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Evolve 11-18-03 09:16 AM

[M W Match] Dimense VS Chrit
 
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Check In Due: Wednesday 11-19-03
Verses Due: Friday 11-21-03
Voting Ends: Sunday 11-23-03

Good Luck & Give A Fuck Or I Will Fuck You Up!!!!!!!!

Chrit 11-18-03 09:30 AM

In...
10...

Get this done early

Dimense 11-18-03 03:34 PM

Ok..

Chrit 11-18-03 03:37 PM

Son, I fathered ya style.. and even your mother loves me...
This kid only sees Chrit.. when I get weekend custody...
Quick to give dimense his first loss... But from my alias he already had one...
And fuck a step ahead of Dimense... Try a whole damned marathon...
How you got a shot? It seems like ya constantly losing...
Only time Dimense's the best... is in the midst of confusion...
Dimense is the blueprint of wackness... Watch as I destroy his plans...
A style that weak should be deemed illegal... Like Divinitys' web cam...
Scared to death... Dimense brings new meaning to internet leaks...
Another poser disposed of.... Hey Evolve...
...How bout a challenge next week?

Dimense 11-18-03 06:53 PM

I Thought u meant like Tommorow... I'll key righ Now

Dimense 11-18-03 07:15 PM

Ya Under n alias u beat me.. only cuz u needed 10 ppl to help..
U keep changing sn's ..Still.. cant make a Name for Yourself..?
So he Bites on HHD..claimin switch’d styles.. quit clingin to Fables..
Chrits Kinda like Goldie Locks..
Cuz he’s Stealin every thing I bring to the Table..
Ur like bulletproof glass.. Actin hard but chrits see Thru
with Audios so wack..that even the Mic Spits back at You..
Its sad but Tru^..even Begg’d Orgin Ill for a crew Spot..
U Legendary?..How
Ya Cd couldn’t even get over 18 Sales at a Porn Shop….
Ur not Black or White?..like johnson..ur a Race Reject..
Savor this Las Breath
Cuz..Ill make u allergic to Oxygen..n watch u Breathe to Death


*Cryptic Thoughts is 11 people

13th Disciple 11-18-03 08:34 PM

Son, I fathered ya style.. and even your mother loves me...
This kid only sees Chrit.. when I get weekend custody...
nice setup followed wit good punch and wordplay 7/10
Quick to give dimense his first loss... But from my alias he already had one...
And fuck a step ahead of Dimense... Try a whole damned marathon...
personal setup..again good punch & wordplay 7/10
How you got a shot? It seems like ya constantly losing...
Only time Dimense's the best... is in the midst of confusion...
setup is personal + good wordplay in ur punch 8/10
Dimense is the blueprint of wackness... Watch as I destroy his plans...
A style that weak should be deemed illegal... Like Divinitys' web cam...
decent setup & nice ass punch...9/10
Scared to death... Dimense brings new meaning to internet leaks...
Another poser disposed of.... Hey Evolve...
...How bout a challenge next week?
decent finisher 7/10



Ya Under n alias u beat me.. only cuz u needed 10 ppl to help..
U keep changing sn's ..Still.. cant make a Name for Yourself..?
fed setup but nice wordplay in punch 5/10 cuz of fed
So he Bites on HHD..claimin switch’d styles.. quit clingin to Fables..
Chrits Kinda like Goldie Locks..
Cuz he’s Stealin every thing I bring to the Table..
good punch...u was goin for personals but it didn't work cuz
none of em are true 6/10

Ur like bulletproof glass.. Actin hard but chrits see Thru
with Audios so wack..that even the Mic Spits back at You..
good setup...nice nice personal punch 9/10
Its sad but Tru^..even Begg’d Orgin Ill for a crew Spot..
U Legendary?..How
Ya Cd couldn’t even get over 18 Sales at a Porn Shop….
setup was better than the punch... 6/10
Ur not Black or White?..like johnson..ur a Race Reject..
Savor this Las Breath
Cuz..Ill make u allergic to Oxygen..n watch u Breathe to Death
good closer... 8/10


chrit: 38/50
Dimense: 34/50


there it is...i voted this way...cuz yall are bickering about swaying
and blah blah blah....i come fair....enough said....if nobody agrees
wit this.....
















EAT A DICK!

phiXion 11-18-03 10:26 PM

My vote goes to Dimense...It seemed as if Chrit didn't really come hard as usual..his finisher was weak as fuck, I don't know why 13th liked it..but whatever..Dimense's finisher was dope to me, really felt that..both had decent puns and Chrit had more wordplay, Dimense also had better personals..

So my vote goes to Dimense...peace and nice battle from both sides.

Aisle Phive 11-18-03 10:30 PM

I Couldn't Dissagree More^

Dimense Came Dope... Chrit Came Good. Dope>Good.

Quotables:

Quick to give dimense his first loss... But from my alias he already had one...
And fuck a step ahead of Dimense... Try a whole damned marathon...

Ur like bulletproof glass.. Actin hard but chrits see Thru
with Audios so wack..that even the Mic Spits back at You..

I Signed Out Last Week... And Signed Back In.. Reguardless This Vote Counts...

And Dimense I'll Write A Verse Up Tomorrow And Send It To You Via PM For The Tag Tourney.

Token 11-18-03 10:33 PM

I Agree with Phixion
I thought dimense's punches hit a lot harder.
It was a good battle though. Both of you are dope.
Chrit... Thought you would come harder
Dimense... You came harder than i thought

Harder Punches- Dimense

Vote- Dimense

Nu Lecture 11-19-03 03:38 AM

Dimense got beat.

You both had the same about of good punches but the feeding did throw you backwards in my view D. Thats the only downfall that and Chrit had slight better flow.

Vote- Chrit

Evolve 11-19-03 08:11 AM

3-2 Dimense.... Stop Fucking Beefing In The Threads...
Not Only Does It Sway Votes.. It Makes You Both Seem Like Cry
Babies

Jack N. Bank$ 11-19-03 08:22 AM

Chrit Wins.

It Was A Pretty Even battle both came decent
nice punches that hit hard but D's flow was off
which made some off his puches less effectives
as Chrit.

Chrit 11-19-03 10:45 AM

3-3

Walter Wall 11-19-03 01:37 PM

<--------------always votes fair, so don't anyone suggest otherwise

Chrit's Verse
Son, I fathered ya style.. and even your mother loves me...
This kid only sees Chrit.. when I get weekend custody...
9/10...lol, dope punch
Quick to give dimense his first loss... But from my alias he already had one...
And fuck a step ahead of Dimense... Try a whole damned marathon...
7/10....good, but somewhat played
How you got a shot? It seems like ya constantly losing...
Only time Dimense's the best... is in the midst of confusion...
6/10....weak setup and ok punch
Dimense is the blueprint of wackness... Watch as I destroy his plans...
A style that weak should be deemed illegal... Like Divinitys' web cam...
6/10...first you said you fathered his style and now ure sayin it's wack....ok punch
Scared to death... Dimense brings new meaning to internet leaks...
Another poser disposed of.... Hey Evolve...
...How bout a challenge next week?
5/10...weak finisher

Chrit=33/50

Dimense's Verse

Ya Under n alias u beat me.. only cuz u needed 10 ppl to help..
U keep changing sn's ..Still.. cant make a Name for Yourself..?
8/10...dope punch and this wasn't necessarily fed (would've worked regardless)
So he Bites on HHD..claimin switch’d styles.. quit clingin to Fables..
Chrits Kinda like Goldie Locks..
Cuz he’s Stealin every thing I bring to the Table..
7/10...nice wordplay
Ur like bulletproof glass.. Actin hard but chrits see Thru
with Audios so wack..that even the Mic Spits back at You..
8/10...funny shit
Its sad but Tru^..even Begg’d Orgin Ill for a crew Spot..
U Legendary?..How
Ya Cd couldn’t even get over 18 Sales at a Porn Shop….
7/10...nice concept, could of been worded better
Ur not Black or White?..like johnson..ur a Race Reject..
Savor this Las Breath
Cuz..Ill make u allergic to Oxygen..n watch u Breathe to Death
6/10...decent finisher

Dimense=36/50

Close battle, both came decent
Chrit's verse seemed rushed
In the end, Dimense takes it with an overall better verse

Vote - Dimense

Feeble Minded 11-19-03 02:00 PM

Son, I fathered ya style.. and even your mother loves me...
This kid only sees Chrit.. when I get weekend custody...
...lol, nice...

Quick to give dimense his first loss... But from my alias he already had one...
And fuck a step ahead of Dimense... Try a whole damned marathon...
hmm.. not feelin as much

How you got a shot? It seems like ya constantly losing...
Only time Dimense's the best... is in the midst of confusion...
avg.

Dimense is the blueprint of wackness... Watch as I destroy his plans...
A style that weak should be deemed illegal... Like Divinitys' web cam...
haha... good

Scared to death... Dimense brings new meaning to internet leaks...
Another poser disposed of.... Hey Evolve...
...How bout a challenge next week?
ok..

Ya Under n alias u beat me.. only cuz u needed 10 ppl to help..
U keep changing sn's ..Still.. cant make a Name for Yourself..?
played a little.. but ok .

So he Bites on HHD..claimin switch’d styles.. quit clingin to Fables..
Chrits Kinda like Goldie Locks..
Cuz he’s Stealin every thing I bring to the Table..
lol.. good..

Ur like bulletproof glass.. Actin hard but chrits see Thru
with Audios so wack..that even the Mic Spits back at You..
nope . nice try but not feelin it

Its sad but Tru^..even Begg’d Orgin Ill for a crew Spot..
U Legendary?..How
Ya Cd couldn’t even get over 18 Sales at a Porn Shop….
lol.. little above average

Ur not Black or White?..like johnson..ur a Race Reject..
Savor this Las Breath
Cuz..Ill make u allergic to Oxygen..n watch u Breathe to Death
no ^

overall -

chrit : pretty much throughout this was an average verse. nothing stood out terribly well.. nothing bad either. average, maybe a bit above average.

dimense: you had some filler lines that were average. you came with two lines that stood out.. but you also came with a few lines.. that... dug a hole and buried themselves.. like the closer.
pretty much made both of your verses average.

meh.. dimense coula taken this by not putting up a few wack lines.. and chrit coula taken this by putting up a few "wow" punches.

sorry. after breaking this down i really can't vote. :(

Horud Skys 11-19-03 04:44 PM

Vote Chrit

Hes punches were harder. It was a close battle but Dimense had a couple played punches and Chrit had a wack finisheer but overall Chrit wins

MeNTiLL 11-19-03 07:03 PM

Chrit:
Son, I fathered ya style.. and even your mother loves me...
This kid only sees Chrit.. when I get weekend custody...
...Dope opener ... Ill wordplay ...
Quick to give dimense his first loss... But from my alias he already had one...
And fuck a step ahead of Dimense... Try a whole damned marathon...
... This was aight ... Not great ...
How you got a shot? It seems like ya constantly losing...
Only time Dimense's the best... is in the midst of confusion...
... Eh ... Aight ...
Dimense is the blueprint of wackness... Watch as I destroy his plans...
A style that weak should be deemed illegal... Like Divinitys' web cam...
...LMFAO ... Dope ass line ...
Scared to death... Dimense brings new meaning to internet leaks...
Another poser disposed of.... Hey Evolve...
...How bout a challenge next week?
...Nice finisher ...

Dimense
Ya Under n alias u beat me.. only cuz u needed 10 ppl to help..
U keep changing sn's ..Still.. cant make a Name for Yourself..?
...Eh ... Aight opener ... But not true ...
So he Bites on HHD..claimin switch’d styles.. quit clingin to Fables..
Chrits Kinda like Goldie Locks..
Cuz he’s Stealin every thing I bring to the Table..
...This was aight ...
Ur like bulletproof glass.. Actin hard but chrits see Thru
with Audios so wack..that even the Mic Spits back at You..
...This was blah ...
Its sad but Tru^..even Begg’d Orgin Ill for a crew Spot..
U Legendary?..How
Ya Cd couldn’t even get over 18 Sales at a Porn Shop….
...Weak...
Ur not Black or White?..like johnson..ur a Race Reject..
Savor this Las Breath
Cuz..Ill make u allergic to Oxygen..n watch u Breathe to Death
...Weak finisher...

Over All

Imma have to go wit Chrit on this battle ... Cuz he juss came better in all aspects of this battle ... Harder hittin' punches ... Wittier lines ... Dimense didn't seem to bring that much back at him ...

Vote : Chrit

Lethargic 11-20-03 12:23 PM

Chrit's Verse

Son, I fathered ya style.. and even your mother loves me...
This kid only sees Chrit.. when I get weekend custody...
^Lol

Quick to give dimense his first loss... But from my alias he already had one...
And fuck a step ahead of Dimense... Try a whole damned marathon...
Lol, but second line coulda been worded better.

How you got a shot? It seems like ya constantly losing...
Only time Dimense's the best... is in the midst of confusion...
^Dope Fuckin Personal

Dimense is the blueprint of wackness... Watch as I destroy his plans...
A style that weak should be deemed illegal... Like Divinitys' web cam...
^Lol, again

Scared to death... Dimense brings new meaning to internet leaks...
Another poser disposed of.... Hey Evolve...
...How bout a challenge next week?
^Disappointing compared to the rest of your verse

Dimense's Verse

Ya Under n alias u beat me.. only cuz u needed 10 ppl to help..
U keep changing sn's ..Still.. cant make a Name for Yourself..?
^No one else has been penalized for slight feeding, neither should you...nice punch

So he Bites on HHD..claimin switch’d styles.. quit clingin to Fables..
Chrits Kinda like Goldie Locks..
Cuz he’s Stealin every thing I bring to the Table..
^If that wasn't fake...damn. 2nd line was still dope

Ur like bulletproof glass.. Actin hard but chrits see Thru
with Audios so wack..that even the Mic Spits back at You..
^Not feelin the first line...second was lol.

Its sad but Tru^..even Begg’d Orgin Ill for a crew Spot..
U Legendary?..How
Ya Cd couldn’t even get over 18 Sales at a Porn Shop….
Dope punch, poorly worded

Ur not Black or White?..like johnson..ur a Race Reject..
Savor this Las Breath
Cuz..Ill make u allergic to Oxygen..n watch u Breathe to Death
^LoL, nice

Overall: Awesome battle, the kind people like to read a couple times(Which I did). Dimense might have taken this if it weren't for the fake personal and that poorly worded porn shop punch.

Plus, this line from Chrit killed it:

How you got a shot? It seems like ya constantly losing...
Only time Dimense's the best... is in the midst of confusion...

^Especially hard hitting due to the Axe E. Um vs Mystery~Murdera match ending up being Dimense vs MM. Great punch and dope battle guys.

Vote ~ Chrit.

SmokaJoka. 11-20-03 02:16 PM

ehhh...seems to me Chrit got this for more original punches and personals....Dimense looked as if some parts of his verse played off of Chrits' verse....which isn't too cool....but Dimense did have soem good personals....u both had good vocab...nice flows...and equal structures....but here's the line that killed it...

Quote:
From Chrit:
Only time Dimense's the best... is in the midst of confusion...
Dimense is the blueprint of wackness... Watch as I destroy his plans...


that's y Chrit gets my vote...he had more humor..better wordplay...and original punches....nice battle from u both though....no hate...just a vote...

peace
4:20

Chrit 11-20-03 03:04 PM

7-4

Mystery~murdera 11-22-03 06:53 AM

Gotta say I think Dimense came with the personals which
in the end took this battle. The biting - table line. And begin
Origin Ill line did it for me.

vote - Chrit

Mary~Jane 11-22-03 07:01 AM

did you mean vote dimense, or chrit came with the personals which in the end took this battle?

lol

Mystery~murdera 11-22-03 07:03 AM

yea ^^^^ what she said

vote - dimense

Evolve 11-24-03 08:07 AM

Chrit Wins & Retains The Title
Dimense Loses

Battle Closed


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