vote on atleast 3 battles everytime u come on,and 3 people said i won this battle but they dont have enough posts to vote yet i should really have won dis by now, cause its crazy how long it takes to complete battles

yea i know i feelz ya>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

first things first
fix yo mother fuckin structure
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2nd damurderess verse fuckin gay
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3rd teknique was better but weak
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4th you both need 2 step it up
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5th vote/ teknique fo now
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6th peep it
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7th this
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=91980
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fuck you ill eat u you little faggot step up or shut up................................................ ...

wow....good lookin out......i guess.......anyway we need more votes............................................. ................................

LOL MURDEROUS MAN LOOX LIKE YOU ALREADY GOT A COUPLA BATTLES LINED UP N GOIN ON I CANT GET ANOTHA DAM BATTLE CUZ IM ALREADY IN 2 DAT WONT FUCCIN CLOSE

ehh...murderous got this with better punches and wordplay...but...he also copied and pasted his verse..lol...tek had good vocab and flow....but i gotta say murderous got it just because of punches....nice battle from u both though...no hate...just a vote...

peace
4:20

coo coo good lookin out wit da votin dam lets keep getiin em people we gotta close dis one............................................... .................................................. .....................................

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how many upps u got left.............................................. ......................................

i cant up ANYMORE at all murderous......................................... .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................