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Rap~Jesus~ VS Holster
aight rules:
3 barz only no hate, DR, crew votes. u spit first, and i'll reply in 30 mins if not sooner. gdluck peace |
aaihgt lol dont laugh but does 3 barz meen like 6 lines or wat lol ?????????????????????????????????????????????????? ?????????????????????????
like would it be blah... blah... blah... blah... blah.. blah...????lol |
aaihgt well i guess im spittin 6 lines lol thats wat u rote in the callout so i will --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
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worst mistake ya could ever make, was pikin beef-wit-me...
like in the fall i take a rake, and have u in piles easily... more creative n artistic then leanardo decaprio... got you n ya crew singin they verses liek a rap-trio... like fishin, uve just been filleted and cleaned... all ya been spittin is shit lookin like its commin out of mc dees ice machines... |
hey man wen u come on spit ok ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
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This holster has no lyrical guns how he xpect to beat me in a war/
Huh? Im da one that will fuck u up and leave u wit lyrical scars// This is another battle u'll lose so dont come xpecting to defeat me/ The only way u can win is if i let u... but dont xpect me to show mercy/ Cuz when im in a battle i go all out showin no sympathy for the emcees that i have killed/ U aceptin this callout from me... shit u really looking to get ur blood spilled// peace |
yo man dont get madd aihgt but the first to barz dont even ryme im not hatin im just tellin ya is it suppost to ryme???? like wtf? or am i just rate lost?
^^^^^ This holster has no lyrical guns how he xpect to beat me in a war/ Huh? Im da one that will fuck u up and leave u wit lyrical scars// This is another battle u'll lose so dont come xpecting to defeat me/ The only way u can win is if i let u... but dont xpect me to show mercy/ no beef man??? i dunno im just pissed becuz im loosin battles n the other verse hardly rymes but good spit man |
Open- holster... holster was wack, but at least creative...rj - basic n played
Metas - none Creavitity - holster Personals - none Flow - holster Finish - none Abuse - rap jesus.....holster ya punches were weak as fuck vote = Holster seriously if i could i would vote against both of u. Holster ya rhymes r wack, n rap-jesus those were the most basic played lines ever. RETURN HONEST VOTES: |
aaihgt lol thanx for the vote n the tips ill try to work on ma punches lol
uppin^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^ |
uppin for votes............................................. .................................................. ..................
peace |
METAPHORES - neither
VOCABULARY - neither PUNCHLINES - neither STRUCTURE - Rap~Jesus~ CREATIVITY - tie PERSONALS - neither OPENING - tie CLOSING - Rap~Jesus~ MULTIES - neither FLOW - HOLSTER OVERALL - Rap~Jesus~ (2-1) Return the favor: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=93392 |
aight thx............................................... ...................... 1-1....... uppin fo votes.......................
peace |
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agreed....vote = rap jesus |
2-1 for me still upping for more votes.
thanx man............................................... .. peace |
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-------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Originally Posted by Da_Legend -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Originally Posted by MP Phasiz METAPHORES - neither VOCABULARY - neither PUNCHLINES - neither STRUCTURE - Rap~Jesus~ CREATIVITY - tie PERSONALS - neither OPENING - tie CLOSING - Rap~Jesus~ MULTIES - neither FLOW - HOLSTER -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- agreed....vote = rap jesus --------------------------------------------------------------------------------- |
But props to HOLSTER. U had sum decent shit. But I just felt Rap Jesus' verse a lot better. But both of y'all need to hold back on tha line stretchin. Kinda threw me off on certain parts.
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yo man can u plz poll it, thanx..................................... 3-1................
...... peace |
shit man i have to agree with most, this was a weak battle, with no hard hittin punches and basic vocab.......but someone has got to win so i vote Rap, it was set better, and a TINY bit harder hittin.....but both you need elevatin.........aight Pz
vote=Rap |
aight 4-1 one more vote for me and the battle is closed,............................... thx
peace |
ite rap got this on flow and punches not a bad verse do frm holster keep elavateing man............................................... .................pz
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