1liner vs Ace
 

kid wants to coming at me now.....good luck man...
no holding back
10 lines max
no cheating
you spit firsta
good luck
peACE

ace-of-spades- WHAT OUT--- cuz i'll grab an incased gauge-
load it with razors so incase it sprayz
u can embrace tha hate
explode it with the rage-of-fate and replace ya mug with a face-of-blades/

(tryn some multis)
its auto-matic that when the oppurtunity cums that i grab it-
so i smash this faggot like a frantic fanatic
blast his casket with drama-tic tactick that'll make his ass-lift
and do a backwards backflip
this cats cunna get wrapped in black bagged elastic-
cuz this is a habbit of the GRaphix
(GOD DAMN i get estastick)
known this faggot is bagged in plastic and trapped in tha attic ( my alias is ShadowGraphix)

But anyways - i' can destroy you in many ways
leave you alive for 19 only to die in twenty days
i aint got a win yet so u can see i got plenty space

refraise the fist taste of hate/ like a tape (deck) thats played
drew 51 (cards) a threw away the ace-of-spades

sorry went over i keystled and just kept goin anyways i know you gunna kill me anyways
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That 19 line and die in twent days is my record 1-9.................just thought alot of peeps wouldn't understand it .................................................. .................................................. ..........................

i hope u aint bitchin out it seem like its takin you a fuckin long time to write ya verse i mean comon now 41-9
should be able to post verse in minutes

nice verse..sorry for taking so long..im in skool rite now..so i had
to wait till lunch to spit...ima make it short..

~Pick it Up~
Remedial mediums enter your nerves and brain to demote your volume//
The visions of this battle's results, have simply re-wrote ur flaws doom//
This kat couldn't "verbally out number me" if he were bi-lingo//
Losses reach double digits before his wins barely see single//
Ridiculed riddles for words, even to yourself you sound rediculous//
Couldn't find the meaning to ur verse with lyrics found conspicuous//
Shoving dimes through your throat’s the closest I’ll get to knocking “sense” into you//
I invented you too, couldn’t attract an audience if your words came scented and blue//
This kat couldn't "verbally out number me" if he were bi-lingo//
Losses reach double digits before his wins barely see single//

~Drop It~
In relation to your name, it takes one line to beat ya//
Its more of a challenge to lose than it is to defeat ya//

had to hurry it up...lunch time is ova..good luck

peACE

shiet...somehow..i repeated my lines..my bad...
take one'em out...........

actual verse:
~Pick it Up~
Remedial mediums enter your nerves and brain to demote your volume//
The visions of this battle's results, have simply re-wrote ur flaws doom//
Ridiculed riddles for words, even to yourself you sound rediculous//
Couldn't find the meaning to ur verse with lyrics found conspicuous//
Shoving dimes through your throat’s the closest I’ll get to knocking “sense” into you//
I invented you too, couldn’t attract an audience if your words came scented and blue//
This kat couldn't "verbally out number me" if he were bi-lingo//
Losses reach double digits before his wins barely see single//

~Drop It~
In relation to your name, it takes one line to beat ya//
Its more of a challenge to lose than it is to defeat ya//

iguess but peeps gunna know you ercycled ya verse and thats lame man
cuz there aint anyways you could have re-writ the same line more like a cu-n-past pre-writ
but anyways holla back
we need votes

this is a REAL battle why yall sleepin on this

up up and away!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

yo 1liner took this nice word play
scruture well...everything....sorry i can't poll vote
check out this battle i apreciate honest vote peace



http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...?threadid=92713

lmao^^^^^^

i doubt ace pre written his shit......but another vet vs. herb/newb battle...hate it..

good closer for ace...liner forced multis' with non hard hitting punches.....

lliked ace's complexity and shit....punches better..easy win

peace..no hate

thanx for voting peep^...no hate 1liner..i dun even get wut ur saying...lol
uppin this....................
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peACE

uppin this puppy................
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blah
peACE

upp we need closure .................................................. .................................................. .............................

up the pup again..................
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.....and again............................
peACE

Open- tie
Metas - 1liner
Creavitity - ace
Personals - ace
Flow - ace
Finish - ace
Abuse - ace

vote = ace. 1liner u were able to stuff more shit into each line this time, but u got to make the words both rhyme and be relative. sum of the metas were very forced. (didn't make sense)

My Battles:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=92417

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=92568

uppin for votes.............
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peACE

uppin this for some votes please......
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peACE

this is being slept on............try voting please.....i'll hit
ur battle up fairly in return....
peACE~~~~~~~~~~~

aight the battle was aight...1liner you have def elevated..a lot

BREAKDOWN-
punches=ace
sustainment=ace
flow=ace
creativity=1
structure=ace
metas=ace
overall=ace

MAKE SURE YA HIT AT LEST ONE OF THE BATTLES IN MA SIG OR I'LL KEEP BUGGIN

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=92925 vote after plz...

punches=ace
sustainment=ace
flow=tie
creativity=ace
structure=ace
metas=ace


overall=ace



gd verse man but he is wak.....lol.no hate.repay da favor man.........honest vote.................pz

thanx for the votes people...........
uppin for a little more...........
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peACE

well umm ace took it....u said u were tryin sum multis n it helped, worked, loved em da punches hit harda den 1liners, whether 1 cut n pasted, or rushed 2 get bacc 2 class, eitha way it wasnt as hard as i expected from how ace was pumpin him up wit his after flow post ( ....i know u gunna kill me anywayz) always consida yoself betta den yo opponent or else whats da point in battlin if u think u gonna lose

jus a prop vote for ACE, maybe in about 11 posts n dis thread still here i can poll

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=92814

drop sum honest votes, good lookin out

I voted for one of you because you had a better verse

ace took this but close shit, better flow n punches meant that ace had it, gud verse from 1liner to but jus slightly outclassed in the end!

vote-ace

did u poll on my battle wiv aragorn dawg!
can u giv an honest vote on my battle wiv skitten nalso check ur crew forum/thread!