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angellicalr vs. [-!F.A.T!-]
5-10 bars (10-20 lines)
all rules apply drop by Tuesday noon... |
didnt see this tuesday midnight guy i got school durin the day............................................... .................................................. .......................
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imma break this punks spine..374 posts and your still a FRONT LINE!!...
run by this is fun guy...give the pistol light so how you GUN-SHINE!!...[gonna shine] fix your fate...fat's gon EAT-R...with little taste...one punch this kid'll break...[eat-r fats an eater] slit your face...you aint even half sick so how you a MID-ILL WEIGHT!!!...[middle weight his user title] i drop anvels kid...one punch you feel kid..how "R" u "ANGELLIC!?!?!?!"... kiss and tell bitch!...give away the raw like sushi..call me SELL-FISH!!...[selfish] MANNNN..asked for a win dumps on ya spine you got shit-back i got my shit to fix that feline...in my "KIT-KAT"...you in 4 bars i ripped that...[get it?] SHUNNED!!!! |
LAST LINE EDIT: you in those 4 bars i rpped that
uppin for you ....................................... ............................................... .................................................. ... .................................................. ....... |
uppin for u 2 see this dont forget
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yo...
This kid's F.A.T. literally cause he bitin off tha vets... And that's a fact, he's "hearin" me while i'm WRITING TEXT! tha only hotness this kid's got is inbetween his folds... he only flows when he hits his stomach n it rolls...n...rolls... << say it smoothly >> ur jus a lil soul-less, u is who nobody will notice... know this... u seem hopeless, wantin to be hilarious but, yo, ur jokeless... hit-less, every single one of ur hits missed... Mr. D!ckless... he's huge like Biggy but Big's dead... u? UR JUST FINISHED!!! F.A.T. is F-ar A-fter his T-ime, before orginizations of bars n lines... his hardest rhymes were jus scars to mine...STARTIN TIME!!! yo, yo, yo... 508? get it straight, we can do this personal, ready? don't delay UR fate... << see his verse >> SET... GO!!! OH NO, this whole stack of cakes will break u jack, right back to tha IHOP on 50-8... elevation? hit his head on a cloud? forget that, he needs a revelation...say it loud... "gay n proud"... i guess that defines u... part 2: tha only time ur on top is in an asain crowd... even wit "bold" words u won't be recognized...oh, dry ur eyes... try? againt u? why? u suck period... while u eatin at hooters... fill up on "juicers" n "tater" fries... << think about it >> this guy ain't got a profile like a pedophile wit a mic child...now that's wild... u better hope u don't get caught... tha Kazaa media's r lookin for ur 508 files... done... yo, it's over, left u deaf dumb n blind, wat's left of his rhyme? nuthin but a tangled...strangled... an angle of this angel's time... this was jus a RAPE'IN CRIME!!! |
hmmmmm
Flow: Tie Punch: Angel Metas: Angel Struct: Tie Enjoy: Angel This was ok...Fat's best line was the kitkat line...which is played to hell..ok battle..angel takes it http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=93937 pretend its vida and hit it |
lmfao u realy thought he won wow...ok hhm hmmm
w/e wow .................................................. ........ uppin |
:noob:
lose the bolds...-.."..~ all that shit and the played lines youl stand more of a chance |
F.A.T had this kid beat-but he stopped......u had 8 decent lines
angelicR had 20 half-way decent lines.....but more meti's multi's personals'.......... FAT crushed AngellicR in wordplay.....no doubt in my mind FAT's better....but kill the ~.."b...garbage and go to the max amounta lines..... Angelic....nice drop-gettin better.....MY vote...ANGELICR |
angel took this, breakdown-
punches-tie flow-FAT multis-tie metas-tie enjoyment-angel structure-angel most played lines ever-FAT overall-angel close but FAT ya lines were too played man be more original but not bad, angel some gud shit but alot of lines n not that much eye-catchin stuff keep it shorter its more effective, pz! angel i've jus gotta finish 1 of my 2 battle then i'll set it up! |
ehh w/e idc
3-0 u lol ................................ ................................ ............................... ....................... ................................. ....................... |
lol, glad to see that u ain't pissin ur pants n moanin like most noobs when they're down...w/e though...no beef...
UPPIN TO CLOUD N9NE HOP ABOARD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Fat's shit seemed force....wack opener
needs elevation Flow: Tie Punch: Angel Metas: Angel Struct: Tie (angelical feel off later down da verse) vote = angel |
uppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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aight F.A.T was good but Angel was better
Opener: F.A.T Flow:Angel Structure:Both need work but i give it to F.A.T Punches:Angel Meties:Angel Closeing:Angel Overall:Angel Hit this battl wid an open vote http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=94049 Peace |
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