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Before Your Gone (Song To My Best Friend, Whos Leavin) Off Album
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My Best Friend For 11 Years Is Moving The 29th Which Is A Day Before His Birthday n' Movin To Arizona.. Which I Am In New York.. I'll Prolly Never See Him Again.. At Least In THe Near Future.. So I Wrote Suttin For Him My Heart Fulfilled, Yet At The Same Time Empty.. Tupac Said He Seen No Changes, Yet It Seems I See To Many.. Maybe For The Better, Maybe For The Worst.. Maybe For The Hurt I Just Cant Disperse In This Verse.. Close Your Eyes.. Think Of The Times Of How.. Toddlers 2 Kids, Kids 2 Youth n’ Youth To Now.. Same Town, Same Streets, Same Raps, Different Beats.. Same Life, Same Friends, Same Goals But Different Ends.. N’ So The Divident Wont Match The Quotient.. Then Notice.. 10 Of Your Closest Friends Who Would- -Die For You Like You’d Die For Them Stand Before Us.. We All In This.. We Hold Hands In Tha Form Of Daps.. N’ Cry For Your Departure In The Form Of Laughs.. We Don’t Perform The Act.. It Just Don’t Fit Us.. So Whether Your Gone Physically- -Mentally We’re Taking You With Us.. Then Go About Our Buisness.. As Best We Could.. SC Is Our Only Dedication Memorialized In Tha Hood.. Visit Tha Bridge.. Where Shorty Left His Mark.. Where’d We Start?.. You Took Your Body To Arizona- -But Left Cha Heart.. Departed, Broken-hearted, I’ll Take A Trip Round The Block.. Walk The Creek, Jump The Tressel, Creep To The Lower End Of Ya Street- -And End At Tha Spot.. They May Say This Is To Much.. But To Mie, This Is- -The Least Of The Most To Do.. What Am I Suppose To Do? They’d Understand If They- -Only Knew How Entirely Close I am To You!.. I’m Attached To You, n’ The Smile I Seen Through The Years.. But Reality Doesn’t Kick In.. So I think The More I Write- -The Longer It’ll Keep You Here.. And The People Here.. Wish More Of The Same.. Its Irony.. N’ Out Of The 2 Sides Every Man Has- -You Brought Out The better Part A Me.. When You Pushin Life, Your Pullin Em More.. All I Got Now Is A Pic Of You n’ Me Tac’d To My Bulletin Board.. Every Seen 11 Years Pass By The Hood That You Spent 7 Here.. Then your Forever Tear’d, But What You Remember Clear.. Before ne1, It Was Me n’ You.. I Love You- If I Didn’t Get Tha Chance, Just Know That I Meant To.. I Spend These Last Few Days And After Just Wondering- -Where The Time In Our Friendship Had Went To.. You Can Pack The Memories, But You Cant Pack The Years.. N’ When Your Not Here, I Got Nothing There To Back These Tears.. My Fights’ Time, Has Reached Its Night Time.. You Were Always There.. So Next Time We Out- -Ima Expect To See You Creepin On My Right Side.. My Shoulders Bare, Where Your Head Would Look Down At Mine.. Yet Inevitable Signs, n’ Memories Only There To Even Out The Times.. Cant Rely On Dreams.. To Dream What We Made It.. Ways Taken, Your Leavin A Day Before Your Birth N’ I’m Gon’ Realize- -( I Cant Even Call You Up To Say It..) So Happy Birthday Kid.. Too Bad I Couldn’t Be Their For Ya Fifteenth.. Ima Take This Like A Piece Of Cake, When I Say I’m Takin u Wit Me.. The Line Gets Drawn.. Its Time To Draw Tha Line.. Accepting Is The Hardest Part.. But Its Time We Say- -Goodbye For Good This Time.. You Took Our Minds n’ Leave Us To Find A New Side.. N’ We All Have Our Own Personal Messages- -But Lemme Try To Sum This Up For Tha Fammily In 2 Lines.. We’ll Stay Together Kid.. Whenever, Wherever Kid, Forever Kid.. N’ You Know You Got Fammily In New York.. So Just Remember This.. (talking) “Damn.. I Was Out Smokin A Cigarette Tha Other Night, Lookin At Tha Sky And That’s When Reality Hit Me.. Like Shit, I Cant Call You Up No More. N’ When It Comes Down To It.. I Really Have No Idea When Ima See You Again. But I Will See You Again… Life’s An Obstacle.. Don’t Let It Get In Your Way.. N’ Remember Ya Home, Ya Fammily.. We Wont Forget You.. So Don’t Forget Us… We Love you Kid” |
the title catched my attention .. i like the idea that you wrote a song for ya boy .. that's keepin it real right there
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^^ sweet internal rhyme scheme .. it was deep as well Quote:
^^this was my favorite .. you hit it deep the lil outro at the end .. that was pretty deep as well .. i really don't see any down fall .. just keep droppin homie .. get at me! peep my sig yo .. and return the favor |
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dope piece,
it was real deep and i could feel you put real emotion into it, rhymescheme was hot,had some real nice multis and internals, normally i dont like readin long pieces but this kept me interested, keep it up :) hit this up http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=94043 |
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this was good man i liked it..
your buddy leavin for arizona. was it calda?....just playing. anyways nice everything i liked it. 7-10 |
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You Can Pack The Memories, But You Cant Pack The Years..
N’ When Your Not Here, I Got Nothing There To Back These Tears one of your better lines in the pice most deff....this was a ncie drop not only did u have good flow you had nice emotion and it was deep i was deff feelin it keep droppin shit like this drop feed on my piece in my sig return the favor! |
aight dawg nice piece
felt the emotion nice flows, nice structure just everythin needed to be a good drop liked every single line, plus the piece kept my interest nice shit resp |
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ya has some nice lines here dawg....some deep shit, could tell you meant it......structure and shit was on point too......yeah nice emotional piece.....Pz man.........
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i was feeling ya dawg that was deep.....that was a nyce tight Piece not much u need to work on......all round ill give it 10/10.....the best read i have seen in a long time...
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my man...11/10!!! ... that was the deepest, most realest shyt i've ever read! I got a few personal pieces myself from when i was growling up but they ain't posted on here yet... it's cool to see that you and you boy was tight like that... I, too, left NY and went to Arizona and me and my patnah were pretty tight like you guys. We almost got signed to def jam but when the deal went sour i decided to join the army... i kinda fucked it up for us but i needed sum'n to support me and my seed .... my man stood by me thru it all just like you and ya boy... i'm definitely relatin' to ya story.... anyways, keep droppin' it like it's hot! ya need to wax that shit and hit up some airwaves!
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yo man was feelin every line in this piece man and for lack of a better word, this shit was flawless. every thing was on point and I mean every from ur rhyme scheme to your emotion and imagery bro. this piece is a definite 110% effort and definetly tops over a best out of 10 rating scale. some real deep shit man keep droppin. I'll be readin up on your shit alot more after readin this man for sure. peace.
yo and if u can man hit up mine and deva's collab called "Deva [feat] Gene Pool - If There Weren't No Music" muchly appreciated thanx in advance. keep up bro. |
ya im wit uski on diss one kuz diss shit waz hella tight u know yo shit and sounds like us spitton from yo hart, not many rappas kan do dat, i give diss a 10/10 kuz... k33p it kr@kin yo
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