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Dek81 11-16-03 05:33 PM

Dek81 vs Tag
 
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post 15 to 20 min after u check in.

TAG 11-16-03 05:37 PM

Checkin in. Blind Spit?............................................. .................................................. .....

Dek81 11-16-03 05:46 PM

yeah...blind cus i'm tired of now shows after goin first.
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i'll throw mine up in 8-10 min.

Dek81 11-16-03 05:56 PM

little punk was bored n tried ta show up in a battle board
but he's going to end up being borred, while face down on floor boards

dick on tag smaller than the bullets in my mag
too easy to beat this fag...he posts rhymes sloppier than his rag

i'll tag this bitch on a wall using paint laced alcahol
lite a match n the letters burn like his bleedin assol

watch his name fade in front of me till the ashes turn to mist
hope Tag prepared ta meat the reaper for sum eternal necrosis

cus this kids more useless than advertising pop-ups
n with one click of ENTER i just nailed his coffin shut

TAG 11-16-03 06:16 PM

Hey yo, me and my clique got you trippin like a hippie sippin on liquor, flippin out like a faggot spasn and kickin like he wanna lickin when I spray you wit hot lead

Beat the shit outta you throw you in the street reverse the car over your head speed off leave you fo dead

Fuck you bitch your illiterate in my rhymes
have you sign and autrhorize to take a bullet from my 9 one time

Cause thats all I need too get you to plead down on your hands and knees
You say TAG please spare me I'm begging, I can't comprehend the words your saying

Your like a strugglin offense agains Tampa Bay's defense
Try ta come at me and nigga I'll Lynch your ass. (John Lynch Bucs LB)

Dek81 11-16-03 06:26 PM

damn...how many chapters did that first line have....

lol, u would be watching the Bucs v Packers game on right now would u? haha

neways...let's get sum votes

rule 11-16-03 06:32 PM

Close battle i thought...punches...Dek81...flow dek81....creativity dek81...i felt his hit harder..Vote Dek81...no hate...pz

TAG 11-16-03 06:45 PM

Uppin (1) fo votes. Leave a link and it will be hit............................................... .................................................. ....

TAG 11-16-03 07:23 PM

Uppin again. Hit this shit up. Leave a link and it will be hit up................................................ .................................................. ...

TAG 11-16-03 08:03 PM

Uppin #3. Lets do this. Hit this up too http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=91314

Paradøx 11-16-03 08:26 PM

Opener: Tag (d's was wack)
Close: D
Punches: Tie
Structure: D
Creativity: Tag
Floh: Tie
Meta4's: Tag barely

Overall:TAG
Vote: TAG

straight battle....

mista raedar 11-16-03 09:43 PM

i accually give this too TAG sum thing dek sed didnt make sense or was just dumb i give eveerything except flow to TAG

Dek81 11-16-03 09:43 PM

up^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

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TEkNIQUE 11-16-03 09:52 PM

ok here is my prop vote, cant poll vote but tryin to get there....
opener:dek
closer": dek (tagz was good but didnt make sense, ....defense, lynch yo ass, doesnt flow)
flow:dek
punches: eeeeehh tie
metas: dek
creativity: dek

dek gets my prop vote, tag was on point jus dek hit harda, i wanna go against wanna yall in a minute afta one of my battles closes

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=91941

need honestvotes......

Infinite Skillz 11-16-03 10:11 PM

I think Dek won this due to punches. They just overpowered TAG's verse. Good attempt TAG. Props to both of ya.

vote=DEK81

Hit this up wit an honest vote:

Infinite Skillz vs. QT-
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...2913#post912913

Dek81 11-16-03 10:43 PM

up^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^


ye...re-read my lines n left out the word 'with' in my
" using paint laced "with" alcahol" line

neways...it still works, just not as good.

TAG 11-16-03 10:54 PM

Uppin dis. Vote and leave a link. We'll hit it up Peace .................................................. .............................................

Ace Of Spades 11-16-03 11:05 PM

here's the dealio~

flow-dek
structure-dek
punches-pretty even
creativity-tie
mulies-tie i guess
metas-tie i guess

overall-dek

even battle..props to both...

peACE

Brodie Rob 11-16-03 11:12 PM

Punches: Tie
Flow: Dek
Personal: Tie
Overal Dek

Vote Dek

I took the time hit me up...http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=91975

Dek81 11-17-03 12:26 AM

up................................................ .................................................. .................................................. .....

leave links i will respond. but maybe not till tomorrow cus i'm bout to log off.

nåmes 11-17-03 12:53 AM

yer first & 2nd lines were not understandable in a sense of mind
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dek^
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3rd and 4th no better
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dek^
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5th and 6th didnt make sense either
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dek^
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7th & 8th were yer best shit
keep doing stuff like that
its pretty hard hitting
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dek^
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yer last lines were good 2
but y have only 4 lines that make sense?
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dek^
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tags verse was kinda off the wall but made more sense
and u need to improve yer structure
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the rest of tags verse was ok but kinda weak
but do to deks wackness ima have 2 give this 2 tag
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vote/ tag fo now
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yo someone please check this out ok
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=91980
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Tha Duce 11-17-03 12:59 AM

Dek took this with a lil better punchs thou not his best and the 1st line of the others guys was hella long. damn dawg there are things called sentances. anyways Vote Dek

Tha Duce 11-17-03 01:02 AM

sorry forgot to put this

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=92396

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junio sixnine 11-17-03 04:06 PM

hmm this was kinda close
but dek came wacker...lol
tag, i see that you are elevating...
but the next step for you is cleaning up your lines and makin em flow better and punch harder...

vote tag
- j six

Yu Bin SunD 11-17-03 04:10 PM

aite battle both was wack i liked deks vocabulary even though it's a battle homie you really need more punches tag was aite but stupid punches he was just talkin about killin him for no reason lmao that was herbish but vote is Dek ya both~elevate......feedback on my battle on sig ~1


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