Jay Jay vs. Cutthroat
 

checkity check in dog

I'm checkin in i'm bout to spit.............................................. .................................................. .................................

aight!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!

Jay i'll beat ya no-prob you suck like a blow-job dawg ya flows-flawed you wack and i got ya heart beatin fast like ya "nostril" is "chockful" of crack I'm like a terrorists you tha "hostage" dawg you can't "stop this" i'm a lyrical criminal crazy you can't phase me i'm "unpredictable" ya flows are "dispecable" sayin you a rapper dawg you must be "hypocritical" and don't get mad when you lose and start "throwin fits" i'll kill ya go to ya funeral and tell ya fam i send my "condolences" ya flows are a "wack outcome" this will be ya last battle like Jay's "black album" dude you can't see me ya something like Blind Fury cept you have no "fury" this is ya trial i'm the judge bitch and the "jury" i'll have ya beggin for mercy dawg you better start steppin in a hurry for i locate ya body to a cemeturry

man this dude a NO SHOW.............................................. .................................................. ................

Hey yo look:

Dawg ya better Wreckcognize before a Swanndive like Greg Lou without the gayness,
off the platform with 12 guages-and like Billy The Kid "Make Ya Famous",

After I dismantle ya ammo with this mic and make you another example-then I'll cut ya throat,
make ya earn ya alias and expose ya ladiness, word of advice "up for votes",

Youz an M without the M-and a J without the Z-and for me-this is Eazy without the E,
So I don't need X to pound and drown ya G-listen to me,

How pathetically-I alphabetically destroyed you and all ya existence,
Cuz my persistence overlooks ya inconsistent resistence from a distance.

Sorry this took so long. My job called me out several times. With my job, there is nothing I can do about that. I do apologize though.

yo jay jay took this oone but tight battle, you both have skill. props to you both........................ my vote jay jay...........................................
...................... yo i voted on yours now vote one this old battle, i just want it to be finished cause its been there for weeks...................................
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...9805#post929805

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aight lemme see...i saw jay jays record n thought he'd come l;ike a synical newb...well he did..lol..jus playin

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punches-jay
sustainment-jay
structure-none
flow-jay
creativity-cut
wordplay-none
metas-jay
overall-jay

not bad but he got my vote
MAKE SURE YA HIT THIS UP OR I'LL JUS PESTER YA PZ
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=93576

Advice for ya'll....
take the "..." outta ya verses...shorten them n check other peeps structures
e.g chrit pz

uppin' fo votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!

jay got this shit wit his harder punches and disses that otha cat need to work on his structure his shit was kinda hard to read...

Vote:jay

^^i forgot tha link will u plz return da favor honeslty
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...0046#post930046

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damn close i say, Jay Jay edged it out, cutt u good tho

check this.............................................. ..................
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...?threadid=93824

THIS BATTLE WAS A ONE-SIDED FROM DA GET GO KNA MEAN...

JAY JAY: YA VERSE WAS AIGHT YOU JUST NEED TO WORK ON YA PUNCHLINES AND YOUR WORDPLAY BUT OTHA THAN THAT YA VERSE WAS AIGHT KNA MEAN.

CUTTHROAT: YOU NEED TO SET UP YA BATTLE VERSES IN ANOTHER STRUCTURE CAUSE I DIDN'T EVEN TAKE DA TIME TO READ YA VERSE KNA MEAN WORK ON DAT AND ELEVATE ALOT MORE THEN CONSIDER BATTLING ON RB HOLLA


MY VOTE GOES TO JAY JAY CAUSE HIS VERSE WAS ALL AROUND WORTHWHILE BIG UPS TO BOTH EMCEES THOUGH HOLLA

verses was aight not too bad

cutthroat had this due to more punches

Blind Fury was crazy, good line

elevate Jay and keep up wit yo vocab

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My Perspective

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punches-jay
sustainment-jay
structure-none
flow-jay
creativity-cut
wordplay-none
metas-jay
overall-jay

the reason i've chosed him because i honestly think he hit harder cut is was kinda hard to catch to flow next time use ah dash on ... at the end of ur rhyme cuz ish was confusing son so my vote goes to

-jay

yo hit this shit up wit an honest vote then i will vote on your battle honestly

http://[url]www.rapbattles.com/...&threadid=93687[/url]

thanks yo.....

uppin' fo votes.....................By the way, somebody that voted on this battle said that they like cuthroat's blind fury punch. Has anybody noticed how I used the two finalists of MC Battles II in my first line. Wreckognize and Swann!! Voters keep sayin' that I didn't use any wordplay, but isn't this wordplay. I don't think anyone has realized yet that the finalists names were used in my first line to throw a stiff blow at cuthroat. Check it out, it you would please. Thank you!

Jay JAy has won this....other huys punches weak and flow shit.....Jay much better, punches quite good 2........VOTE_JAY


Hit this up, return the honest vote

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...highlight=toner

Thankz

Forgot to poll vote.........will do now so now.........hit up that battle in the link above^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Ta

cut ur barz dont even rhyme and they extended.... keep elevatin


jay jay i dont like the spacing of your barz but at least u can rhyme

vote-j

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uppin fo votes my fellow emcees............................................ .................................................. .........

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Opener: Jay
Punches: Jay
Personals: Jay
Flow: Jay
Closing: Jay
Win: Jay .