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Gangsta
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Beat was unique. I liked the chorus 'We Gangsta'.
Must have been my head phones or speakers because everything sounded low, however I did hear the lyrics you two spit and it was nice. Everything was pretty good, 8/10 Laters... |
^i agree that some of it sounded low.. some of the vocals anyway. Homicide.. your vocals especially sounded like they were low. *shrugs*
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ite.... thanx for da feedback.... still uppin
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yeah yeah uppin this
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lmao you think you me and syntax mastery ???
peep real music at www.soundclick.com/homicidalthoughtz |
umm. lol at you givin this 8/10. im not a big fan of studio gangstas. yall not real with the rap so you will always be limited. the only advice i can give you is be yourself. i live in South Los Angeles. and i know what the hood like... and can tell none of you two have any street knowledge.....
start bein real Pz. |
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get the fuck out you don't know me or cide so back the fuck up off the shit aiight uppin for some real crits |
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ok....beat was pretty good...i agree with Post on the whole don't like the Gangsta scene....hook was decent...just not really placed in the right spot i guess...it seemed like some of ur verses would come out of nowhere in the beat...which kinda fucks with ur flow...and i also agree with Bio and Twizted on the sound thing...but it only done it with Syn's verses...Homicide's came through fine...but u need to run it through a filter...cuz ur "P's" and "F's" were heard clearly if u know what i mean...and Pay.....ur voice sounded like it was kinda distant in ur verse....speak up a lil' louder...or it sounded like u was turning ur head away from the mic.... Overall - the beat was ok....the lyrics that i heard were good...Homicide..u need to go up and get the lyrics for this song and edit them into ur first post......the hook was good....but u both need to work on ur delivery with the flow.... Rating: 7/10 peace 4:20 |
well dude it was spur of the moment...lol we got two more so far we comin out with so be prepared...
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it was koo. -but adjust tha sound when you rappin'. (a lil more louder an' clearer)
much respect |
WE all know alcaTrakz gives harsh honest critique
"we pop our collar..." HOW do you spit like 4 bars off beat? didnt think it was possible wtf is this?....1988? the beat, the delivery, the flow reminds me of some 1988 shit....get off that tip please... first cat is on beat i guess....but its not hard to rhyme on beat when the beat is about 60 bpm second cat... NOT ON BEAT the beat is there for a reason.....seems like the transfer from text to audio is gonna be hard for someone.....SYntext...hint hint... um thats my honest opinion fellas... 1 |
and HOW THE FUCK does numbnuts give this a 7/10
jesus... kids...go post this at RM or UGHH or AudioHolics see what they have to say this site is SO soft damn...if this is a 7/10 then....wow.... 1 |
^^....umm..u said 1st kat was on beat...then u said Syntext would have a hard time....the first kat was Syn...and i give loose ratings....meaning i'm not hard on audioheads...esp. if this is close to their first one ever done....can't expect perfection...don't bitch about everything....
peace 4:20 |
your right..im sorry i dont know syntext's voice by now..i am in his fan club...
fuck outta here u want me to RUB their balls? the audio wasnt good..first time or not...im gonna say it straight up if I DONT..no one will and then they will never elevate... get off the dick train 1 |
^^thas word to alCa...an im really not up for that 'gangsta' rap stuff even if i am loC...well sinCe yall are startin to rap, i guess this is an ok attempt, but you guys still need elevatin
syn: gettin better Compared than ure last audios homoCide187: i bKno anutha underground rapper by this name an he's pretty good....but w/e...yea ure not on beat at all...really obvious...is this ure first traCC??? yea those are my thoughts...you wanted honest feedbaCC, so here...well aiights fam...bKeep doin shit an elevate an youll get there...dont let Comments like these hinder ure desire to rap....let it motivate.... 6host |
beat was lame especially the bassline...lyrics sucked...flow was off throughout the track...second guy was totally off beat (voice was distorted as well...sounded like you were talking into a pillow). Work on consistency in delivery, vocal quality, and flow most of all.
realistic rating: 3/10 *EDIT* I bumped rating from 2/10 to 3/10... |
wtf
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i ain hatin
but this shit sounded like garbage no offense chorus was wack cuz U aint Gangster for 1 and if you (THINK)you are then u livin in the mean streets of london or sumthin nobody rode the beat 2-10 1 point for effort other for actually doin a audio but other than that nothin |
the first verse was tight, whoever that was and the rest was just eehhh, OK, second verse started off really off beat then got on and was cool but that made the verse overall just OK. I like the beat that was tight shit. White boys talkin' shit...haha i had ta laugh. sounds like you tryin too hard callin' yerself homicide187, how many kills you got on the streets? haha, but do ya thang if you really bangin'!
Overall-this drop was ok, could have been much tighter cause i see some skill here, but levels need adjustment and the flow needs to be tightened up. Feedback on: "Finishin' Moves" in the song forum (it's on page 1 or 2). Get back and Feedback! |
thanks for actually all the crits shut this shit down
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ok beat is iight...the bassline is pretty gay tho lol....
syntext sounds better than last time...still not really..."good"...riding the beat tho...u need to work on ur delivery tho...sounds like ur kinda gettin nervous or somethin... Chorus...is too just...iono doesn't have ne emotion Homicide is just offbeat..u didn't write or rap this to the beat did u? and it sounds like syntext just mixed it together without even fixing the volume...atleast I think syn mixed it.... the way I see it...homicide had a good verse but it woulda been better if it wasn't over a beat...syntext's verse was only good b/c it rode the beat and sounded more matched to the beat with the volume.... u have room for improvement...definately...but it's not like..worthy of a 2/10 score..that's kinda harsh..I'd give it a 6/10...so if this was a test you failed, but atleast you almost got it...keep tryin n work on the things I pointed out...if homicide had been on beat this woulda beena 7/10 instead...keep that in mind... peace |
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