Rap~Jesus~ VS JAY JAY
 

rules:
6 lines= 3 barz
reply by 2moro night (try as early as possible)
ima spit first
2moro

peace

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peace

My Verse:

Come on Jay dont u know my lyrics packs intensity that will scare u outa ur witts, cuz just as u c my punchlines u'll be scared of them/
U've just made the biggest mistake in ur entire puny life by battling me cuz ima ring ur rap career to an abrupt end//

This is ur first battle on this site and ima make it unforgetable, dont gert me wrong/
One sided battle..... well this is one cuz u couldnt throw lyrical punches if u had lyrical gloves on//

It will be est if u no show cuz u'll have less embarassment on ur pride.... so i think u should do that/
But if u do decide to show bring all ur stocks u got cuz u'll need them dats da fact//

peace

i'm a vote on this wen the oder kid spits, i should hav enough pms by then, pretty good verse ur lines went on a bit tho!pz............................................ .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .......
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...15&pagenumber=1

check this loss u mite wanna battle me if u think u can beat me

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peace

come on dawg spit ur shit quick ..................................
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peace

My fault! I didn't know that you set up a battle b/w you and I. When did I accept a battle call from rap jesus?

in bitch slap when u made an open challenge and iaccepted and said to set it up but u didnt so i did it!

peace

Aight dawg! Then let me rip it like this!............................................. .......................................

Look here quere:

Headline:

"Jay Jay at last he releases, to smash to pieces the Rap Jesus with his rap thesis"
and that's the reason I'm back from recess, to create masterpieces with mad adhesiveness,

I'll have ya mad at the ease of this, while ya sayin' ya own name in vane,
ya blamin' it on the rain like Milli Vanilli, but my intention remains the same,

better gather ya thirteen rap disciples, matter of fact, snatch a whole batch of rap Moses's,
but after I snap with my rap compulsiveness, you'll notice the explosiveness ya can't get close to this.

uppin' fo votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
check this battle out my peeps!

nice spit dawg upping for votes .................................................. .....................................

peace

flow=Jay Jay
wordplay=neither
vocab=Jay Jay
punches=Jesus

vote=Jay Jay

shorten ur line length,and a little mo' vocab, and u could drop some ill spits RJ.

SG,

we needs ta battle

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jay jay got this one although jesus had nicer punches ur verse was mre of a battle! jesus u had no flow!

vote= Jay

uppin fo votes............................................. .......................................somebody please vote on this honestly

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=94287

Peep Dat Wit An Honest One

And I'll be sure to return da favor for you guys. Thanks.

-Igglybuff

This was a pretty wack battle but I guess gj to both of ya Jesus took this but It was a pretty good battle ... Peace

aight man thanx upping for more votes......................................
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peace

both were good
opener jj
flow jj
structure jj
punches jj
close jj
vote jj

keep it up elevate

hit this wid 1 last vote

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...?threadid=94328

peace

jj took this wit the punches, wordplay, few personals. nice battle by both cats. props to rap jesus.

vote-jj

aight man......... upping for votes.............................
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peace

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well Jesus those were Some long line and they really had no meaning


And Jay jay for bein 0-4 you came with a pretty nice verse I would say prewrit but it had all shit about Rap Jesus so it cant' be

Anyways my Vote JAY JAY

Vote=JAY JAY

plz return tha fav.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=94663

rap jesus: let me just say i felt ya punches were played and ya wordplay on there wasn't too good ya structure was there but ya punches weren't you need to elevate seriously

jay jay ya verse was much betta than ya opponents ya wordplay was nice ya punches were nice overall ya whole verse was betta so thats what got my vote kna mean

both emcees did a good job but overall jay jay got this one holla