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Dominator -v- Envy Skills
14 Lines MAX
Check in here... Well drop together later |
5votes
no dk no crew no hate all votes must be explained Catagories opening - flow - metas - multis - punches - wordplay - complexity - structure - closing - overall - |
iight yo im checkin in....when are we gonna drop
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Drop at 6 PM EST.................
I wanna eat dinner b4 i start writing 100 char 100 char 100 char |
iight......
i will __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ ___________________ |
EnVy I’ll have you "fallin breathless" quicker than “fat peeps on treadmills”
Sayin your tha champ, yet you get-killed cuz I shred-Skillz Played lines are making a comeback, mainly cuz this^ faggot emcee Well when i spit, it's 'as-salt'... yet my lyrics are completely 'sugar-free' The esscence of battling, ideal balance of personals-and-punchlines In this battle Envy's takin more "cuts" then "fat-people-in-lunchlines" FreeYayo was your best opponent ..how the hell you claim to be hard? And of your punches just "miss in" the point ..like a wnba guard Out-stompin you is my sole purpose ..and did i mention that i'm gellin? Tha only time you write 'sIC' is when your correctin his spelling I'ma fuckin you up kid, like a police officer at a doughnut buffet Your a fat boy with no life.... your droppin 50.46 posts per day In all reality though, kid, I really gotta admire you on your persistance Too bad im sendin you back where you came from: Non-Existence |
You’re Fake-And-Wack, but I'm endin you're reign “Just In Time”//
When I "Make It Clap", let's see if you can "Bust A Rhyme"// [1] Now ya done walk in to da “Room” wit “Ceilin Clocks” to prove yall “Time Is Up”// New Rap Order must was spittin wit “Testicals” cuz his verse driving me "Nuts”// [2] Damn it I'm Focused-So-Fear, Post-Against-Queers who stand no chance against such a “Potent Carrier”// Don’t “Hope To Be Spared”, cause when i put this "shell to your ear", I guarantee it wont be the "Ocean You Hear”// [3] This Kid wouldn’t do a “Good job” with his “Thumb being glued “Up”// Your flows wouldn't have “Intellect or Weight” if you was “Professor Klump”//(The Nutty Professor) [4] Kids winning streaks always Revert-and-slow cause his VERSES-“FLOW"// with the same consistency of a "pregnant" bitch on "BIRTH-CONTROL"// [5] U don't even “Step Close” there's gotta be “Less Jokes”, I “Wreak Dopes” with “Tecks Folks”// I just won this battle 5-0, cuz Being on “The Weakest Link” is the only place you'd “Get Votes”// [6] My-Craft-Teaches, I’ve-Matched-Jesus...not-trying-to-Brag, But-Please-Kid, EnVy “Off The Chain” like “Snatched Pieces!”// You Cant-Beat-This”, Im’a-Rap-Genus, I Pack-Heat-Shit....with “three life lines” that’s-Half-decent, even “Ask Regis!”// [7] |
and yo dominator... i never claimed to be hard or to be the champ
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uppin for some votes..............
.......need some votes............ com on yo................ dont sleep on this |
shit my bad... on the 2nd bar its supposd to be
Now ya done walk in to da “Room” wit “Ceilin Clocks” to prove yall “Time Is Up”// Dominator must was spittin wit “Testicals” cuz his verse driving me "Nuts”// [2] not new rap order when me and new rap order were gonna battle, i wrote my verse for him the day that we were gonna spit....but he neva spit his..so i didnt use it, so i decided to use it for this, yea i kno its pre-write...but it only took me 20 mins to write it b4 and i didnt edit it, as u can see. This is what its supposed to say: You’re Fake-And-Wack, but I'm endin you're reign “Just In Time”// When I "Make It Clap", let's see if you can "Bust A Rhyme"// [1] Now ya done walk in to da “Room” wit “Ceilin Clocks” to prove yall “Time Is Up”// Dominator must was spittin wit “Testicals” cuz his verse driving me "Nuts”// [2] Damn it I'm Focused-So-Fear, Post-Against-Queers who stand no chance against such a “Potent Carrier”// Don’t “Hope To Be Spared”, cause when i put this "shell to your ear", I guarantee it wont be the "Ocean You Hear”// [3] This Kid wouldn’t do a “Good job” with his “Thumb being glued “Up”// Your flows wouldn't have “Intellect or Weight” if you was “Professor Klump”//(The Nutty Professor) [4] Kids winning streaks always Revert-and-slow cause his VERSES-“FLOW"// with the same consistency of a "pregnant" bitch on "BIRTH-CONTROL"// [5] U don't even “Step Close” there's gotta be “Less Jokes”, I “Wreak Dopes” with “Tecks Folks”// I just won this battle 5-0, cuz Being on “The Weakest Link” is the only place you'd “Get Votes”// [6] My-Craft-Teaches, I’ve-Matched-Jesus...not-trying-to-Brag, But-Please-Kid, EnVy “Off The Chain” like “Snatched Pieces!”// You Cant-Beat-This”, Im’a-Rap-Genus, I Pack-Heat-Shit....with “three life lines” that’s-Half-decent, even “Ask Regis!”// [7] sorry bout that... |
opening - dominator
flow - dominator...envy ya shyt looked a lil streched metas - both multis - both punches - dominator wordplay - envy complexity - dominator structure - dom...again streched..(this shouldnt b a catagory) closing - dom VOTE- DOM.......OVERALL BETTER VERSE ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ drop a vote here n make sure to poll..... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=92259 n vote honestly........1 overall - |
Dominator won this to better punches and a more consistent flow. Envy's lines were stretched a lil.
vote= DOMINATOR Hit this wit an honest vote: Infinite Skillz vs. TAG- http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=92779 |
uppin.... ill hit those up when I get home......
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^^^herbish vote infinite skillz
opener(+1)-D closer(+1)-D punches(+2)-D personals(+2)-D wordplay(+1)-Envy multis(+1)-Envy complexity(+1)-D originality(+1)-D cornyness(-2)-Envy enjoyment(+1)-D Overall- Envy Skillz (0).....Dominator (+9)-------Winner....no hate honest opinion..... honest vote here please: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=92866 |
follow the outline infinite skillz..........................................
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quit snoozin people..... quit snoozin
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Envy Skillz
Came Basic Wit A Few Played Lines And Some Nice Metas... Dominator On Da Otha Hand Came Wit Personals, Punches, Metas, And Came Hard... Gotta Hand It To Him For Dose Personals... I'ma fuckin you up kid, like a police officer at a doughnut buffet Your a fat boy with no life.... your droppin 50.46 posts per day In all reality though, kid, I really gotta admire you on your persistance Too bad im sendin you back where you came from: Non-Existence Dopest Lines^... Vote...Dom... -P |
thanks for following the catagories....ok....if u tell me not to vote on your battles then dont vote on mine bitch...
anyways uppin for one more vote to finish this shit off....... |
uppin x 4.............
it dont matter who votes really....... if it was close....... it would matter...... but uhmmmmm yah....... nuff said 4-0 lets go.... lets close this |
UPPIN X 5
Hit this up Drop a link and ill drop an honest one on it right away .................................................. ...... |
opening - dominator
flow - dominator metas - dominator multis - envy punches - dominator wordplay - envy complexity - dominator structure - domiator closing - dominator overall - dominator good battle by both but thats how i see it |
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