anyone??? vs Sublime D (jus post a verse and ill murder you)
 

battle 20 lines or less u spit first unless i do....accept in this thread

ignore this thread, or delete, it, i didnt see the new link to bitch slapped and i was confused on hwo to make a callout, don't ban me...jsu delete this

if u want your record to be 0-4...and for me to murder u again 5-0

ok....but not a 20 line limit.....12 max....

Just saw this....

I'm in...

Drop ya verse...
I'll follow when I get the chance

Chrit, only way you could spit fire, is if you swallowed gas and threw up on a lighter
better than me i think not, you gon drop your spot from the top, soon as i rock the mic and drop this deadly verse, your hearse is ready so get out your inane battles verses you've written already, elevated beyond description, don' have a conniption, because ur rhyming dictionary cancelled your subscription, Rb's ready for your eviction, don't petition for votes, cause im rippin you apart, like an atack on the right atrum of your heart, i feel it beatin faster, better go call in your pastor, and ask him what's waiting for you in the life after, i only see disaster for this veteran herb, for i am undetterred, by your record or our verse, thas why im spittin first, to let you feed off my words, givin u indigestion, hope you learned a lesson, cause u jus ate liek a sub at the delicatessan

My heads hurts from reading that.....

Keying now..

Why test the best... This kid aint won a battle yet... Who the fuck is Sublime D?
Cause ifs losing's a state of mind this kid made it an entire country....
So dont front G... its a proven fact... ya text is worthless...
Kids elevation is so lacking he barely scratches the surface...
You're merked bitch... Stab you in the eye, with ya own mic...
Never wanna hear you attempt audio when ya dont even do text right...
Not a fair fight... So when you get KO'd bitch dont protest...
Just take ya verse and recycle it... in an essay contest...



A quick key...
Good enough to destroy that stretched ass line shit, paragraph style battle...

Sublime D

Horrible structure but nice flo....some funny punches-but a very confusin piece here-

Chrit
Ya fed off his structure.....besides that it was a nice verse-seen better....dunno why u takin on a 0-4.....nice drop tho-

due to everything- my vote- Chrit

^^^
Kid set this up without me even knowing...
Then I found out about it...

And didnt feed at all..
Kid always has wack structure like that....

^^FiGurEd As MuCh............

PeOpLe ArE EiThEr DrEaMerZ Or StUpID.........
.......................CyPhILaIdS-.......................

chrit took this battle in every catagory.....................................

openng - chrit
flow- chrit
punches - chrit
structure - chrit
personals - chrit
closing - chrit
overall - chrit

Sub....sumthing jus got merked, i'd vote but i need 2 more
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^ Yep

LOL....wow chrit destroyed you, punches flow personals opener ender...yet vocab was a little better from sub but my vote...chrit

i can't vote yet but i'm wid Cyph
peace

Open- chrit
Metas - sublime
Creavitity - chrit
Personals - chrit
Flow - tie
Finish - chrit
Abuse - chrit

vote = chrit

first and last line showed sum creativity sub. but everything in between was a played concept.

My Battles:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=92417

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=92568

yo i typed wat i thought about this battle

take a look and vote mine yo peace


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...?threadid=92713

4-0

yeah yeah yeah we all know chrit took this.............sublime D why would you even call out some who has 81 wins..goin on 82 im guessing you were trying to prove a point.........wellll....you didn't chrit gets my vote