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pine-cone vs big_matt
ok newbie, here are the guide lines, 5-15 bars, and only 15 mins to write after checking in, ok....... good, and you had better be a half chalenge at least,
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ok big matt, this is finished when i conclude,
giving you a BEATing worse than darude/ i'm the definition of a rap desease, infecting everyone with my rap sleze/ bitch please, your new, but already your gone, chalenging me is your worst mistake on RB.com/ like a professional wrestler, your call me our for battle, your moves look good, but they all be fake/ i'll chalenge you for a battle, its on the court, dont be late, i'll be stuffing your fase worse than a fat kid on cake/ now as i leave you there defeated, all alone, remember, your just got beat by a fucking pine-cone/ |
yo, ok, bit_matt chalenged me and i had to set up the battle and he is a no show, mods if you see this, shut it down adn give me the win.....
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SO what pine-cone you tryin to bo a big shot/
when all reality you be a fucking Wa, Wa, Weetard/ fuckin wit me nigga i may not be a season vet/ but i'll beat your ass whorse then I beat your mammas last night/ so let me leave you dis a rat a tat tat Your fat ass cant rap so dog just HollaBack |
The line: "but i'll beat your ass whorse then I beat your mammas last night/" just spoiled it for matt, cuz it didn't fit right,so cone took this coz off that, and he stringed a bit off it together, not bad tho. Big matt, put a bit more line in it and fit that mama verse and you'd have had this.
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pine-cone took this one. doing well son, matt u need to wrk on ur material not much of a verse too. pine-cone had sum nice punches!
pine return the favour pz http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=93663 |
woah...
umm yeah was that your verse matt? Hint: Verses are suppose to rhyme. Punches- Pine Metas- Pine Wordplay- Pine Flow- Pine Overall- Pine http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=93912 |
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now when this thight shit pops in my head man i got to right it/
I herd every time you see a dount your fat ass gets excited/ herd bout you always actin black/ when you no that your favrite singer is craig mack/ and home boy you cant even rap/ |
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My vote goes to pine cone in every catorgory... plz return the favor in my battle, thanx...........
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=93904 ^^ the link........ |
yeh thanks guys, and big matt, you gotta elavate, go to wackness emergency center or something, i could kick your ass with out a keyboard........................................
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pine cone got this barely wit his disses tha otha cat was juss plan out whack elevate........
hit dis up i took time to hit this take time and hit mine............. |
damn i forgot tha link my bad dawg
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=93752 |
uppin, lets finish this battle, .............................
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yo, people votem, uppin 2..................................
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METAPHORES - pine-cone
VOCABULARY - neither PUNCHLINES - pine-cone STRUCTURE - pine-cone CREATIVITY - pine-cone PERSONALS - neither OPENING - pine-cone CLOSING - pine-cone MULTIES - neither FLOW - pine-cone OVERALL - pine-cone |
wordplay-none
meti4's-pine multi's-none structure-both flow-none punches-pine vote-pine Honest Vote Here Please |
uppin, keep the votes commin, one more and i win..........
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this one goes to pine cone it was a one sided battle the other guy didnt have no punches and it looked like he was scared to dis him.
pine= good job man nice flow n punches. big matt= dont give up man keep tryin ull get better vote=pine |
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