Da_Legend --V-S-- BLuNT
 

10 to 15 lines

normal voting rules...

try ta hurry

i release a flash fury like "tidal shifts"
spit 'bout the "same depth", this bitch jus' "drips"
barely even makes a ripple,
BLuNT lands 1 punch an' has Da_Legend layin' crippled
it's fuckin' "basic".. you're style's jus' "simple"
"tasteless"... shit, it's no wonder you so "bitter"
face it, i'm considered a heavy hitter
200 plus posts an' u still a beginner.. *damn*
i'm a patriot like american missles
explodin' on Middle Weights wit percision
your births date's not applicable, (N/A - check profile)
'cause deaths iminent this instant bro
it ain't gon' be no split decision
I'm winning, this isn't skill it's jus' instinct

just got back from lunch

checking in..



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YO CUD U BOTH PUT AN HONEST VOTE ON DIS CUS ITS GETTIN SLEPT ON DEN ASS SOON AS YOURS IS DUN ILLPUT AN HONEST 1 ON THIS. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=92528 THX..............PZ

cmon its being slept on honest votes n ill repay da favor with 1 on this.............thx http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=92528 ....................pz

MY VERSE
 

Grenades got 5 seconds delay ~ all I need is two seconds to murder him//
So fucking pulling pins, you really need to START PULLING WINS//
Hoped that you didnt spit first knowin that you're bestin-a-vet//
Cuz I didnt want you sit around da screen "waiting for death"//(think about it)
And you's just another herb I've blazed fo frontin G//
Cuz to me....you's nut'n' more than a [blunt] MC//
And from how I see it....shit's really lookin grim//
Cuz everytime he's uppin for votes he's simply uppin my wins//
......Gots to be crazy to fuck wit me nigga//
.....When I've murdered more dudes than Sadam n Hitler//
Like "babies thinking twice" this merking g'make you "crawl in doubt"//
N' all dese [diverse] punches I got jes got dis fool Knocked-Out//
(Check his sig)

see, that's why u win... u got nothin' to hit personal in ya sig or profile... whatever... uppin'...

lolol dawg.....thats y u shud b creative.....use metas and wordplays....if u cant use personals lololol

ite gota go out but ill put 1 in on dis in abit.............................................. ................................................pz


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=92528

how did i not use metas,,, lol... u don't see the wordplay in my verse... that's all i could really use..

^^^^^ stop freeposting man.......that's like the third time.............................................. .................................................. .

if ur not gonna vote den dont bother posting

Aight, here we go:

Blunt

i release a flash fury like "tidal shifts"
spit 'bout the "same depth", this bitch jus' "drips"
^^WEAK OPENER 4/10
barely even makes a ripple,
BLuNT lands 1 punch an' has Da_Legend layin' crippled
^^EXTENDED FIRST PUNCH, OK, SECOND LINE HERE IS EH.. 5/10
it's fuckin' "basic".. you're style's jus' "simple"
"tasteless"... shit, it's no wonder you so "bitter"
^^NO RHYMIN HERE, WEAK 4/10
face it, i'm considered a heavy hitter
200 plus posts an' u still a beginner.. *damn*
^^DECENT PUNCH I GUESS 6/10
i'm a patriot like american missles
explodin' on Middle Weights wit percision
^^AGAIN, DOESN'T RHYME HERE 4/10
your births date's not applicable, (N/A - check profile)
'cause deaths iminent this instant bro
^^OK PUNCH, KINDA WEAK THOUGH 5/10
it ain't gon' be no split decision
I'm winning, this isn't skill it's jus' instinct
^^WEAK, NO RHYMIN AGAIN... 3/10

TOTAL: 31/70 (44%)


Da_Legend


Grenades got 5 seconds delay ~ all I need is two seconds to murder him//
So fucking pulling pins, you really need to START PULLING WINS//
^^OUCH, NICE PUNCH 8/10
Hoped that you didnt spit first knowin that you're bestin-a-vet//
Cuz I didnt want you sit around da screen "waiting for death"//(think about it)
^^EH... NOT MUCH TO THINK ABOUT BUT DECENT 6/10
And you's just another herb I've blazed fo frontin G//
Cuz to me....you's nut'n' more than a [blunt] MC//
^^NICE PERSONAL 7/10
And from how I see it....shit's really lookin grim//
Cuz everytime he's uppin for votes he's simply uppin my wins//
^^AGAIN, GOOD PUNCH 7/10
......Gots to be crazy to fuck wit me nigga//
.....When I've murdered more dudes than Sadam n Hitler//
^^FILLER....5/10
Like "babies thinking twice" this merking g'make you "crawl in doubt"//
N' all dese [diverse] punches I got jes got dis fool Knocked-Out//
^^OK 6/10

TOTAL: 39/60 (65%)

win goes to Da_Legend

like the first punch, off the hook

peace

see that's why i'm audio... 'cause every place u say it doesn't rhyme it actually does... you just have no skill in actually spittin' a flow.. whatever...

YEH I THINK DA LEGEND ON PUNCHES FLOW N STRUCTURE JUST GOT DIS CLOSE SHIT DO GD VERSES FRM BOTH BLUNT MAN I WNA BATTLE U SUM TIME NOT BAD^.............................................. ......D PUT AN HONEST VOTE ON DIS PLZ http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=92528 THX...............PZ

Opner:Legend
Closer: Legend
Flow: Blunt
Personals: Legend
Punches: Blunt
Win: Legend
Hey you hit this up with an honest vote plz http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=92490

i think i shud've got personals for what i had to work with... lol...
good looks... 1
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Da Legend wins with better punches.

"From how I see it, shit's lookin grim...
Cuz every time he ups for votes he simply ups my wins"

That killed this battle and buried the motherfucker.

Blunt's was just too basic, too elementary, and too soft.

You don't have ta stretch ya lines...

But, damn, dog...add something to them!

Better punches, wordplay, personals...

Da Legend

Hit me back...

Vote here!

Legend took this wit better punchs and flow and some of the personals were tight too

vote Legend

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=91613

opener:legend
closer:legend
wordplay:legend
structure:tie
punches:legend
overall:legend

legend took this one easily, blunt u need to make ur lines a lil longer. aiight peace

plz vote honestly on the battle in my sig!!!!