ferrarihov50 VS FreSh_EmCee
 

da other thread ddnt have a poll so heres da real one....

Aiyo these be the rules:
10 lines
no biting
Spit at the same time
.....and all the other mumbo jumbo.


my verse:
i'll put wot i mean in brackets next to da line to make it clear.

yo here we go

yo geek, u gotta get ur information right
like ur rhymes im dismantling life(meaning i tear apart his verse)
providing percise beef to distinguish time(battling dis clown to waste time)
relenquish life and tear apart ur rhyme
in do time, i mean by the end of my lines
u will fall like u wud to da sound of a nine
your the only MC that graduates with a scholarship(hes a scholar)
and the only mother fucker who masterbates over a horror flick
so when I end this beef, i'll leave you dead and bloody
and i'll end it all here so you can go to bed and study(once more i diss him being a scholar..)

done, ur turn..u got 2 dayz to spit..
gud luck

ferrarihov50 verse

Callin you out to battle was kinda pointless,
with them wack ass verses you spit, i've 'ready won this//
only punch you swung worth ducking was the one bout goin' to bed,
lucky for me i dont have a step-dad, in mine, nagging for head//
Big ass words you wrote trying to sound sophisticated,
when all you sound like, is a whining prick that just got castrated//
hoping those complicated words you spat will get you elevated//
you faggot, all you capable of spittin' is you fathers cum,
it must have sucked getting a sagging dick shoved up your bum,
its only too bad, in this battle, i was second to none.

vote

let me just re-post it, it will be kind confusing......................................... .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .....

Callin you out to battle was kinda pointless,
with them wack ass verses you spit, i've 'ready won this//
only punch you swung worth ducking was the one bout goin' to bed,
lucky for me i dont have a step-dad, in mine, nagging for head//
Big ass words you wrote trying to sound sophisticated,
when all you sound like, is a whining prick that just got castrated//
hoping those complicated words you spat will get you elevated//
you faggot, all you capable of spittin' is you fathers cum,
it must have sucked getting a sagging dick shoved up your bum,
its only too bad, in this battle, i was second to none.

Opener: none
Closer: ferr
Flow: ferr
Punches: None
Personals: Fresh
Win: Ferr

Hit this site up with an honest vote. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=92779

yo can u please put a vote on this and ill return the favor wen this is dun http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=92528 thx.................pz

vote or not i dun care...lol..................................
uppin (1).............................................

yo i liked the masterbation line that fresh spit but the rest was just okay. i think frrarri had stronger disses and content. he would get my vote if i could poll.

peep my battle with wyze sin nyways
if this is still going i'l come back and poll when i can.

uppin x1................................................ .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .......

not a great battle but hey....It was aiiight....I think ferrari won this...Better punches inc. dad cum line

Fresh mastebation line gud aswell but ferrari edged it.....

Hit this up wit a vote

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...highlight=toner

Ta

yeh k tight stuff...
upping (2)............................................... .................................................. ...........

come on people vote please............................................ .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .....

I CANT VOTE BUT IF I CUD ID BIG UP FRESH ,HOLLAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

hey fresh if you're going to try and sound smart I should give you a few pointers:
1) yo isn't a fucking word
2) you* your*
3) your second line makes no fucking sense, if you were to remove "life" it would make sense , but then it wouldn't rhyme.
4) precise* and distinguish doesn't mean to waste, it's to show the difference in
5) relinquish* but again it makes no sense anyway
6) due time*
6) you* would* the*
7) you're*
8) masturbates*
So basically, you're a moron. If I could vote, it wouldn't be for you. I suggest about two years of remedial schooling before you try writing anything in a sophisticated manner again.

lol .......

Is this battle really even worth voting on? Well i guess so, but i ain't gunna vote, forget that shit.. Some ppl on here are just fuckin "brown noses" i'll lick ur's if u lick mine, idiots

My vote is for dat fresh emcee guy... although he was beat in a personal and finisher catergory I simpily found his verse more in beat an kinda harder... although neither so too hard.
Please hit a vote on this battle...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=92827

i dont get it, you plainly said i beat him, anyway thats your opinion........................................... .................................................. .................................................. .

^^^^
well he's gonna lose anyway... ferrer 50 ain't got no worrys... but listen, I really need a vote on my battle plz hook it up

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=92827

Yo this battle wasn't all that for a start, but Ferraihov stole it jus.. due to the fact he was so cocky...I would've expected better than that from a middle kna mean.

Peace

thanks for the critique.......................................... .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ......

nice battle...guess another loss to me :(
gud one, i'll battle u again later?? u up for it again??
and to da ppl who ddnt vote but posted dere comments..thanks for nothing ...better if u guyz voted or u guyz trying to up ur posts
n e way
nice battle
laterz
peace

yeah sure.............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .........

uppin x2................................................ .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .........

i vote ferrari...........better punches.......better dissing........
better verse..........decent battle............both need elevate........
use better wordplay and shit try multies to......they help!:)

pc

cheers............................................ .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ....

come on ppl vote.............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .......

ok both were way basic.....fresh emce had a more complex verse although syill simple.......you gus lacked personals.....and some of ur lines were played like......cum/bum........so fresh takes this cuz he had a lil more sense in his verse.....


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both kinda weak, but ferr got this, you both need to elavate tho..............................
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