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Tag vs Technician
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Blind Spit No hate, unexplained, bullshit, etc votes Spit within 20 minutes after we BOTH check in Done tonight |
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Am I supposed to be scared battlin the Technician?
Cause when I get finished, more than your rhymes will need fixen/ Tech my ass, your more like a computer nerd dyke Cause you can't even fix your flows when you pre-write/ Why you name yourself sumthin you can't even pronounce Look like a pussy the way you stick dicks in your mouth/ Sittin on your comp tryin ta hack just like the Matrix All this Technician is lookin at are gay porn date lists You can't deal with the fire when I bring the heat Cause one things fo certain, I'll fix your winning streak |
My Tactical Attacks Givin' Actual Facts, TAG can't rap/1
He's Relaxin' a Gasp Livin' wit virtual ass, FAG and a half/2 My Text Agitates Gurls Enough, his best states worlds of bluff/3 UnTolerable AGression I hurl it up, like burning paper you just curlin' up/4 I see just a TAG, he don't come wit a price/5 No tricks in the Bag, and ya lyrics ain't nice/6 11 and 7 and your straight as cocky as all/7 but Next thing you grillin' is the hospittle wall/8 Terrain Adjustable Garuntee, I'll walk all over you and it'll be free/9 Trains Ageing Gullabley, Dupe you off the tracks before ya punches hit me/10 |
nice drop...........les get some votes up in here......
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METAPHORES - -Technician-
VOCABULARY - -Technician- PUNCHLINES - TAG STRUCTURE - TAG CREATIVITY - tie PERSONALS - -Technician- OPENING - TAG CLOSING - -Technician- MULTIES - -Technician- FLOW - TAG OVERALL - -Technician- (5-4) Return the favor: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=93392 |
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To me.. Neither one of you spit nice, But I'll give this to "Technician" because his verse was sum what decent.. Tag, You kinda wrote your verse like you were a kindergartener and what not...
Stand out lines: There were none |
METAPHORES - -Technician-
VOCABULARY - -Technician- PUNCHLINES - TAG STRUCTURE - TAG CREATIVITY - tie PERSONALS - -Technician- OPENING - TAG CLOSING - -Technician- MULTIES - -Technician- FLOW - Tie It was an okay battle, But tech just came a little harder, and had a pretty good punch in there. Good battle though. hey tech return the favor and vote in the battle im in right now, aight. Vote = Technition OUT -High Class a.k.a Confusion |
opening - tag
flow - tag ( tech lines were streched) punches - tag vocab - both personals - tag metas - tech multis - tag closing - tie (tags had a personal but tech punch was complex) overall - tag |
if u 2 polled that would be great...........why read a battle and vote ur opinion w/out polling?
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Technition got this due to more or better
vocab punches wordplay TAGs verse was way too basic for this battle |
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v0te=tag
i think he had betta multi'z n punchez then technician n betta structure. it waz a damn close battle, ya'll b0th g0t mah respect if ya'll w0uld, check 0ut my post at http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=93608 4 da "JaYDeE vs High Definition" thread and give some honest v0tez please |
i jus think when people try and get WAY to lyracle it fuckz them uP makez them lose a battle....
s0rry i aint at a 100 posts to v0te tag.... but i beleive y0u won this battle.. im d0wn wit ya style |
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Techinician took this, he flowed very well a nd it was easy to follow, TAG tried too but tech just edged it, good verses tho, from both parties.
This was my favorite line:"UnTolerable AGression I hurl it up, like burning paper you just curlin' up/". I like the burning paper metaphore. |
Technician, as you are online right now, could you vote on my 2 battles plz, here the links:http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=93900
and http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...06&pagenumber=2 thanks i appriciate it. |
my vote goes to tech nice multis wordplay and punches!
tag u had sum good punches but over all i felt tech got this one pz................................................ .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ..................................... |
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