RapVerse.com Community

RapVerse.com Community (http://community.rapverse.com/index.php)
-   Front Lines Battles (http://community.rapverse.com/forumdisplay.php?f=63)
-   -   1liner vs Jack N. Banks (http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=92234)

1liner 11-16-03 11:43 AM

1liner vs Jack N. Banks
 
you got 30 min to spit

10-15 bars if you need


holla back to fuckin hate vote or crew votes


g/l

1liner 11-16-03 12:06 PM

Jack-N-Banks thinks he (Grab-N-Ranks) //
Says he bust shots when he's really (Pack-N-Blanks)

for real ----looK as at you sig its MAN ----- its like penis----
its (Wack)/
i mean spell it out dawg----- (I MEAN IT ) (JESUS) you a (FAG)/
ya (ASS) is like a hotels on (SAD) its always (PACKED)<<<(saturday)
This aint a real man---- its a women --------------IN (DRAG)

this (CAT) thinkn he gone beat me cuz i'm (o-N-6)
if he (HAS) children i'm gunna (Own-His-Kids)--
with thoughts of (Hope-Less-Ness) after i (Explode-His-Ribs)
cuz this battle is (O-Ver-with)
ripp out his BRAIN and leave a message of PAIN
so he (Wont-Forget)

I.M.LEERY 11-16-03 12:24 PM

Blah, 10 Lines, Fuck Structure......


Man I Told This Kid He Was Whack, But All He Did Was Ignore Me
Why Should I Bother To Write About His Whackness, When His
..........Verses Do IT 4 Me!
Man We Know This Kid's A Homo, And He Like To Live His Life In Switch.
This Cat's The Reason Why People Say.....Life's A Bitch!
With Out A Hitch, I'll Kid This Cat Off The Ledge...
I'll Stab Him Wit A Sword S That He Cam Say He's Lived Life on The Edge!
1's Like a kid Wit No Legs Cuz He'll Never Be Able To Jump Over The Hurdle.
I'll Hit This Cat Wit Hard Shells Like Fightin Teenage Mutant Turtles!
Man This Kid Should Be A Commedian His Verse Was So Whack
.................That It's Funny.
I'm Killin You Dunny, If I Gave Him A Penny For Thought He Would
..................Owe Me Money!

Rap~Jesus~ 11-16-03 12:33 PM

damn weak battle but 1 liner won it cuz of his lunches and personals...............

vote 1liner

peace

1liner 11-16-03 12:35 PM

aight thanx to bad it dont count but holla back at cha boi
lol

nice verse JAck
hit me on aim if ya want
kreep101

KoNcEpT 11-16-03 12:42 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by Rap~Jesus~
damn weak battle but 1 liner won it cuz of his lunches and personals...............

vote 1liner

peace



.......................:noob:

Drop A Link And We'll Hit Ya Shit Up.....
pZ.

Rap~Jesus~ 11-16-03 12:48 PM

and u gonna hate vote eh nigga............................................. ....

.................................................. ........

peace

1liner 11-16-03 12:50 PM

vote dawg please dont clog the thread man

holla back and poll vote if ya want

pz................................................ .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ..........

An']['hropoLog¥ 11-16-03 12:52 PM

Vote: 1liner

better multies, awful structure, other kid had better similes, but i enjoyed 1liners more so.

1lier no beef bout the other battle, just hit this one up honestly and wee coo, peace iT

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=92061


Close battle

KoNcEpT 11-16-03 01:09 PM

^^^^^ = /

__________________________________________________ __
__________________________________________________ __
__________________________________________________ __

1liner 11-16-03 01:14 PM

stop cloggin dog
.................................................. ..........................vote or be gone .................................................. ...............................

Nexxt 11-16-03 01:26 PM

1liner had good multies, and more creative.
other guys verse didnt hit as hard, and had some played lines.
but it was kinda weak, but 1 liner gets muh vote.

Vote honestly>
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...15&pagenumber=2

1liner 11-16-03 01:27 PM

dog do me a fav and poll vote so we can clse this soo
.................................................. ..up...................................
thanx for the luv holla ..................................

DoperThanYou 11-16-03 01:28 PM

1liner took this... come harder

HIT THIS UP

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=91823

KoNcEpT 11-16-03 01:33 PM

This Is BullShit.....

All These Fuckin Newb's I Swear I'll Never Battle In Here Again....


Upz.....................

1liner 11-16-03 02:01 PM

nobodys gunna beg you to stay
adios mother fucker

nobody cares
.................................................. .................................................. ..........................

Brodie Rob 11-16-03 02:06 PM

wack battle.....but vote for 1 liner...he took punches and everything that matters....

hit me up with a vote
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=91981

You Vote Gay... Vote Gone.
-Axe

1liner 11-16-03 02:09 PM

thanx
ewll there u have it folks a KO
in the first round
aight i'll peep yall link now .................................................. .................................................. ............................................

TAG 11-16-03 02:12 PM

1liner took this.
Opener: 1
Closer: 1
Punches: 1
Personals: 1
Winner: 1

Hit this battle up with a vote please! http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=91314

executive 11-16-03 04:33 PM

ok both had very poor structure......and both were kind of basic but i think 1liner had a better vesre cuz of his use of words.....and i saw more clear punches.......both can elavate a lil.

late

Axiom 11-16-03 10:58 PM

Brodie Whatever's Vote Was Taken Away... He Had A Gay Explantion... But TAG And These Other Kids Needa Stop Votin On 1Liner's Battles... I Just Took Votes Away In Another Battle Of His.

Infinite Skillz 11-16-03 11:32 PM

Jack N. Banks (or whuteva his name is 2day) won this due to better flow, harda punches and better vocab.

vote= JACK N. BANKS

Vote on this honestly:

Infinite Skillz vs. QT-
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=92373

Jack N. Bank$ 11-17-03 08:14 AM

^ Up_______________-
_____________________
______________________
___________________ He is Still
Winning 4-0

aguhny 11-17-03 08:23 AM

battle was aight to tell you da truth now for da breakdown:

opener:jack
closer:lol jack
punches:1liner
meta's:no1
personal:1liner
overall:jack- his verse was easier to read and it was better all-round...

best punch(jack)i'm killin you dunny, if i gave you a penny for ya thought you would owe me money...lmao very nice

best punch(1liner) his first two lines was aight other than that he kinda fell off kna mean...

big ups to both emcees though holla

KoNcEpT 11-17-03 11:48 AM

Up--------------------------
------------------------------
-------------------------------
--------------------------------
---------------------------------

Chrit 11-19-03 12:30 AM

Jack takes this....

Better verse...
Overall...
Better punches etc..

Vote- Jack


Jack N. Bank$ 11-19-03 08:58 AM

Quote:
Originally posted by Chrit
Jack takes this....

Better verse...
Overall...
Better punches etc..

Vote- Jack





^^^^ Wurd Upz.

Yu Bin SunD 11-19-03 10:19 AM

Jack Got This No Doubt Funny Ass Verse And Setup Was Nice I Liked It Better No Personals But He still Got This My Vote~Jack~1

1liner 11-19-03 05:55 PM

fuck these votes ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^6you take away my votes cuz they got a gay explanation but you let thiss shit slide ^^^^^^^^^fuck that

Menik 11-19-03 06:14 PM

This was a alright battle..
Punches: 1
Flow: jack
Structure: both
Multies: 1
Vocab:both
Overall this was a alright battle but my Vote Goes To 1..Props to both..Vote: 1


All times are GMT -4. The time now is 01:50 PM.