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.::Narcotics::. 11-16-03 08:04 PM

1linerVs MIc King
 
10-15lines max
no feedon
no recylin
drop in 25 minutes

1liner 11-16-03 08:26 PM

You this fag spits rhymes (thinkin-he-Jesus)
going againts me with lines is (Like Eatin a Fetus)
(I_Mean-This) Beat me????you be better off just (Beattin ya Penis)

Never knowin the outcome of what this (fight might bring)
you get beat by a (Anthropoligist) and still (think) you a (Mic King)
ya rhymes are waisted-like racist sayin its a (white thing)

these bitches in here really think i tryed before/
LMFAO at these bitches askin for my support

flabby ass bitch who hasn't seen his dick in years
in ya av you can see it next to his ears

cuz that aint a mic in ya hand its sombodys dick
think cuz he licks pricks his rhymes would be sick
you must swollow cuz we all know you don't spit

fuck this battle its over with

.Iknoevel. 11-16-03 08:34 PM

yo .... that was so pretty hot shit

good punches....nice personals......hot flow

overall - good rap

ill vote on this shit when mic king posts his verse

.::Narcotics::. 11-16-03 08:38 PM

aite....

Good luck? Bitch, don’t switch up your game//
Wished me luck cuz you were hoping I would wish you the same//
Cuz you know you’ll need it; all my scripts are great//
I don’t want you to get lucky and beat me, so I won’t reciprocate//
And luck strikes in strange ways; it’s due to happen//
Like in the form of my Gateway computer crashing//
I pack a pistol pen; you know my shit will win//
You should post with longer bars to fit more disses in//
I’m proving I am a menace; you’ll lose when I end this sentence//

You shouldn’t have spit, how much you going to risk? //
I got this kid all up in arms like a deodorant stick//
Kid don’t try to front, I’m the reason you fell//
I’ll kill you, then kill myself just to see you in hell//
There’s no stopping this, so what the fuck you hoping for? //
I rock cement shoes just to jog on the ocean floor//

-ElocuShun- 11-16-03 08:52 PM

breakdown=
punches=mic
flow=mic
sustainment=mic
structure=mic
metas=mic
overall=mic
easy win for him pz

TAG 11-16-03 08:56 PM

OPner: None
Closer: 1liner
Flow: Mic
Personals: Mic
Punches: Mic
Win: Mic

Can yall hit this up with a fair vote? http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=92298

1liner 11-16-03 08:58 PM

comon now Brix thats a D/r vote and i know it
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.Iknoevel. 11-16-03 08:59 PM

opening- mic
flow - both
punches - both
personals - 1liner
metas - mic
structure - both
closing - 1liner
overall - i think that this shit was a tie..just my opinion...

Explict 11-16-03 09:04 PM

nice battle but 1liner took it...

struc-1liner
punches-1liner
flow-mic
metas-1liner
vocab-1liner

1liner won this battle by punches..if it wasnt for his punches mic would of won..but then again whats a verse without a punch

Sublime D 11-16-03 09:05 PM

1liner had a couplegood disses, mic kign had a much better flow, much better delivery, all the way around a better rap...he lacked a lil bit behind 1l liner in hsi hardest dis...you must swollow cuz we all know you don't spit
that lien was hot but...I’ll kill you, then kill myself just to see you in hell//
that was hot, overall mic was better, he won this shit..sorry kid

.Iknoevel. 11-16-03 09:06 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by EnVy SKiLLZ
opening- mic
flow - both
punches - both
personals - 1liner
metas - mic
structure - both
closing - 1liner
overall - i think that this shit was a tie..just my opinion...


yo i read the shit over again since it was so close and change my vote.... 1liner won this battle, not by much, but he won....

1liner 11-16-03 09:22 PM

uppin this piece we need closure .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ..........

.::Narcotics::. 11-16-03 09:22 PM

u voting for envy then him chagning his vote an VOTING FOR u
uhh thats not dik rydin
its D/r to the fullest
herbssssssss
why cant u get h onets votessssssssssssssss

Paradøx 11-16-03 09:25 PM

I think this was a onesided battle, Mic took all of it............

punches, creativity, floh, structure...all of it went to Mic

Vote: Mic

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...83&pagenumber=2
Drop a vote here...

1liner 11-16-03 09:27 PM

that was a honest fuckin vote i don't d/r and i ask noone to do it for me
but when 4-5 peeps say it was close and then some dude pops up and post a merking you gotta admit if peeps came in here a said i merked you than what the fuck would you say
i aint beefin dawg i just like my shit done respectdly
na i mean

Menik 11-16-03 09:31 PM

This was a pretty good battle..
Punches: 1
Flow: Mic
Structure: Tie
Personals: 1
Metas: 1
Overall it was a good battle but i think 1 took this one, props to both though...Vote: 1liner

An']['hropoLog¥ 11-16-03 09:33 PM

Similies: Liner
Flow: Mic
Structure: Mic
Punches: Liner
Vocab: Liner
Vote: Liner

This is not a hate vote, this was very close, and Mic Ive seen much better from you

.::Narcotics::. 11-16-03 09:38 PM

Fuk that kid........^^^^^^^^^^^ u jsut got done talkin shit in the otehr thread....dont ever vote in my shit again u fagat..ass DIK rydin homo


HATE VOTE>>>>>.u no it is..get ittakin off or banned again

1liner 11-16-03 09:40 PM

damn yous a fuckin little whinny bitch
take the loss man how can this many peeople say its this close
and
cuz if thats gotta go than brixs batle has got to go cuz that dude aint ever peep wanna my battle but all the sudden he vote cuz u in it

.::Narcotics::. 11-16-03 09:40 PM

R U Fukin serious............
wow u didnt even read my shit did u..
WOW
damn kids talk about rydin rik...to the fullest

Dimez 11-16-03 09:43 PM

1liner
You this fag spits rhymes (thinkin-he-Jesus)
going againts me with lines is (Like Eatin a Fetus)
(I_Mean-This) Beat me????you be better off just (Beattin ya Penis)
^^^ u actually explain what you mean

Never knowin the outcome of what this (fight might bring)
you get beat by a (Anthropoligist) and still (think) you a (Mic King)
ya rhymes are waisted-like racist sayin its a (white thing)
^ ugh please i hate brackets u need mad work son

these bitches in here really think i tryed before/
LMFAO at these bitches askin for my support
^ u actually used LMFAO? thats too funny

flabby ass bitch who hasn't seen his dick in years
in ya av you can see it next to his ears
^ flabby? nice vocab LMAO

cuz that aint a mic in ya hand its sombodys dick
think cuz he licks pricks his rhymes would be sick
you must swollow cuz we all know you don't spit
^ that was a f*cked up flow LOL


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king

1st thing i gotta say is get rid of these // < - - looks ugly

Good luck? Bitch, don’t switch up your game//
Wished me luck cuz you were hoping I would wish you the same//
^ good

Cuz you know you’ll need it; all my scripts are great//
I don’t want you to get lucky and beat me, so I won’t reciprocate//
^ good multis there

And luck strikes in strange ways; it’s due to happen//
Like in the form of my Gateway computer crashing//
^ i like i like

I pack a pistol pen; you know my shit will win//
You should post with longer bars to fit more disses in//
I’m proving I am a menace; you’ll lose when I end this sentence//
^ F*cked up flow right thur

but anyways... thats a wrap


im feelin kings verse more cuz it was more harsh LoL

and had more things in it


vote-mic king

TEkNIQUE 11-16-03 09:43 PM

[QUOTE]Originally posted by Paradøx
[B]I think this was a onesided battle, Mic took all of it............

punches, creativity, floh, structure...all of it went to Mic

Vote: Mic

cant poll vote but he gets my prop vote...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=91941

need sum honest votes yall.......

.::Narcotics::. 11-16-03 09:47 PM

ENVy voted for u cuz u voted for him bitch so stfu
uppin tro get this closeddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd dddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd dddddd

Baron Mynd 11-16-03 09:49 PM

I think Mic took this one, kid just had waaaaaaaaaay better concepts, other guy had flow and multi's but they dont really count in a battle, its all about wordplay / puinches and personals and Mic came off better.

Vote: Mic


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