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LM vs Funn DementaLL
Any length verse
No d/r and all that Votes must be explained Here's my verse which I copied and pasted from the thred which was set up wrong. This herb couldnt battle if he was a tank/ Shootin harmless punches just to prove that he's wank/ He's still at lightweight rank, tryin to prove himself/ Why you battlin me damagin your health/ I'm skill was wealth then you in poverty/ Scrapin for food and your grovellin to me/ Oh shit you are in poverty...thats what happens when you live in Hackney/ (biography-profile) Are you at the top of your game, coz your gon' have to be/ Just to get one vote against me, you have to bribe the voters/ Then go and find a hundred four leaf clovers/ Sorry if I've gon over the limit...I didnt know the rules, fuck it I aint sayin game over/ No not yet, I'm a carry on spitten...makin a mockery out of all your pre-writtens/ I'm sayin you should quit...bitch listen/ You've failed this mission...thought you could win a battle when really you were wishin/ If we were in audio I'd merk you with the sound of me pissin...dawg your whack/ You came into this battle but died...next time bring a survival pack to make up for the skills which you lack/. I didnt know any of the rules so I did any length verse. I guess the other rules are just no d/r and all that. All votes must be explained Good luck |
Shit, I swaer I posted my verse but I accidently clicked Reset forum next to submit reply... sorry its gonna take me longer to post coz I gotta start from scratch... gimme an hour!!! peace
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I'm skill was wealth then you in poverty
^^^Lack of concentration. I was meant to say 'If skill is wealth then...' My bad |
Ok, I'm well known for (L)ossening (M)inds/
all dem dam posts an not one decent line/ the easy target, (L)ackin' (M)inerals/ see you lookin' through my spitted bars, like convicted criminals/ I'm-hard-to-the-core, like the earths suface/ Let me tell you, the biggest mistake was havin' my name after verses/ stain your mind wit evil thoughts an voodoo curses/ Rap knowing you wack, my reign... you can't hurt dis/ I'ma make sure only you see through my hidden identidy/ You ain't never gonna make it doug, it jus never was meant to be/ Runn up, jackin' lower motives (LM), you won't even keep ya secrets/ Taking away all hopes an belifes, wha you gonna tell jesus/ sooo supriour, My mature flow makes yours look like a fetus/ late again LEE, laugh while you get cained by your teachers/ everybody put hands in pockets when I say LM/ coz I want you're (L)unch (M)oney, or "say hello to my lil friend/ You're broken, like the promise to you're land/ you need to mend/ Can you believe you're over, an it's still not the end/ coz you need a fix like crack heads, they open off the shit I be sellin' em/ You can't kill me, nigga I'ma be here next millenium/ what's said is said... Funn out |
Votin on the side of trhe lord????????????
I donnit know......... Vote: Funn Dem Better quality verse, better punches (ie/personal, dissin name etc), although LM came strrong I feel LM's flow let him down in this Hit this up.... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=90792 Its below yours on frontlines anyway |
soz, i clicked on the wrong name...............................could a mod sort this out,.............................................. ................................
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Uppin for votes (1)............................................... ............................
Funn....let the mods know bout your vote if you want it!!! Peace!!! |
Nok'd Vizion
Poll fixed, I put you as voting for Funn .................................................. ......... .................................................. .......... |
When will we know who won... surely I can't win from dat one vote... come on, cats be viewin' an not replying... I wanna battle record.... (uppin' #2)
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^^^You've only upped once. Why'd ya put two............................................... .......................................
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Uppin for votes (2)............................................... ............................
Peace!!! |
Uppin for votes (3)............................................... ............................
Peace!!! |
Uppin for votes, I need dis record win or loose
uppppppppppppppppppppppiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnn nnnnnn (for sum reason I need to post 100 characters) sooooo 2222222 ttthhhhaaa top |
^^^You put two m's in coming. Sorry for the freepost.......................................... ..................
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opener:fun
closer:LM wordplay:Tie structure:Fun punches:Fun overall:Funn damental LM you need to fix you structure, and stop using so many english words like wank use summert that every one might use in their vocab. Fun nice drop man. |
Thanks for votin....I know I got owned. Funn....you deserve this win dawg..................................
Peace!!! |
It's all good, we should battlein again in the near future!!!
We both got the topical talent of Rap elevated so lets collabo on open mic, ...................... peace (still uppin' for votes (#3) |
Still uppin' an when am I gonna get my win really need 3 more votes (#4) .................................................. ...............................
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funn took this, better punches,flo, and plus LM said he got owned so he doesnt deserve anyones vote
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...ighlight=severe |
This is the last time I can uppin' dis battle... please don't make me start postin' mad links to dis room to get my 1 last vote....
Uppin #5 my last time says Funn In worry...................... |
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LM: that was aight, tha flow was off an tha hits were simple though, fix tha flow an come harder...
F: that came off real well, i liked it a lot...tha hits were there n wat not (some lines had no hits though, work on it)... good battle for two Lyrical Murder members, keep it up winner: funn |
PLEASE VOTE ON MY BATTLE FOR ME VOTING HERE!
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=93272 === LM- - ROFL he's a wank line was funny - middle was kinda soft... flow is gettin off - not bad flow on the ending... but you could have done better - work on ya structure a bit... Funn DementaLL- - okay opener... - middle is kinda week... where are the punches? lol - rhyme scheme is good... but they are week punches - kinda week ending too this is gonna be hard to vote for... i gotta go with LM for his opener line. that was the best line in the battle. |
Yea gotta give it up to Fundamental he took dat one it was a good one
iight!! vote: Fundamental |
Lm~Vocab Was Nice But Didn't Really Have Good Punches And Sentences Were To Long To Read
Funn~Liked His Verse Had Some PLayed Out Shit But His FLow Overall Was Hotter No Doubt Vote~Funn |
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