set-ignorance vs deser_eagle
 

rules

6 lines
no h/c/dr votes
u drop first
check in before you spit

Like water on metal, I make you rust, like ash’s to powder, eventually to dust
I crush my opponent like an element of sand, be an emcee? Better luck being in a boy band


I slam thou energy into the eyes of the enemy, making him surprised n un-even n un-ready
I steady my lines to the brink of there integrity and let lose like a wizard with an iller remedy


Steadily over-powering you, like the giant I am, your life is already over-due, taken by demand

Apprehensive lyrics that make you think backwards, an exclusive image that over-laps your whack words

Here’s a way to clinically finish you, let u recap what I wrote, and the publicly humiliate you// with a word of wisdom, taken into advice, for messing with me you pay a heavy price

Now here we are, where I end my sufficient zone, I’ll hand you the mic, n you can take it home// write down what you think might help you to win, n if it doesn’t help…. Your in for some discipline…

Man, hurry up n fucking drop your shit, stop fuckin cowarding away.. Pussy... naggin nigga.. Aight? Is that cool, alrite then .... Fuck sake.. Peace Holla...

yo sorry, i ain't been on since i set this up. i'm bout to spit.............................................. ...................

i asked for someone on my level and i get this "cat". he still an amateur. still "lickin nuts" and "hidin from his stats"*//
my lines are "ropes" wrap 'round ya neck and "strangle you". leave you "hangin from trees" more than "disobedient slaves"//
i'm leavin u in this battle "speechless" like i just "cut out ya vocal chords" and "put em to ya ear" so you can "hear tha stupid shit you spit"//

*=he rides niggaz dicks, and cats lick their nuts to clean themselves, and he 0-4 so he tryna hide from his record

ne votes c'mon niggaz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I don't think anyones gunna give feedback on this.. There all too busy doing otha shit.. I know it don't look 6 lines, but i think i may of got a lil confused, haha. Holla

Opener: Set
Closer: Deser
Flow: Set
Punches: Set
Personals: tie
Win Set
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6 lines so i voted on ur first six set.

Open- deser
Metas - none
Creavitity - deser
Personals - none
Flow - deser
Finish - deser
Abuse - deser

vote = deser

Set, u got me confused, how does dust rhyme wit band, demand rhyme wit words..etc?

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Set, u got me confused, how does dust rhyme wit band, demand rhyme wit words..etc?

Dude, re-read the line agen.. Alrite.. I think u got yourself confused.. Haha. Holla Peace

SEt ya structure is all Fucked up man
you look like you got some potential u just need to elvate man

Deser -----u need to grab a dictionary and start expandin ya vocab
if i were to guess how old you were by this stuff you write id say like 8
another MC^^^^6who needs to elevate


Vote +++++++++++Set ------for his somewhat unstructured but weak punches

Aight, uppin.. Come on.. Haha.. I'm gettin tired. I've already lost a battle again from the tiredness i put myself under.. Keep the votes comin.. Peace

yo c'mon people quit sleepin on dis shit.............................................. .................................................. .................................................. ........................................

quit sleepin on this shit.............................................. .................................................. .................................

yo set took this hands down, you have real skill kid......................... the other guy is wack.................. my vote goes to set..........................props to you.
vote on this, its an old battle that never got finished i want it to be finished already.................
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...9805#post929805
thanks.....

opener: D
closer: S
flow: D
vocab: S
punches: S
structure: S

set takes it....his structure wasnt fucked up, it was just original.......but he also kind of snuck in twice as many lines in, but its ok, they didnt specify bars, just lines. D didnt rhyme alot of the time, his first line was cool though cuz of the wordplay on cat...but the rest of it needed all that explanation so..yeah

my vote is to set

both of yall please hit up my battleeeeee

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=93693

Peace ya'll. Thanxs for voting. Bout time i won a fuckin battle, haha! Anyways, keep dropping y'all.. Holla Peace... (The ignorance)

kinda wack

set ig verse wasn't all that but it had more punches

d-e verse had few lines of wordplay

set ig although wackness shone brighter got this one

u shoulda came harder desert..........