Paradøx Vs. Young Smiff
 

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No Crew, Dick, Swayed, Bias, Hate, ect... Votes
U spit first
and most important, No Bullshit.

Ante Up Man...lol

Hitt his up http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=91314 I'll be back when yall spit

it s anotha hot six empty out a third of tha clip
he want sum he can get burned like bad pussy on dick
damn hes sick like a cancer victom
fist are dogs so he run when i holla sick'em
i'll counteract a pardox put him a bad spot
like a pass thrown 2 tha middle of tha feild and its cought.... hurt'em

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=91823

hit this up
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where u at homie............................................. ............
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My fault... wasn't look for you to post so soon... i was checkin out this kid that wants to know what pussy tastes like...lol

ok checkin...

^^TAG and DoperThanYou.. you are both not very smart....1 of them is a flyweight and another is new 2 rb so how can they vote on ya battle?^wack

and ill vote on this when paradox spits

ok check it

attention, herb clean up needed...
sound the buzzard, start tha timer, lets get it on...
ladies and gentlemen of rb, i'm here to explain how he's sonned...
"u can't beat the unbeatable", i'm glad you have the right mindframe...
i don't have to say that i'm sick, kuz it's already been exclaimed...
your battling me dogg, not complimenting, for that go to the cypher...
i got your ass fallowing my words like i was pide piper...

ok wanted to go over, but ya know....

Votes Now Accepted

the attention part isn't a line.....

just clearing that up......

peace................................

Newb Battle Like Usual not that either of you are herbs though

First off.......
Punches-Tie
Flow-Paradox
Structure-Paradox
Enjoyment-Neither

Best Bar of Battle
Paradox
your battling me dogg, not complimenting, for that go to the cypher...
i got your ass fallowing my words like i was pide piper...

Overall-Paradox

u guys keep elevating............................

Thanx... i know that was a weak ass verse, but it should do the job...lol
i was too busy laughing at that thread about "what pussy tastes like"....lol

Ok, More Votes....

sound the buzzard, start the timer, lets get it on
ladies & gentlemen of r.b., im here 2 explain how hes sonned
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this was wack^
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u cant beat the unbeatable, im glad u have the right mind frame
i dont have 2 say that i'm sick, cuz its already been exclaimed
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better, but im glad u have the right mind frame dont make sense
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yer battling me dog, not complamenting for that go 2 the cypher
i got ya ass following my words like i was pide piper?
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dont ever use pide piper. you dont need a comma after complamenting
kinda wack but average^
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ill be back
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Uppin for the 1st time


Lets get some votes............................................. ...................

it's another hot six empty out a third of the clip
he want some, he can get burned like a bad pussy on dik
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this was decent, but lacks creativity, & remember 2 use commas
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damn hes sick like a cancer victom
fist are dogs, so he run when i holla sick em
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decent but short, u need more wordplay
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i'll counteract a paradox put him a bad spot
like a pass thrown 2 the middle of the field & its caught
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1st line didnt make much sense^
decent, but as i said before it lackss a lot of stuff
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after seeing these 2 verses, which werent thought out very well
ima have to say
young smiff pulled it off
vote/y.s.
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yo people with 100 posts
check out my battles
names vs copy>that fool was feeding and c-section said i won
copy righted was banned so he dont deserve votes
names vs noabuse>1-0
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Glad he finally voted...lol, now can we get some votes here.........

don't let this be slept on........................................

iight...flow tie...punches...ties..wordplay..para..structure... tie...overall..paradox...VOTE: Paradox

Smiff-

it s anotha hot six empty out a third of tha clip
he want sum he can get burned like bad pussy on dick
no punch, choppy flo, weak and played meti4

damn hes sick like a cancer victom
fist are dogs so he run when i holla sick'em
played first line, gay second line, no punch

i'll counteract a pardox put him a bad spot
like a pass thrown 2 tha middle of tha feild and its cought.... hurt'em
miss'use of vocab, herb-movin on

total- 0.5/10
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Paradøx-

attention, herb clean up needed...
sound the buzzard, start tha timer, lets get it on...
queer, just str-up gay, lolz

ladies and gentlemen of rb, i'm here to explain how he's sonned...
"u can't beat the unbeatable", i'm glad you have the right mindframe..
i don't have to say that i'm sick, kuz it's already been exclaimed...
self hype, no punch, nothing...but crickets

your battling me dogg, not complimenting, for that go to the cypher...
i got your ass fallowing my words like i was pide piper...
OMG!!!!!!....the Pide Piper!, Lolz, whatta 8-mile wannabee Biter! How are u 2-0?!?!?!?!

total- 0/10

----------Wak Battle Vote Young Smiff-------------
its pretty bad when 1 weak meti4 wins u a battle-pc*1*-

well the attention part is not a line, if you read below it, i specified that and i wanna know who said that line in 8mile? foreal. LoL and i know this battle sucked...already been through that dawg!;) so you might want to take it easy...lol

Opener: Young
Closer: Paradox
Flow: Paradox
Personals: ?
Punches: Tie
Win: Paradox

Hit this up when yall can please http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=92298

I lead 2-1 lets get some votes to end this battle, kuz i got 2 other people to battle...lol Lets get some votes............Thanx

pardox won this with punches not very good battle i see elevation in your futures lol im a fortune teller
vote=pardox

Make that now 3-1

Uppin for the Win..... Lets get some votes............................
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4-1 Uppin for the Victory...........

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my vote goes to smiff. but of you are wack and need to elevate.

smiffs punches were played but atleast he had punches.

paradox 90% of your verse was talking about yourself, you had one punch and it was very gay. how do you expect to win battles when your talking about how good you are in everyline?

both of you need to elevate

^Ok... i lead 4-2 Last Up....

Need votes......................Lets End this Battle.................

alrite..paradox won
this was was a gay ass battle
hey could u please take a look at my battles
paradox look at ur pm im tryin to talk to u...

check it out...please...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...?threadid=91956