DOGG Vs mista raedar
 

ite man 10 lines.
no d/r hate or crew votes.
both drop in 15 mins or before............................................ .......................gd luck ..........pz

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mista *raedar*, more like convicted rapist and a fucking kiddy *fealer*,
in this battle im the wellknown *leader*, so depressed after battleing he drank a bottle of *takeelar*,
your more hated than the forces and the *pigs*,
plus your as fake as Pamelas tits and bald people wearing *wigs*,
ive just exposed you more than girls on the porno *magazines*,
speaking of that, this should be x-rated for violence, cause im showing you what that *means*,
mista raedar to be honest your more like *masta bates*,
cause your wanking more than mr.kipling pumping cream into *cakes*,
so in the penoltemet bar^, i supose i just described you as a *toss*,
give a fuck man, wank on this another add to your *loss*.

bitch...........................pz

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=91823

Hit this us while your waiting and ill vote later

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no freeposting .................................................. .........^........................................ .............................pz

The dogg patrol's here and im about to take oli dogg to the dogg pound/
You just a retired circus entertainer like krusty the clown.
Oli don't want it with me under water,because i'm known to blast sea shells/
i'm like a hotter form of fire,because I pack more heat than hell/
I'm like spider man,because I sense bad rappers/
i clap wack MC's so you can just call me the OLI clapper/
If you blew off my arms I still aint losin my touch/
you like a little kid,to win it aint taking much/
you like a plain noun,your name don't deserve a capitol letter/
I knew this kid was wack as soon as i met her/(her)

lets get these votes in..fire
good battle dog.....
noow its all up to the votes..
good luck playa

GLOKK STARZZ

Vote: Oli Dogg

Better verse in every categorie cept flow, had many more multies also

Wack battle, peace out


Please hit up my battle with Planet X if u appreciate this honest vote..........its in frontlines near the etop

Vote Oli...
He had better everything.....flow punches and shit......just drop those stars kid....

hit me up with a vote...i took the time....http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=91981

WHY THE FUCK DO I KEEP LOSING AND WHY DO YALL GO FOR THOSE STUPID FORCES, AND PIG RHYMEZ ...FUCKIN HEYLL I SWEAR TOO GODD!

forget it

^da fuck man........?...................................... .................................................. ............pz

close battle. - mista had better flow and sum nice creativity. oli had better personals... but i felt sum of the lines fell flat.

vote would be mista if i could vote


best lines:

mista *raedar*, more like convicted rapist and a fucking kiddy *fealer

mista raedar to be honest your more like *masta bates

I knew this kid was wack as soon as i met her/(her)

Oli don't want it with me under water,because i'm known to blast sea shells

worst lines:
The dogg patrol's here and im about to take oli dogg to the dogg pound
^^too obvious

cause your wanking more than mr.kipling pumping cream into *cakes
^^^what?

Return the Favor on my Current Battles:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=92244

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=91441

OPener: DOGG
Closer: Raed
Punches: DOGG
Personals: DOGG
Flow: Raed
Winner: DOGG

Hit this battle up with a vote please! http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=91314

thx yall...............uppin(1)....................... .................................................. .........................pz

uppin(2).......................................... .................................................. ............................pz

lets get them votes in......
can sum 1 please vote for me lmfao
i need to stop losing
and stop battlin people with 10+ win ecords

u cnt ask pll 2 vote 4 u man.lol........................................... .................................................. ........pz

dog had better punches therfore he won in my opinion close battle
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...1723#post911723

they aint gonna obviosly..just a joke..hmm people is sleepin. lets just get these votes

GLOKK STARZZ

ite uppin(3)cmon...................................... .................................................. ..........pz

OLI obviously won this.
he didnt kill the other kid, just slightly better in everything...

yo OLI please give your input into these...thanks dogg...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...15&pagenumber=2

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...?threadid=91956

actually just the second one, i just one the battle thats the first link...thanks dogg please take a look its getting mad slept on......................

so depressed afta battling he drank a bottle of takeelar?
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wtf is takeelar, dont u mean takila, or how ever the fuck its spelled
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oli dogg^
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yer more hated than the forces & the pigs
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wtf was that?^
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plus yer a fake ass pamelas tits & bald people wearing wigs
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sorry man not feeling it^
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mista raedar 2 be honest yer more like masta bates
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again with using his name, not a very good diss anyways
people jerk off all the time, who gives a fuck?
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who the fuck is mr. kipling?
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penoltemet bar?
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i dont no man i saw a lot of wackness 2 this flow
ive seen way better shit from u
its like u didnt even consider that someone would break it down
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the rest of the flow i didnt mention was decent
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let me break down that other fools verse
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wateva man .................................................. .................................................. ..............................pz

uppin(4)cmon...................................... .................................................. ........................................pz

Dogg had better punches and creativity...Thats why he won in my opinion....

Vote on my battle against el veteranO....Thnx

the dog patrols here & im about 2 take oli dog 2 the dog pound
you just a retired circus intertainer like krusty the clown
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that made more sense than talking bout pigs^
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oli dont want it with me under water, cuz im known 2 blast seashells
i'm like a hotter form of fire, because i pack more heat then hell
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dont use his name 2 times, well better than comparing someone 2 a cake^
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i'm like spider man, because i sense bad rapppers
i clap wack mc's so u can just call me the oli clapper
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again with his name, decent lines though
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if u blew off my arms i still aint losing my touch
you like a little kid, to win it aint taking much
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decent, but aint is not a word? 2nd line dont make sense
y u saying that he is a little kid and its not taking him much 2 win?
think about it
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u like a plain noun, yer name dont deserve a capitol letter
i knew this kid was wack as soon as i met her
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decent, but dont use kid twice, instead of u like, say your like
u need to fix yer sructure and come much more harder
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oh yeah whats up with oli dogg using those *____*?
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vote/mista raedar for now
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look for my battles
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OPener: DOGG
Closer: Raed
Punches: DOGG
Personals: DOGG
Flow: Raed
Winner: DOGG...................................