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TAG v. Saving Grace
6-15 lines
No bullshit, unexplained, dr etc votes. Due 15 minutes after we BOTH check in Blind spit |
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SG |
Checkin in also G'Luck............................................ .................................................. ............
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Why in the hell you gonna flap ya lips?//
lyrikal murder my ass, yo aint killin this// weak ass rhymes like a kid wid cancer// keep you on ya toes like a ballet dancer// pistol slap you cross yo head// yo' homies is already out the game// bullet to they chest, they grill and they fo' head// so step up and prepare to elevate... for you shame my name// i will punish yo' ass leave you dead on the ground// all that you hear is the ::clat clat:: sound// of my nine as i empty the clip// fuck killin you i am just breakin ya hips// so i can still run up and kick you in the jaw// then leave you there, to watch you crawl// SG i think i suck, gimme some feed back plz |
Hey yo I'm sick of takin shit from newbies who don't like me
They keep attackin me like a crazy muthfuckin Kamakzi You must be suicidal bitch and a straight up nazi Your words have no effect and your bullets bounce off me Now I say my Grace while he trys ta take a different approach While I smoke this joint and burn him with the roach Toss gas on your ass and watch ya burn in the flame Shoot you and watch your blood put out the blaze Saving Grace I hope your religious cause you need to do some confessin Not even suckin your pastors dick will give ya a good enough blessin |
uppin fo some votes please .................................................. .................................................. .....
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vote = TAG
SavingGrace has to basic of a vocab, less lyracle content that has been heard bef0, little punch'z |
dude, you kicked my ass, i think anywayz............. uppin for some votes y'all!!!!!!!................
SG |
you gotta work on ya vocab, get a thes0urus, but hey, at least you get called 0ut, n0 muthahfuckah on dis forum has yet called me 0ut, and i've called 0ut about 15 people and still n0 reply'z and thats been in the last 2 dayz i joined this gay ass f0rum
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uppin fo some votes please! (2) .................................................. ..................................................
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damn, yall, vote!
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both of you guys need to up the anti a notch but i gave this one to saving grace... though her vocab was a little simple, she still seemed to have a better flow and her lines rhymed better...ex:
You must be suicidal bitch and a straight up nazi Your words have no effect and your bullets bounce off me nazi and off me just don't convince me... i'm a real critical type of dude and if it don't rhyme i gotta say it don't rhyme... i also had a hard time believing the two of you were gun-totin' emcees... let the thug go and show some real skills... real hip-hop is coming back and all this thug shit is gonna die out... just my opinion... there's other ways to talk shit and get ya point across without gunplay |
SavingGrace - You came to generic, you had no vocab and your verse period.. was just plain ol' simple
TAG - You're verse a lil better. Your verse was atleast a lil more complex than his and sum of your lines weren't played.. Vote - TAG |
uppin fo some honest votes (3) You know I always hit ya back.............................................. .........................................
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ite tag got this da other dude was weak, tag got it on mainly punches and flow.tag man your better than this stop battleing newbs man.look in bitch slapped if you want a quick battle, if not cool.............................................. pz
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METAPHORES - TAG
VOCABULARY - neither PUNCHLINES - neither STRUCTURE - TAG CREATIVITY - TAG PERSONALS - TAG OPENING - TAG CLOSING - TAG MULTIES - neither FLOW - TAG OVERALL - TAG Return the favor: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=93392 |
uppin (4) fo votes .................................................. .................................................. ......
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I can't vote but i would agree with what everone is saying....you can too basic wasn't bad for mabye your first battle... your last line didn't even rhyme but hey thats ok keep trying look at my record man....TaG you win but you need to stop recycling ... Pz
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yup Tag got this-vote
punches,sustainment,flow all count and he got them nout special produced but Tag has the right idea pz MAKE SURE YA CHECK THIS OUT PZ Violent~Wordz |
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Vote-TAG
Both had slightly weak vocab punches nor multies...... other wise TAG took all catgories ............................. |
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