Hannibal VS Tribz
 

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no crew,hate,or dr
Tribz is droppin first

aight droppin now

Pray for a MIRACLE DOG, i SWEAR THAT YOU LOST
facing a SPIRITUAL GOD, before the first bar I've FINISHED YOU OFF!
I speak in tongues, SYLLABLES MORSED with such a CRITICAL FORCE
my 'delivery got kids hooked' like AMBILLICAL CORDS!
Tribz fights back dont QUESTION THE SORE SPLEENS
leave fists-in-cuffs, a bunch of "twisted-fucks" like "DYSLEXICS IN PORN SCENES!"
I FEAST UPON THIS CANNIBAL, Hannibal dont deny pain
This kids "FUCKED UP" cuz he "LIKES FRIED BRAIN" (triple meaning if you can decypher)

yo that was hot, and yeah i got the triple metaphor, u betta break it down for those who don't or u may lose soem votes, ill hti this again after lectior spits...good verse

i mean it wasnt that good, i liked a few lines, it coudl have been way hotter, in an 8 liner u have no room for filler

wheres the filler? sh kid cuz there isnt one

up for hanible maybe hell spit sometime this year

stfu...can u see i was offline peep his location ya'll

The growin room is where u and ya illiterate rhymes should be//
When u had to break down ya rhymes I could tell u was newbie//
I’m Hannibal lector and tribz is the first emcee to be ate’n//
U swear I lost?…ur goin to hell and meeting satin//
Ur an Idian u got a spear..I got chrome to make u moan//
U claimin that was critical force?..u had not 1 punch thrown//
I’m prayin but its for u cause ya soul is soon to be lost//
Ya rhymes are only tight once a year like tha snowman jack frost//

flow..Tie
punches..Tribz
vocab...Tie
originality...Tribz
metaphors..Tribz
personals...Tie

overall....Tribz but alot of played lines in both verses but good for a newbe battle...keep it up



http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=93131

no you were sitting here online for over an hour and a half you fuckin idiot
right in this forum

by the way terrible verse, hurry up with those votes

Dogg he had no punches....lol but whateva he didnt have no personals eitha...lol

Uppin 4 votes.....................

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ LMAO!!!!! funny..

terrible? nigga it only took 6 mins...why ya talkin nigga show a punch or a personal...yea thats what i thought......nigga i juss got home at 5:55 so how was i on fo an hour and a half but anyways quit ya freepostin fo u get introuble...

yo..tribz took this, no question in the world....y'all tied on structure...no really good personals...tibz ate u hannibal........how ironic...your flow was ok, but u had no content, and crappy disses
vote- tribz

the line staht clinched it for tribz for the ending triple metaphor.....for thsoe who don tget it
This kids "FUCKED UP" cuz he "LIKES FRIED BRAIN" (triple meaning if you can decypher)- it means fucked up(shitty fucked up) cuz he lieks fried brain(hannibal lector ate a dude's brain in the movie, and if someone were fucked in his mouth up to his head, fucked up cause he liek brain...good line, hannibal didnt have any nearly as good)

^^sublime u are a d/r............u are tryin to explain tribz verse for him let him do it his damn self.......

flow=hannibal
creativity=tribz
punches=hann
wordplay=tribz
personals=hann


my vote=hannibal........very close but hannibal got this wit better punches

tribz............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................

e.coli shut the fuck up hater............................................. ...........................................lets battle daug who cares if im 0-0 mark ass

when i get back on later cuz im bout to go out to dinner............................................ .................................................. ...................wit ur momz

flow..Tie
punches..Tribz
vocab...Tie
originality...Tribz
metaphors..Tribz
personals...Tie

overall-Tribz

yo sublime, its actually a 4th meaning too, fucked up--> fried brain, as in toked out haha

flow..Tie
punches..lector
vocab...Tribz
originality...Tie
metaphors..Tribz
personals...Lector

aight, both wernt the best. But lector had more punches and where a little harder. It was pretty even, but I think lector took this.
Vote = Lector

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-High Class a.k.a Confusion

just my thoughts on this, since I cant make a real vote. sorry, if you really wanted that vote and all.

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-High Class a.k.a Confusion

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hannibal wins tribz failed to follow the rules... if u wanna know which ones READ THEM YOU LITTLE KID IM SICK OF TELLING U FRONT LINES MC KIDS WHAT TO DO.