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Token 11-22-03 12:00 PM

Tökën Vs. Chrit
 
Rules:
No d/r Votes
No hate Votes
No crew Votes
No Feeding

Non Voters:
Axe E. Um
Aisle 5
Walter Wall
Origin ILL (no offense)
Lethargic

^ Means no feedback as well.

No Vote Swaying

8 Line Max

Chrit 11-22-03 12:03 PM

Blah...

In....

You're still fucked


Token 11-22-03 12:04 PM

^ Rules Said No Vote Swaying :o

Oh And 7 aka Yung Swoop and Taktik cant vote... no beef with him though

Token 11-22-03 12:21 PM

Blah, 8 Lines Match Me.

You actually dope? Whats all this talk of hoax and hexes
Quote:
Originally Posted By The End
(And Chrit would murder you.. He has a voting ring the size of Texas.)

^ There's proof he's all hype.. Your talent has always been lost
You accelerating in this battle is like street racers without nos
You're like the home shopping network.. Never get what you order
Lines so far from hot, it's like you ski'd Thru Alaska to cross the border
You think you're hard for being in jail for beating up two men
That's only half of the beats you had while you were there, chritenen

Chrit 11-22-03 12:28 PM

LMAO...
So no-one can vote...
Fair enough...
Still destroy you kiddo



Man fucka Token... Polar opposite of Superman...
Since when he goes in the booth,,,
....He comes out LESS of a man
Kid'll come with old personal and no matter what he thinks...
We're all tired of em...
...I mean even Zelda hates his links
Kid got his record for given it... While I constantly crush domes...
And I'd call this a barn-burner but that'd put you out of a home...
Attend a Token party whenever I wanna see bashin of gays...
And I was done last night but...
Quote:
ThaRemix23: yeah i gotta pre write so it'll take me till tommorow anyways.

Token 11-22-03 12:30 PM

Attempt at swaying deleted...
And I'll post the entire AIM convo if you really want me to
-Chrit

Dominator 11-22-03 01:00 PM

[font size=4]Tokens Verse[/font]

You actually dope? Whats all this talk of hoax and hexes

quote:
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Originally Posted By The End
(And Chrit would murder you.. He has a voting ring the size of Texas.)
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This was okay...... you could have came stronger with the first line but nonetheless, ive never seen a pm quoted in content in a verse before, it it was creative..... 7.5/10


^ There's proof he's all hype.. Your talent has always been lost
You accelerating in this battle is like street racers without nos

I like this punch.... the 2nd line is great..... street racing is the shit lol.. except i went to court for it...... 9/10

You're like the home shopping network.. Never get what you order
Lines so far from hot, it's like you ski'd Thru Alaska to cross the border

The home shopping network line is good, you dont watch that shit do you? lol.... 2nd like was aight, coulda been a 9 but im taking off a 1/2 point for wording.... 8.5/10

You think you're hard for being in jail for beating up two men
That's only half of the beats you had while you were there, chritenen

This is okay.... it talks about masturbation tho and I think sex punches are stupid..... but ill add a .5 onto this for the fact that he actually came up with a sex line thats not played 7.5/10

[font size=4]Chrits Verse[/font]

Man fucka Token... Polar opposite of Superman...
Since when he goes in the booth,,,
....He comes out LESS of a man

Hmmm..... this was kinda a WaCk punch.... the rhyme scheme is weak, Superman/Man.... comon Chrit your better than that... 6/10

Kid'll come with old personal and no matter what he thinks...
We're all tired of em...
...I mean even Zelda hates his links

Good punch..... The Chrit picture has been used by Brixton and the Zelda/Link play is good..... 9/10

Kid got his record for given it... While I constantly crush domes...
And I'd call this a barn-burner but that'd put you out of a home...

This punch was aight.... 8.5

Attend a Token party whenever I wanna see bashin of gays...
And I was done last night but...

quote:
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ThaRemix23: yeah i gotta pre write so it'll take me till tommorow anyways.
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This is really fed.... you just stole Tokens thing of quoting in the SAME battle.... w/e tho I wont count against that.... 7.5/10

TOKENS SCORES- 7.5 , 9 , 8.5 , 7.5 - 32.5

CHRITS SCORES- 6 , 9 , 8.5 , 8.5 - 32

Opener- Token
Closer- Chrit
Flow- Token
Punches- Token [By .5]
Creativity- Tie

Overall- Token

Chrit 11-22-03 01:02 PM

^^^

I wrote this last night kiddo...

Its impossible when you feed before the kid even posts

Just For your info.........

Dominator 11-22-03 01:07 PM

Oh okay well as I said I didnt count it.... your closer still killed his by a point..... your 2nd 3rd and 4th were better than his combined but your opener was weak.... and can you hit up my battle -vs- EnVy SkiLLs in Elevated Front Lines? Youll see it its up top....

.... Polled

MeNTiLL 11-22-03 01:29 PM

Damn ... Is it juss me ? ... But Token came weak as fucc ... Come on ... "Street Racers witout Nos" ? ... LoL it's only called Nos on Fast & Furious ... If U knew nething about street racin ... And besides that ... It was wack anyway ... The opener was aight ... But besides that the rest of Token's verse was very very weak ... Chrit took this battle easily wit harder hittin' punches ... and wit ... He had a nice finisher to kill the opposition ... So he gets my vote easily ... And one more thing ... LoL at this kid sayin' all them people can't vote ...

Vote : Chrit

Chrit 11-22-03 04:02 PM

1-1.

Not even gonna go there


Dominator 11-22-03 04:12 PM

I didnt leave my link b4 so I am now

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=93079

Mystery~murdera 11-22-03 04:17 PM

edited out by End.. not registered voter.
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13th Disciple 11-22-03 04:18 PM

Edited out by Chit....


Token 11-22-03 05:47 PM

2-1

And FYI... people like reading my battles...
Hence actual decent heads peeping them....

So quit trying to sway kiddo

-Chrit

Brodie Rob 11-22-03 06:10 PM

Not a registered voter



1liner 11-22-03 06:19 PM

Another non-registered person



A2Z 11-22-03 06:26 PM

OK there was really no contest

there wasn't a real solid punch in all of Token's verse

chrit's wasnt he strongest eihter, but

Kid'll come with old personal and no matter what he thinks...
We're all tired of em...
...I mean even Zelda hates his links

If thats played, ive never heard it ebfore


vote= chrit

Token 11-22-03 06:29 PM

^LMFAO... That was by far the worst vote yet... This is why i didn't want to battle chrit....


uppin 3

Chrit 11-22-03 06:41 PM

Quote:
Chrit aka EoE: put in elevated with a 400 post limit for votes
ThaRemix23: ok


Just looked through our aim convo and we agreed on 400 post minimum to vote...

So please do not post in here if you dont meet that requirement
And if Token tries to say he didnt say that I'll put the entire aim convo in here.

~HoTTie~ 11-22-03 06:44 PM

Sorry Chrit But I Think You Lost This One.

Your Verse Just Came Off As Too Corny And Simple For Me.

While Token Had Some Lines That Were More Complex.

"Street Racers witout Nos" ? ... LoL it's only called Nos on Fast & Furious ... If U knew nething about street racin ... MenTill Well If You Knew Anything About Street Racing You Would Know Nos Isn't Just Called That On Fast & Furious. Now Hop Off Chrits Dick :)


But Token...Don't Use A Line Like This Anymore. It Was Just...I Dunno...Blah It Was The Worse.

You think you're hard for being in jail for beating up two men
That's only half of the beats you had while you were there, chritenen.

Token 11-22-03 07:43 PM

^ There we go an honest voter.... thanks hottie..

uppin 4..............................................

Accelerate 11-22-03 09:54 PM

Chrit easily wins..
Token, as much as I tried to find the dopeness in your punches, they weren't there. In all Honesty...The Zelda line from Chrit was pretty dope...and a strong personal. Token, you came out weak as hell and disappointed me, Chrit didn't have to throw down much of a verse.

J.K.O 11-22-03 10:27 PM

chrit is gonna win this battle

but token had a way good verse but chrit just had better, his punches were hittin on stoppable and shit both stayed on flow, and there was nothin wrong with both verses so it all came down to who had the most hardest punches and clearly chrit had the most hardest punches

final vote: chrit

Token 11-22-03 11:55 PM

uppin 5... for some non d/r votes............................................. ............................

SmokaJoka. 11-23-03 12:06 AM

damn...almost every post in this thread is edited by Chrit.....

<<is a registered voter...but for some reason the polls are closed to where i can't select a specific person....

but...nice battle from u both...but i'm in almost all disagreement with majority votes...no hate Chrit...we coo and everything...but Token had better wordplay, nice personals, and harder punches in my opinion....don't get me wrong...Chrit had some nice punches and personals....but Tokens just seemed to hit much harder than Chrit's in this battle....here's a breakdown for u two...

Breakdown
Multis - Tie
Metas - Token
Wordplay - Token
Punches - Tie
Personals - Token
Vocab - Tie
Flow - Tie
RhymeScheme - Chrit
Structure - Chrit

Overall - Token takes a majority just with harder personals...Chrit had alot of punches which is y i place that as a tie....nice battle from u both....good read from each of u....no hate...just a vote....but since i can't poll for some odd reason....can someone edit that shit in....

peace
4:20

TAG 11-23-03 12:17 AM

opener: Token
closer: Chrit
flow: Tie
personals: Chrit
punches: Token
creativity: Token
Originality: Token
win: Token
Not either of yalls best work. Token took this due to creativity and punches tho. Vote=Token

TAG 11-23-03 12:21 AM

Hey yo this poll is closed. Tell a MOD to poll my vote for Token Thanks .................................................. .................................................. ......

Emerge 11-23-03 12:27 AM

opener - token
closer - chrit
personals - token
wordplay - token
punches - chrit
vocab - tie
creativity - chrit
original - token
overal - chrit 3 token 4 so therefore token wins
no hate no beef no nothing just the way i saw it

peace

The End 11-23-03 12:27 AM

^ You aren't a registered voter my friend.



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Edicius 11-23-03 11:22 AM

Chrit had some nice wordplay, ..and some harder hittin punches, ..token had some funny ass aspects in it, ..made me laugh, ..but punches win, ..vote = Chrit

All them freeposters shud be shot = ) jup jup


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