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pine-cone vs this mofo aint playin
yo daug, i gotta get some more posts and practice so i figured i'd battle you, your about my level, 5-15 lines 15 mins to write after check in, norm rules
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yea ok dawg i will but i hope that someone doesn't shut this battle down again!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i think that we know who did it last time i pm'd him an asked him to put it back on there |
so ok you think you ready for mattle like MIKE tyson,
but your just plain old mike morgan/1 but i'll take you on if you really want to fight son, after were done you'll be too sore to play with your organ/2 like a soldiers shadow i'm ready for battle, and in a pinch i'll help you out, just like jessica linch/3 there is too much flame in this gome, dont let it conspire, that lil flame is all thats keepin you from canadian tire/4 oh and i dont have a sister, adn its my dads bed, so you must mean your in his bed, givin my bro the lead/5 all talk like elton john, talkin about gay shit all day long, and like a virus, askin guys, " hey try this"/6 your lines are of contruction worse than midget, meant to be awesome, but still come up short/7 your vision i will distort, while i'm beating you on the court, stuffin your face worse than a fat man with cake/8 this is not fake, so get ready to battle, i'm leaving you in a lake of words, with no paddle/9 |
yo my bad, i forgot to check in, shit sorry man..........
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yo mofo, you comming or what, this poll only lasts 4 days. hurry.
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yo mofo where the fuck are you nukka?.,...........
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ok, mofo you had better write back next period in comp applications, i'm getting tired of waiting
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pine cone your verse is wack, ha ha nice come back/
you are weak you call that a rap attack?, for this rap you better stay on track//-1 bitch you better back off before i give you a smack, that lil bitch better call afflack/ hittin a bear that just be another flashback, for this shit it be confidence that you lack//-2 you try to hang from that rope but it be slack, so just face the fact/ break your spine and hear it crack, and this just be the way you act//-3 you just grab your balls and play twister, setting there flirting with your slut sister/ trying to finger her but you fist her, she think you be someone but she be screaming "mister"//-4 she trys to stop moanin, but you still be bonein/ make her cum and then she be groanin, and for you that shit just be happenin//-5 |
vote on this shit people. tell me what ya think?...............................
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nice triple, but i dont have a sister, it laged a lil in my oppinion cause it had no real topic, but good none the less, let the vote begin. uppin (1),,,.........
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come on people, vote, uppin (2).............
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is any one in here going to vote on this battle? come on hit this up!!!!! man this is gonna take for ever so i'm gonna up for the first time on this battle.
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uppin(3). come on people, vote.............
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vote for ducks sake uppin(4)
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nah mate! both weak, mofo won! i no i cnt vote but atleast uve got a free uppin.ite .................................................. ...........................................pz
DaN+B+Nas |
no freepoasting please..................
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uppin (5), this is my last uppin so people, vote!!!!!...........
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flow=tie (wasnt great)
punches= pine (both lacked) structure= tie vocab= tie overal=pine if ne of ya wanna battle holla hit this up wiht an honest vote!!!!!! http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=92962 |
lol ok i give thise to pine-cone, but dayum this was wack i know yall can do better than that...but its all good good battle
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well this battle was close but one has to win right......
well Mofo a bit better overall vote on this http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=92686 |
Open- mofo
Metas - mofo Creavitity - tie Personals - mofo Flow - pine Finish - pine Abuse - mofo vote = mofo Yo I voted.....now return the favor on my battles: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=92417 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=92568 |
thanks for the votes, but its a tie, we need more, we will try to get some votes on your battles as well, thanks.
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opener:Tie
closer:Pine wordplay:Tie structure:Pine punches:Tie overall:Pine pine just edged this one, if mofo hadnt, in his closer used a played line then this might of been a different story. also mofo ur structure needs a lil work , ur lines were stretched at time. Pine u need to land harder hitting punches, the ideas were there jus not the wordplay. aiight i tookt the time to hit this battle, with an explanation, break down and a honest vote. please hit the battle in my sig up with an honest vote. aiight peace |
OPener: Pine
Closer: = Flow: Pine Punches: = Personals: mofo Win: Pine Hit this up with an honest vote please http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=93014 |
thanks for the votes, and yeh i'll work on my punches, thanks i'll try to get around to voteing on your battles. thanks......
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your the same person............................................ .
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whos the same person? do you mean about the number for mine and this mofo aint plkayin, thats the same because we both use the school computers and they are on the same network, we are dif people, just go to the same school................ there is your explanation.
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Re: pine-cone vs this mofo aint playin
man what is up with you man thou might be a Middle Weight
and i might be a new commer but I now I can beat your ass so start runnin |
no freeposting please, if you want to chalenge me, then set one up and pm me for the battle..... ..............
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then come on pine cone im ready to ready to flow
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i hate to give someone who is so wack a win, but pine cone won this battle, both of you need to elevate your punches are weak and dont hit hard, they dont hit at all.
neither one of you ahd any quotables. vote pine cone |
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