Robo Vs. 1Liner
 

10-15 lines, No crew or d/r votes, u know the rules, lets do it ill go first since i made the challenge

When i hacked and coffed/ i started his lost
then this (R)etard (o)ffiacialy (b)acked (O)ff
seein his (R)eason (O)f (B)eing (O)ppresivly soft

by the time you read this -RObo has probably been dead-a-while
cuz i rape him verbaly like kids livin with pet-a-files

this message i''m sendin threw ya mail will chew-ya-armor
cuz its a speacial delivery from hell thanx to the un-a-bomber

Comon spit it- i know you pre-writ-it cuz after i post you'll reply in a single minute
is efforless how i finish my busniss
and like the 2nd wizard of OZ they gunna find this robo diminished
in stitches

Your a broke ass gangsta so u go out and steal,
Maybe if your ass could rhyme you might get a deal//
You cant handle a white boy callin you out,
After this youll be in a lyrical drought//
Im beatin you and heres the proof,
If i no-showed id still win cuz just better then you//
This kid thinks hes the latest craze,
If i pourd gas down your throat and lit it you still couldnt spit a blaze//
the only way u can beat me is if you find some good lyrics to bite,
so here u go heres the link to the lyrics website/ (www.lyrics.com)

i guess this guy dosent get the concept of me goin first but whatev, lets got them votes comin in
*****ONE*****

dawg i see the battle and i start writin so if i finish first i post and i hate when i have to wait for a verse cuz then peeps say i feed of it .......................
anyways nice drop

WE NEED SOME VOTES UPPIN
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i think 1 liner has got this one being honest. robo ur punches bored me................................................ .................................................. .................................................. .............................................pz

we need some votes uppin
VOTES VOTES VOTES VOTES VOTES VOTES VOTES VOTES VOTES VOTES VOTES VOTES VOTES VOTES VOVOTES VOTES VOTES VOTES VOTES TES VOTES VOTES VOTES VOTES VOTES VOTES VOTES VOTES VOTES VOTES VOTES VOTES VOTES VOTES VOTES

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WHAT THE FUCK WE NEED SOME VOTES IM GETTIN PISSED THAT NOBODY VOTES, SO LETS GET THEM VOTES COMIN IN, VOTES UPPIN

well this was a close one. 1liner you had some okay disses but they weren't good punches or personals. robo you had an okay flow too with more personals, and a little harder disses. i would vote robo if i could.

WE NEED SOME POLL VOTES THANKS FOR THE PRP VOTES BUT THOSE DONT REALY HELP WIN THE BATTLE< U KNOW?
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OPener: 1
Closer: Robo
Flow: 1
Punches: Robo
Personals: 1
Win: 1liner
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this was wack....1 liner wins with not being as bad as robo...

both need major elevation though......

1 liner at least had some decent punches and robo had like one not wack one....but whatever

up this this needs to be closed for rizzle man this is a merkin anyways

holla at ya boi and close this so i can go after bigger fish.............................................. .................................................. ...................

is it me or does ^^^^^^his verse sound alot like a Eminem verse
LMFAO AT HIS BITER
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uppin i need this closed so ican battle again
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ok this goes to 1liner i liked his style....very interesting... had better opener better personals...and ok punch
robo had a tight finisher props for that. he's

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word i agree with Game on this....this was a kinda weak battle...1liner takes it with at least the use of letterplay, wordplay, punches, and a few personals...Robo had a better structure and flow without a doubt....but i gotta give this one to 1liner strictly for my above reasons....nice read from u both though...no hate...just a vote...

peace
4:20

1 liner took in close battle but 1liner

flow-1liner
punches-1liner
vocab-robo
metas-1liner
personals-1liner
structure-1liner
wordplay-robo

Overall- 1liner

When i hacked and coffed/ i started his lost
then this (R)etard (o)ffiacialy (b)acked (O)ff
seein his (R)eason (O)f (B)eing (O)ppresivly soft

by 1liner

gotta love that..lol..guess robo had the perfect name....:)