lyrical vs tha franchise
 

you know the rule

no h c dr vote

explained votes

10 bars max..................

due by mid night my bad midnight detroit time to................................................ ...........................

damn the leangth has to be 100??? thats gay so how do i check in to a battle if i have to type a whole lot of shit to do so??? do you not have check ins here>?>?? sorry im new so dont try and go crazy on a brotha.. holla..

it dont matter if you check in i dont care just post up................................................ ........

no rapping off each others shit



Im like adam and eve but i was put on this earth to create raps/
this is ya first verse? without reading yo shit , you gonna collapse//
im so hot you need a thermometer to test~my~skill/
im a murder so i am aimming at the chest~to~kill//
you got about 1 hour 30 minets and 5 second till the outline~ya~chalk~line/
come towards me with ya bitch verses and youll met my nine~if~ya~nock~mine//
'everything' i do is 'obscene' you need 'caffenine' to stay up with me, cuz i will cut through ya heart and ya spleen/
always making a 'scean' you shit sukks i have 'forescean' it, im killing you and im only fourteen//
look now im down with nothing but my conclusion/
i aint spreewell but my words are excrution//

excrution- squeezing out by applying pressure

upping for your verse....,..,.,.,.,.,..,.......................... .................................................. ........................,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

Your "Content" Is just as "Hard" as "Pepsi" is Willing to bring to tha Public
You are "Rapbattles" "Bill-O'Reilly", An Old "Fart" that just Couldn’t "Cut-It" *
Ya like "Jayz" U Found out ya "Album" Hit tha "Streets" and Decided ud Better-Post-Fast **
But Letting "Fran" go "Last" is just Like a "Thumb-Tact" Thats Gonna "Nip" you in the "Ass"
Now I have reach "Biblical Heights" with all the "Flows" I Re-sight
Ill Show this "King-The-Light", Only way you "Part" me is if you were "Jesus Christ"
Let me give you some "Advice", in order to be "Nice" you need to stay off my "Dick-n-Balls"
Cuz Ill show you no "Respect" at all N Piss all over you like "High School" Stalls
Fran Will "Rip-n-Snap" this Kid like "New-Born-Twigs", the way I’m "Breakin" This Win
Im "Bendin" ya "Limbs", The way you Already "Dick Riding" me, You Keep ya "Knees" on Bend


* You know about the thing wit Luda and Pepsi
** Jayz droped his album early cuz it hit the streets..

holla uppin for votes..

Ok bolth of yall need to elivate serously but I think tha fransinse took this one barly but both of your verses did not make sence at times but anyways Peace

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=91698

hummmmmmmm well i guess thanks for the vote....... uppin................. [ yall vote like crazy here.. :-/ but thats good :D] holla..

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^dang.. battle fell off the first page in the first day.. uppin for votes.... plz vote guys

fran won this batlle he had better punches and better set ups. Good battle for a couple of newbies I say...

can you guys hit up this battle 4 me...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=91122

p.s. franchise don't put your verse in bold it's very "newbie-ish"

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thanks for the vote.. yeah ill not do that next time.. uppin for more votes..

first line bogus
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l.c.^
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ok rest was decent
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l.c.^
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you had some good flow but u lack creativity
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l.c.^
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=91980
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line 6, y u saying he is a king?
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t.f.^
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line 8 wack
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t.f.^
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rest was decent
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yo ima have 2 say that t.f. got this
but both flows were pretty weak
both need 2 be more complex
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vote/ t.f. fo now
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hit it up
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=91980
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Ill Show this "King-The-Light", as in "Jesus Christ
Names you must not have went to church...

And the line had shit to do with me bein a damn king.... but thanks for the vote.. just know something before you do it next time... holla.. I guess thats a KO... uno

upppin for more votes.. i didnt know you had to get 5 for it to go in your record.. holla .............................

^^Hey Fran, that looks curiously like a line from Noggah's "Battle of the Week" verse...hummm

will i ever get my 5 votes.. man .................................................. .............................

battle of the week verse?? what the fuck is you talkin about?? on RC?? last time I seen the great vet Noggah battle was in the tornaments.. and thats been some time.. and thats on RC if he is here.. and we had the same shit?? i dont know how in the fuck that happend.. cuz i did all that my damn self.. holla.

Flow=Lyrical
Structure = Lyrical ( Didnt like franchise bold )
Punches = Tie

Both need to elevate Bu Vote Goes To Lyrical


Peace

^^^^ that must have been your old name.. get the fuck out of here.. .....................................

HUH???******************************************** ************************************************** ************************************************** ************************************************** *************

^^^^^ by the time i UPPPED it.. and by the time you VOTED.. you couldnt have read both of ours.. thats how i know that VOTE was bull shit..

ah no faggit i got this link sumwhere else so shut the fuck up ************************************************** ************************************************** ************************************************** ****

lol sure you did.. lets battle then.. ill show you if I need to work on my skill.. lol
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im goinf with the franchise with better punches, structure, metas, closer and opener....but u guys need to elevate......nice drops by both of u guys tho

hit the battle in mysig

opener: franchise
flow: franchise
punches: franchise
personals: tie
wordplay: franchise
closer: franchise

Jacktheripherbs vs. debaser

opener: franchise
flow: franchise
punches: franchise
personals: tie
wordplay: franchise
closer: franchise
overall: franchise