Paradøx Vs. 1liner
 

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u spit first
no dick crew ect votes....
no bullshit........

get ready mayne.

u forgot to make a poll/battle man.................and u can join Lyrikal Murder..... drop 5 links and a 10 line spit at Lyrikal Intenions Thread... Lyrikal Intentions a.k.a Lyrikal Murder

i'll tear-ya-tops-----makeN you wish the Terror-stopped
cuz i'll hang Par-a-dox with his very own pair-of-sox
I'll scare-tha-cops with a flare-of-shots-
- cared-to-stop but this par-a-dox fuckin dared-ta-knock/
when he nows Murber is somethin i can't bare-to-watch
so i let my words do it wile I swear-ta-stop
cuz my words will leave this bitch burryed under my Very owm
lair-of-rocks

sorry but i'm workin on vocab and multis sorry it aint a hard verse but complicated

^ain't bad............................................... .................................................. .......

you spit weak shit and very proud of it, you must be a vegan...
your progression is pointless, knowing as you reading, your bars were never compete-ing...
make like c-section and just kill yourself because its hopeless...
my name is too hard for you to pronounce, --- voters need to note this...
you've been played out, like 50 being repetitive about 9 times...
you could pronounce you a badboy, but you still wouldn't shyne...


keystyle....

VOTES!

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=93331

^ thats were C-section says he's killing himself...lol
a vegan is a strick vegetarian
9 times = shots
Badboy artist Shyne

up i need tghis wack ass battle closed>>>>>>>>>.................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .............................

^ no doubt.....

this was weak battle......... but oh well uppin for votes....
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Open- para
Metas - liner
Creavitity - tie
Personals - tie
Flow - tie
Finish - para
Abuse - para

vote = paradox, sorry 1liner, nice work with the words but they lacked heat.

RETURN HONEST VOTES:

lmao GREAT VERSE.. i like the way you used his name and mixed t in every line..

i'll hang Par-a-dox with his very own pair-of-sox
^^Funny^^

waiting till Paradox post a verse.. but i cant vote on this battle cause we in the same crew...

^then why post...... .................
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move on ........................ uppin for votes.....................

tru uppin fo votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!...... .................................................. .................................................. ............

How the fuck can u say we tied in personals he said nothin personal bout me
G?D why -God Why............................................... .....................................

punches: 1liner
flow: 1liner
structure: par
creativity: par
enjoyment: 1liner

vote: 1liner

nice battle by both1

peace

poll plz ..Jesus>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>.................................................. .................................................. .................

1liner knock out............................................... .................................................. ......................................

i did----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

peace

JK, herb begone... don't freepost shit in here okay... first and last warning....................... explain or don't vote....

Dawg he can't poll vote so why should he explain
relax and chill tha fuck out man .................................................. ......................................

i have seen better verses from both here

flow=1
creativity=1
structure=para
punches=para
personals=1..........only saw 1 personal in this enitre battle

my vote=1............very close but 1liner takes it

need ya poll vote dawg plz............................................... .................................................. ...............................

paradox took this, just because his lines were less elementry, your both wack, and 1 liner you should be ashamed to be called a
middle weight, my vote goes to paradox, even tho they were both wack...............
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Yea this comin from a HARD as PIne Cone LMFAO
who the fuck names themselve a fuckin PIne Cone
anyways thanx for tha vote .................................................. .

uppin on this simple ass battle just close this shit
plz............................................... .................................................. .................................................. ...............................................

structure=1
flow=par
vocab=tie
opener=1
closer=1
overal=1

i liked how 1liner's layout how it all sorta rymed up but it was a really good battle n close one too... 1liner one by a hair. so my overal vote goes to 1liner...

upppin up................................................ .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ........

upp i need this closed one mo vote or w/e holla so i can battle again.,........................................... .................................................. ..........

1liner got it

punches: 1liner
flow: 1liner
structure: 1liner
vocab: paradox


both had good verses but i was feelin 1liner verse better it was just so funny

but paradox had a good verse to