pine-cone vs big_matt
 

ok newbie, here are the guide lines, 5-15 bars, and only 15 mins to write after checking in, ok....... good, and you had better be a half chalenge at least,

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ok big matt, this is finished when i conclude,
giving you a BEATing worse than darude/
i'm the definition of a rap desease,
infecting everyone with my rap sleze/
bitch please, your new, but already your gone,
chalenging me is your worst mistake on RB.com/
like a professional wrestler, your call me our for battle,
your moves look good, but they all be fake/
i'll chalenge you for a battle, its on the court, dont be late,
i'll be stuffing your fase worse than a fat kid on cake/
now as i leave you there defeated, all alone,
remember, your just got beat by a fucking pine-cone/

yo, ok, bit_matt chalenged me and i had to set up the battle and he is a no show, mods if you see this, shut it down adn give me the win.....

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SO what pine-cone you tryin to bo a big shot/
when all reality you be a fucking Wa, Wa, Weetard/
fuckin wit me nigga i may not be a season vet/
but i'll beat your ass whorse then I beat your mammas last night/
so let me leave you dis a rat a tat tat Your fat ass cant rap so dog just
HollaBack

The line: "but i'll beat your ass whorse then I beat your mammas last night/" just spoiled it for matt, cuz it didn't fit right,so cone took this coz off that, and he stringed a bit off it together, not bad tho. Big matt, put a bit more line in it and fit that mama verse and you'd have had this.

pine-cone took this one. doing well son, matt u need to wrk on ur material not much of a verse too. pine-cone had sum nice punches!

pine return the favour pz

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=93663

woah...
umm yeah was that your verse matt?
Hint: Verses are suppose to rhyme.

Punches- Pine
Metas- Pine
Wordplay- Pine
Flow- Pine

Overall- Pine

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=93912

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now when this thight shit pops in my head man i got to right it/
I herd every time you see a dount your fat ass gets excited/
herd bout you always actin black/
when you no that your favrite singer is craig mack/
and home boy you cant even rap/

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My vote goes to pine cone in every catorgory... plz return the favor in my battle, thanx...........

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=93904

^^ the link........

yeh thanks guys, and big matt, you gotta elavate, go to wackness emergency center or something, i could kick your ass with out a keyboard........................................
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pine cone got this barely wit his disses tha otha cat was juss plan out whack elevate........


hit dis up i took time to hit this take time and hit mine.............

damn i forgot tha link my bad dawg
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=93752

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METAPHORES - pine-cone
VOCABULARY - neither
PUNCHLINES - pine-cone
STRUCTURE - pine-cone
CREATIVITY - pine-cone
PERSONALS - neither
OPENING - pine-cone
CLOSING - pine-cone
MULTIES - neither
FLOW - pine-cone

OVERALL - pine-cone

wordplay-none
meti4's-pine
multi's-none
structure-both
flow-none
punches-pine

vote-pine

Honest Vote Here Please

uppin, keep the votes commin, one more and i win..........
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this one goes to pine cone it was a one sided battle the other guy didnt have no punches and it looked like he was scared to dis him.

pine= good job man nice flow n punches.

big matt= dont give up man keep tryin ull get better

vote=pine