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Dek81 vs Tag
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Checkin in. Blind Spit?............................................. .................................................. .....
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yeah...blind cus i'm tired of now shows after goin first.
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little punk was bored n tried ta show up in a battle board
but he's going to end up being borred, while face down on floor boards dick on tag smaller than the bullets in my mag too easy to beat this fag...he posts rhymes sloppier than his rag i'll tag this bitch on a wall using paint laced alcahol lite a match n the letters burn like his bleedin assol watch his name fade in front of me till the ashes turn to mist hope Tag prepared ta meat the reaper for sum eternal necrosis cus this kids more useless than advertising pop-ups n with one click of ENTER i just nailed his coffin shut |
Hey yo, me and my clique got you trippin like a hippie sippin on liquor, flippin out like a faggot spasn and kickin like he wanna lickin when I spray you wit hot lead
Beat the shit outta you throw you in the street reverse the car over your head speed off leave you fo dead Fuck you bitch your illiterate in my rhymes have you sign and autrhorize to take a bullet from my 9 one time Cause thats all I need too get you to plead down on your hands and knees You say TAG please spare me I'm begging, I can't comprehend the words your saying Your like a strugglin offense agains Tampa Bay's defense Try ta come at me and nigga I'll Lynch your ass. (John Lynch Bucs LB) |
damn...how many chapters did that first line have....
lol, u would be watching the Bucs v Packers game on right now would u? haha neways...let's get sum votes |
Close battle i thought...punches...Dek81...flow dek81....creativity dek81...i felt his hit harder..Vote Dek81...no hate...pz
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Uppin (1) fo votes. Leave a link and it will be hit............................................... .................................................. ....
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Uppin again. Hit this shit up. Leave a link and it will be hit up................................................ .................................................. ...
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Uppin #3. Lets do this. Hit this up too http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=91314
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Opener: Tag (d's was wack)
Close: D Punches: Tie Structure: D Creativity: Tag Floh: Tie Meta4's: Tag barely Overall:TAG Vote: TAG straight battle.... |
i accually give this too TAG sum thing dek sed didnt make sense or was just dumb i give eveerything except flow to TAG
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ok here is my prop vote, cant poll vote but tryin to get there....
opener:dek closer": dek (tagz was good but didnt make sense, ....defense, lynch yo ass, doesnt flow) flow:dek punches: eeeeehh tie metas: dek creativity: dek dek gets my prop vote, tag was on point jus dek hit harda, i wanna go against wanna yall in a minute afta one of my battles closes http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=91941 need honestvotes...... |
I think Dek won this due to punches. They just overpowered TAG's verse. Good attempt TAG. Props to both of ya.
vote=DEK81 Hit this up wit an honest vote: Infinite Skillz vs. QT- http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...2913#post912913 |
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ye...re-read my lines n left out the word 'with' in my " using paint laced "with" alcahol" line neways...it still works, just not as good. |
Uppin dis. Vote and leave a link. We'll hit it up Peace .................................................. .............................................
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here's the dealio~
flow-dek structure-dek punches-pretty even creativity-tie mulies-tie i guess metas-tie i guess overall-dek even battle..props to both... peACE |
Punches: Tie
Flow: Dek Personal: Tie Overal Dek Vote Dek I took the time hit me up...http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=91975 |
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leave links i will respond. but maybe not till tomorrow cus i'm bout to log off. |
yer first & 2nd lines were not understandable in a sense of mind
_______________________________________________ dek^ _______________________________________________ 3rd and 4th no better _______________________________________________ dek^ _______________________________________________ 5th and 6th didnt make sense either _______________________________________________ dek^ _______________________________________________ 7th & 8th were yer best shit keep doing stuff like that its pretty hard hitting _______________________________________________ dek^ _______________________________________________ yer last lines were good 2 but y have only 4 lines that make sense? _______________________________________________ dek^ _______________________________________________ tags verse was kinda off the wall but made more sense and u need to improve yer structure _______________________________________________ the rest of tags verse was ok but kinda weak but do to deks wackness ima have 2 give this 2 tag _______________________________________________ vote/ tag fo now _______________________________________________ yo someone please check this out ok _______________________________________________ http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=91980 _______________________________________________ |
Dek took this with a lil better punchs thou not his best and the 1st line of the others guys was hella long. damn dawg there are things called sentances. anyways Vote Dek
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sorry forgot to put this
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=92396 ................................... |
hmm this was kinda close
but dek came wacker...lol tag, i see that you are elevating... but the next step for you is cleaning up your lines and makin em flow better and punch harder... vote tag - j six |
aite battle both was wack i liked deks vocabulary even though it's a battle homie you really need more punches tag was aite but stupid punches he was just talkin about killin him for no reason lmao that was herbish but vote is Dek ya both~elevate......feedback on my battle on sig ~1
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