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dw vs Aragorn
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blind spit no b/s 30 min check in |
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no freeposting envy, please. Wait until we drop at least, that is the rule in this place. I'll drop an honest one anyway though.
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yo dogs ill hit this up as soon as you guys spit
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Yo Dw you checkin in or what bitch?
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check in bitch!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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this is my check in bitch..
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DW's dim witted... and his rap scheme suck...
Got me blind spittin against a sidekick for Dark Wing Duck... I loot pillage and ransack and i can be this man's quack... An abusive childhood's the reason this man can't rap... Everytime he think to spit... his memories surface quick... "Don't you give yo daddy no lip! Goddamnit I raised a bitch.." Who's that on your avvy Dick Wad... a lost member from Wu... The Clan is played as Diddy's making the Band featuring You!.. Damn Whitey... This rap is too personal I suspect... You challenging me was a mistake too late to correct... Promised you a quick death i guess you come to collect... But every thing has a price.. touch my mic... pay your respects.... |
:wtf:
You gone drop or what bitch? Must have read my shit and got shook. BITCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1111111 |
wollow in defeat cos i follow no-one n im swallowin this beef//
chew...spit...disbelief as a giv u a laxative 4 quik relief// shootin at ya chest where a bullet proof vest n still be put to rest// still thinks hes best cos at his christening the vicar addressed him as blessed// hit you wiv leathal injections leavin u contagious wiv numerous infections// "the king back for his throne"?....snap ya joints so it looks like im clonin bone//(snap in two) Over 200 posts and aragorn still thinks playin scrabble with his gram is wordplay// heat in my hand like the statue of liberty, priority 2 leave u in an ashtray// choke you on ya own verse to watch ya throat burst// as you will tell from who votes first..yes the truth hurts// traumatized as a child since the day u were circumsized// aragorn i'll snap ya spine then ya ribs so ur parrellel to paralized// |
Open- dw
Metas - dw Creavitity - dw Personals - tie Flow - tie Finish - tie Abuse - dw vote = dw , more creativity/meta's/heat, etc. NEED HONEST VOTES!: |
C'mon dw you recycling shit from old script dog.http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...6249#post906249
That some herb ass shit son. |
Open- dw
Metas - dw Creavitity - dw Personals - tie Flow - tie Finish - tie Abuse - dw overall-dw |
Open- DW
Metas - DW Creavitity - A Personals - A Flow - A Finish - A Enjoyment - A my vote A. good shit......reason i wasnt feelin d's verse was i felt the lines streched to much and couldnt real catch the beat readin it in my head. ill verse aragorn. nice battle. my vote: aragorn |
flow = a
structure = a personals = a opener = dw punches = a closer = a vote = a no hate....i thought aragorn got this...was really feelin it hit this battle up http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=93087 |
Open- DW
Metas - DW Creavitity - Aragon Personals - Aragon punches: Aragon Flow - Aragon Finish - DW Enjoyment - Aragon vote: Aragon nice battle a lil bit one sided! peace |
o.k^^^^wtf!
uppin this y'all explained votes! aragorn that battle never happened he no-showed so im allowed, plus if u read it the lines have bin changed! |
PLEASE VOTE ON MY BATTLE FOR ME VOTING HERE!
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=93272 === Aragorn- - lol you said dark wing duck. - eh... not so good follow up - kinda soft middle... but some personals in there - pretty good ending. DW- - good rhymes in opener - good last 4 bars. - pretty good middle too but slipped there - pretty good rhyme scheme VOTE: dw |
tight battle...here's the breakdown:
flow-aragon creativity-aragon...haven't seen many verses like that one..props complexity-dw punches-dw personals-tie vocab-dw tight battle..props to both vote-dw keep it tight peepz hit this up in return please: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=92680 peACE |
This was the best Aragorn brought...
Everytime he think to spit... his memories surface quick... "Don't you give yo daddy no lip! Goddamnit I raised a bitch.." Who's that on your avvy Dick Wad... a lost member from Wu... The Clan is played as Diddy's making the Band featuring You!.. I cannot believe your opener had "Dark Wing Duck" in it. What are ya, 4? DW brought hard punches, wordplay, flow, and even an isolated personal... Crushing the 4 good lines Aragorn brought. Sorry, that's how it is. Peace |
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