Rap~Jesus~ VS Emcee Universe
 

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first to 5 votes, 3-0 Ko
no hat,Dr, crew votes.
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peace

checking in
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peace

My Verse:

You claim to be the best but I never heard of you son, this clowns a mystery... /
You a Legend? Givin’ head in the back of class is the only way you goin down in history//

Surrender bitch, my patience ain’t running thick.../
Your time is up like wrist watches on astronauts’ dick//

Think you precise...? you gonna last wit this pain/
I'll blast at your frame till you split in ''2 halves'' like ''college basketball games''... //

This fake emcee 'stuck on me'...must have 'my pic' stashed in his trousers /
and only your verses come up when I type "WACK" in my browser//

When I call the shots, shit I always gun for the head../
Your rhymes livin forever… shit all GOOD things come to an end//

I’m lyrically benevolent slaughter foes with malevolence.../
If your rap is motive they’d only find a lack of evidence//

gdluck dawg

peace

hahha Prewrittin shyt.... damn kid atleast dont make it noticeable... Checkin In -

nigga, just cuz yo punk bitch ass can't cum up wit shit betta than that wack shit don't be 'cusin' that nigga of prewritten

u 2 got a lil beef goin on?............................................... .....................................

peace

yo vote on this and ill b back with an honest vote later ok
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=91980
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cuz i gotta leave somewhere
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hurry up dawg---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

peace

deser_eagle
 

who tha fuck u think u r? motha fuckin go ta boitch slapped and sign in. You are Next! -

wut da fuck u mean .................................................. ..........................................

peace

sence urs was a prwrittin imma do this shyt 2morrow ass -

u fucking scared faggot............................................ .............................................

Aight "Rap Jesus" Lets See You Pull A Miracle On This Battle....



I'll Jack This "Kat" For His "Coller" - Maybe For His "Furr" Too...
Imma Big Dog, I Run These Streets While This "Pussy" Aims Ta Lose...

Cant Help But Hate Your Record - Damn Kid It Sucks Worst Than Yo Do....
I'd Assist Ya With Ya Rap Skill..But Ya Dont Even Hold That Now Do You?!?!

I Dont Need Ta Feel You - I Saw Enough From Ya Wack Ass Shit...
I Passed By This Thread And Smelt More Ass Than Where You Sit!!!!!

Fuck This I QUIT! When Can I Swing By And Pick Up My Check?...
Cause I Wanna Refund Like Rap Jesus Wants Ta Become A VET!!!!!!!!

Your Lines Are More Played Than Mine! Man Thats Pathetic!!
You Had A Better Chance Winnin' Wit Just Ya Fuckin Check In!!!!!!

Stop Thinkin... Your Givin Ya Brain Ya Weakness...
Open Ya Eyes... I'll Cum-See You, Like Seamen!!!!!!

I'll Leave You Scared Ta Talk - So You Better Try Ta Rhyme...
He Aint Sayin SHYT! Like I Was Molesting A Constipated Mime!!!!

1....

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...93&pagenumber=2

Peep Dat Wit An Honest One...

I'll Make Sure I Do The Same For You...

Thanks...

-P

i gotta say this battle goes to Emcee he came harder with his punches n personals, jesus yours really did look prewritten

Open- rj
Metas - rj
Creavitity - tie
Personals - em u
Flow - tie
Finish - rj
Abuse - em u

vote = rap jesus

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1-1 uppin -

Gotta give it to Emcee, just felt he came harder with better flow to his lines...good battle but I gotta giv this one to Emcee...

Nj tho jesus..

hmm... not explained that well but ill let the mods decide... 2-1 me -

aight here it is

opener emcee
flow emcee
creativity tie
originality tie
personals emcee
close emcee

overall emcee



yo vote this battle


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=92686

3-1 me -

Liked Dat Bar A Lot...

Real Nice...

Great Battle...

Especially From A Couple Newbs...

Dont Think You're REALLY Newbs Tho...

Gonna Go Wit Universe On Dis...

His Punches Were Just A Lil Tiny Bit Betta...

Really Close...

Good Battle...

But Vote...Emcee Universe...

-P

vote-emcee by a mile
punches=emcee
sustainment=emcee
flow=emcee
structure=none
metas=emcee
overall=emcee

yo emcee go back to the structure ya had with camarac
pz

i give this to rap jesus emcee universe was just too plain and simple............................................ .................................................. ..