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Axiom 11-24-03 07:40 AM

Diss The Person Above You
 
Do Like The Title Says

Six Lines MINIMUM

Born To Kill 11-24-03 10:36 AM

Axe ain't sharp...he's so dull he's round...
Has pics of chicks all over...so you'll think he gets down.
But he don't, he fronts more than entrance doors...
Only reason the babes let him click tha pic...they're fuckin whores.
So get back ta modding, or whatever it is ya do...
And make sure ya wallet's fat, the girls sure ain't there for you.

Horti 11-24-03 10:47 AM

Born to kill? or born to spill...semen on on any men wishin at will
Ya pissin it still.....laughin how i attack a so-called champion
I betcha bleached up or beat up....like Eminem or Hanson,
All those names onya scroll been played like Marylin Monroe
Ain't born to kill....but you was close tho....ho....ya born to die
Lets battle 6 bars bitch I'll eat u like Peacan Pie.........

The One! 11-24-03 01:40 PM

I'm rippin you...who ya look up to...... and ya alias/
showing every newbie on the site who the best at this/
I rip you apart like Hulk Hogan did his shirts/
"H-o-r" like the bitch on the side of ya verse/
with the first 2 lines...... i killed.... the "t....i"/
the next 4....this lil "Hor" was sure to die/

Born To Kill 11-24-03 03:13 PM

Ya the one who sucks dick, deep inta the night...
Ya the one who fucks prick, and don't put up a fight.
Ya the one who who can't win, just look at tha stats...
Ya couldn't flow with a fin, now how sad is that?
So get on outta here, ya missing ya rocks...
The One who ain't Great, cept at suckin cocks.

LoCo 11-24-03 03:41 PM

Born To Kill is fuckin so white makes Elton John look ' hood
Dont get smacked up by a faggot, u still aint good
Cant handle it when im dismatilin shit
Clashin clips knockin you out of your ' zone
2 bars left and u already gaspin
last one wigga, u still aint no wtf just happened

Crulley 11-24-03 04:05 PM

u think your loco essay/
just listen to any1 u aint impressay/
ur rhymes are bad and messay/
wait let me tell something and confessay/
my rhymes are more youres r lessay/
take this advice and stay very far away/
cos u nuthin but a wannabe essay/

bouncedoggydog 11-24-03 05:49 PM

^ Can I get a Whack Whack!!

Ahhh damn, another wayward child spitting ryhmes irritaing as Spam!/

Just another newbie free posting w/o a plan, probably next ~2B~ banned!/

If I ever spit as whack, RB take my Membership back/
Cuz it's talent ya lack, like a soldier minus ~A~ flack/

Yeah I bet ya can see from the bottomless depths of RB's W.E.C./
Your only view is up, yet elevations keeps eluding ya on'da M I C/

My rythemic perfection brings ya stale spit massive corrections/
'Disfucntional' lines along with 'Soft' 'Bars', Draining ya 'Member' from beCUMing a 'Pop' 'Star'/ Read between the lines!

Slipt 11-24-03 06:06 PM

CONSTANT SLACKER IS RIGHT THIS CRACKER STILL COULD'NT RAP IF HE WAS'NT WHITE / IGNORANT TASTE I HAD BETTA AT A GARBAGE WASTE AND YA MOMA'S PLACE BELOW HER WAIST /
AWW MAN PUSSY MAKES MORE RENTS THAN THIS NIGGA COULD MAKE CENTS / ONLY THING THAT CAN SELL YA RHYMES IS NICKS,DIMES, & NINES IF YA DONT SHOOT YA SELF 5 TIMES B-4 YOU REACH THE SECOND LINE YA MIGHT SELL YA NUSERY RHYMES / GET YA SHIT TOGETHER OR DONT NEVER COME ON THIS SITE EVA //

GIVEN 11-24-03 07:38 PM

yo slipt i think you slipped
bitch i suggest you quit
you cant spit you twitch
dont talk shit cause im equipped
with grenades,gats and clips
dog ur new to RB
first you need an army
and stop taking rhymes from barney

peace

AxL is God 11-24-03 08:14 PM

^You all love just what I type right ?
That shit must me live
Cuz I could drop cum lines
And this kid would bite it, tight
My prose devastate you, don't want fistcuffs
Cuz my punches will have ya sippin ham through sip cups

PS- You're what? Oh yea..you're whack.

Slipt 11-24-03 08:35 PM

THIS GUY A RAP GUTTER SHAKIN LIKE JOE U STUDD STUDDER
MA HIGH NIGHT CAP IS SENDING SHOTS THRU U LIKE BUTTER

JACKSON GAY LIFE STRAIGHT WIT KOBE BUT U DA ONE RAPED
SACKEM' TILLTHEY ESCAPE I THOUGHT I HEARD YA WORDS TAPED

ON MTV OR BET ONE OR THE OTHER OR MAYB FROM YA MOTHER
IM A G THAT C A FAKE WANNA B BROTHER LIKE NIGHT U SHUDDER

I OWN THIS CYPHER I IGNITE YA IM FLUID AND TRU TO SCREW
I DONT LIKE YOU WAT A BITCH LIKE U TO DO FUCK U AND YA CREW

Slim Thug 11-24-03 10:14 PM

Diss tha nigga above me well that bitch would be Phayme,
me gettin to hate on this nigga now this is just a shame,
im droppin bombs on dis nigga like im afghanistan,
this niggas life is on short circuit cuz im checkin in,
im too thoed for dis damn thread so im out this hoe again!

Meters 11-24-03 11:44 PM

YungHeadWrecka, once older and wiser,
Now to emcee weakness, he is my prime epitomizer,
coined the terms 'wack' and his opponents all looked 'ill',
So a self-conscious Wrecka became emaciated on the pill,
His head bobs and throbs like he actually has a dope idea,
But only to Emcee's with zero wins is he a panacea (cures all disease),
For a finale we'll talk in his terms to make him understand,
job lacking little g, sayin' bitch so often doesn't fill the supply to create the demand

GIVEN 11-24-03 11:46 PM

man u fake you need to start actin
cause u rappin has got me laughin
u faggot u probaly suck dick with a pashion
ya rhymes drop and always be crashion
go a head , headwrecka cause we head bashin
a free AGENT how bout this be patient
cause either way your gonna take it
with michael jackson naked

Norte 11-25-03 03:20 AM

you kno what Given, i dont kno shit about you-
but if i could, i'd come thru the monitor, slap the shit up out you-
take aim with my flows, u cant do a damn thing to hold me-
spit all recycled lines and have you sweatin to the oldies-
i hate net thugs who dont drop tracks but talk trash-
tired of gettin slept on? then take a fuckin nap-
cuz yo, i'll devour this weak who's also known as a coward and geek-
fuck a commercial, ya verse illustrates the power of cheese!-

_ÑÒÀßÙSÈ_ 11-25-03 04:02 AM

i don't know what a norte is, but like jacking an old-e bottle ya'll get your forte ripped
your just a whore hey-bitch, and even newer then me to this site
like john booth, i'll shoot you on stage...to leave you bleeding on mics
repeating my rhymes, mann i turn biters over my knee
and openly pee, i smoke so much weed...you'll be choking on green
nigga your punches wuldn't be stunning...if you were groping a bee

Trah Siph 11-25-03 05:16 AM

Yeah...I'm a youth on the map... gotta love of rap
But,With a name like NO abuse...Man must be a shit bag
Scared of physical contact....Scared Of Word onslaughtz
With a mark outta ten dis boy getz no less than nought
Just a thought...Why he got a skull n cross bones representin sickness?
When the only sickness he can claim in contractin Syphallis

YoungBlack 11-25-03 10:40 AM

MY FLOWS SICKER THEN AN ILL PATIENT, WHY U BITCHIN
OH CUZ YOU GOT THE NAME NOK'D VIZION
I SEE U GOT A PICTURE OF A PIT BULL
U BETTA LEARN TO BITE BEFORE U BARK,
BECAUSE I LEARN TO RIDICULE
AND IS DAT PICTURE YA BOYFRIEND
CUZ YOU PUTTIN HIM ONA PDISTTO

Trah Siph 11-25-03 11:49 AM

and you said I was shit????????? WHAT??????

Young Black??? New Jewish rapper on the scene
Pretendz to be black so his race don't intervene
Why lie you ain't black son...Your just feeble
But Nok comes evil...Spittin flows doth be lethel
So fuck black, never peep my shit again
Cos I'll Beat ya fuckin head piece til ya brain hits the pave

Born To Kill 11-25-03 04:49 PM

Ya used "black" four times is ya verse, ya got issues?
I mean, I know it pertains ta his name, but that's misuse.
Must be a problem with ya own fuckin skin ya in...
Not even black yaself, maybe a Chinaman named Chin?
Or maybe an arab with a whole damn harum...
Nah...this cat shows his face around babes...does nothin but scare em.

Translucant 11-25-03 05:11 PM

Born to kill oh look at you your a veteran
to bad there isnt one MC that your better than
your rhymes are old
and your rhymes are played out
you think your so damn hot
then prove it cause a fuc|<in droute
dissin on nok'd talkin bout some harum
your just a male wannabe Christina Aguilara
Thats right Born im the one whos burnin ya
cry me a river bitch
go home to saburbia

Norte 11-25-03 05:31 PM

Norte => Norteños => 14 => ::

your not good, your a mime, your seen as wood in your time-
but you do have the skill to win.. back in the woods of your prime-

understood as the slime, you bring meaning to no sound-
cuz the stench in your verse could make bars of speed stick slow down -
and content is vital, my lines invent the bible -
it's obvious I'm not your god, you just thought my name meant idol-

bouncedoggydog 11-25-03 06:19 PM

It's time ~2~ Cluster Fuck, this Buster 'Shmuck'/
Like a Jew Driving a Trackter Truck, plain Fucked/

Just a punk Farm hand, an Estrella spitting ryhmes so putrid ~N~ Bland/
This be ya introduction to a Vet's Chest imprinted with ~a~ Black Hand/

SouthSider Surreno Spitting heat ~N~ snatching ya Deniro/ Excavating ya thoughts ~N~ sending ya str8 ~2~ Inferno/

Ya whack lines, equate to hack time, like ya hommies up North Sucking on 'Pink-Nines'/

Prison lingual for ya sorry 'Gringo', '13' times hitting without a single/

(Norte's just a buster! Whack ass lyrics, come with some heat!)

jego 11-25-03 06:23 PM

damn fool... i didnt know they came as bad as you
u spit so bad even a clown would get mad at you
ive had it dude, new fools hopin to improve
until they quit quickly cuz they perdictably always lose
and norte....your the fucking prime example
get the fuck off this site all you do is ramble off ya mandible
push the fuckin back button so you can get back
to wat ya better at, fingerin ya crack to man ass
fag, i dont give a damn waht ya name stands for
norte- means 14-- means weak emcee crack whore
you dork, find a new fucking practice fagget
and if u reply to me youll get your 14 year old ass kicked



I DARE YOU NORTE

GIVEN 11-25-03 07:17 PM

so you wanna play truth or dare
im gonna see whos really scared
cause me,shit i be truthless
when im rapping im ruthless
ill take ur mic and beat u wit it
u got somethin better then spit it
u pissed in yo pants then shited
u aint kickin nobodys ass
cause dog in rappin youll neva last

bouncedoggydog 11-25-03 07:36 PM

Damn this cats occupation is kicking my ass, must be fiction cuz ya making me laugh/ profile

Heatless is the spit ya brought forth, in a three man battle ya still placing Fourth/

Just fourteen already Bitched like a prom queen, little tyke my Spitz'll make ya Gutz squeem/

Cuz I'm sealing ya fate, when I grab this mic ~N~ spit up ya face/
Burnt 2 a wicked disgrace, like a rappin Rue Paul mixed in w/mace/

You may be GIVEN but I take! grab a hold of ya neck ~N~ Shake/
Shit must be what ya Ate, cuz ya spitt'n shittier than Flamin-Jake/

jego 11-25-03 07:45 PM

godamnit cypher is like the wackness emergency center
so herbs can learn when i diss on them how they can get better
like the bitch above^ look what you wrote dawg!!!
and he got that emcee name cuz he given so many blowjobs
hold on, stop rhymin, rb would be tight with out him
hes GIVEN up a fuckin wins and hes just mad about it
so without a doubt kid, you cant stop me
like shiverin winters, you just cant drop heat
damn, i should stop teachin this, fag wants to get on top me!
and changed ur fucking avatar, you stupid fucking wannabe


intended to GIVEN. other cat posted before i clicked.

bouncedoggydog 11-25-03 08:51 PM

Write-E just chill, while my sharp toungue Flicks ~2~ knife-thee/

Venomous Spits is what I inflict, while ya still Cling'n 2 Ya Mom's tit's/
Saggy with Soggy Clit, Bitch Cums prepared for the Prick that I Stick/
With unoriginal lines, ya whackness is predefined in your recycled nursery ryhmes/

Write E, ya missing some 'PR' in front of da 'E', *flip the script* PRE-Write sounds betta to me/

Your elevation must be to the Zero degree, cuz ya cold and ineffectual 'G'/

Like piss to flame ya sizzling lame, with a stench that's hard to tame, best exit the game/

Symilee 11-25-03 09:48 PM

stop rapping! you leave all that hear your words in boredom...
time to bounce this doggy bitch right out of the cypher forum...
keep posting here...even in the front lines, you'd get owned...
grab ya verse in hand...cuz thats only how you'd hold your own...
did you get your rhymes by loan? clown, u better tone it down...
pullin punches? i dont think so...this shits over by the 1st round...

TrEbLe 11-25-03 11:12 PM

Symilee- he tryna be complicated but he's only foolin his self
call em ashanti singin "rain on me" cuz hes by his self
This nigga still garbage and hes at his full potential
If u was Wes Craven u still couldn't b suspensful
stop rappin dude take this shit as hintful
Nigga would drown in a cup of water
his life is as complicated as 2 quarters
dumb fuck i'll leave u shooken
i aint stevie wonder but i'll kill u wit out lookin

_ÑÒÀßÙSÈ_ 11-26-03 03:56 AM

not bad for a newbee, with 2 posts and all
but that's rubbish, i don't give a fuck bitch, you still blow in halls
even if you all treble, you must be soft as shit
work at a gun range, and still couldn't...drop a clip
stop it dick, i'm blocking scripts, like grumman knocking you out of business
cuz you can't get with this, so don't beg to ask
wanta battle on paper, you'll get ripped...and take a draft

YoungBlack 11-26-03 10:42 AM

sick faggot, drop and give me 20 cuz nigga yous my maggot
u light weight, bitch, cuz u can't carry the baggage
No abuse, i see u use, to losin
wit a 0-4 record man, u gots be oozin
and an eight millimeter, guarenteed to leave u movin
Biatch

MC BASS 11-26-03 05:51 PM

young black/ got a bunk rap/
spitten~them~thangs/ bb shells in tha chamba/
causin minimal~pain/ oops...you did~it~again/
droppin pitiful~slang/ try an focus when your typin/
use them syllables~mang/ your fillers~don't~bang/
droppin those you kill~your~own~game/ next time come wit something more than just a dolla an change.....

AJ 11-26-03 11:30 PM

Somein Smells Fish Around Here, Is It The Goy Above Me Possibly?
Look At Ya REflection In The Mirror, A Gay Ass Faggot, Can It Be?
Listen, Your Verse Is The Worst On This Page, 1 Post And Overage
Rhymes Belong In A Hurst With Ya Body, Beat By The Death Mage
Ya ~ Just Arnt Welcome, You May Be Present But Ya Spit The Past
Come On Kid, This Is Dumb, Here Is Antoher Lines About Everlast

Translucant 11-26-03 11:48 PM

unfortunately this guy posted on bass before i could oh well here is what I had goin


Bass you rap like your from miami
i guess that makes u a legitamit tranny
diss on black and tryin to clown
do you pee standing up?
or pee sittin down?
the way you spit reveals your rhyme games weak
do everyone a favor zip it... dont speak
Man ive heard all of the styles you mimic
you need to stop recycling MC hammer lyrics
dude why you rhyme at a retarded rate?
your so dull you go past sleep and end in a coma state
your a wanna be lookin at me... you wish (pfft)
what kind of retard is named after a fish
go ahead buy his CD "forever is Bass"
if you wanna pollute your ear drums with nothin but trash

It 11-26-03 11:58 PM

go home...u have no flow hoe...wreck yo self befo u test yo self
go crome...yeah here cpmes the bullets...pop pop u died u elf
damn yo verse was so gay i killed someone...see what ya made me do
fuck you ya threw in 5 lines...u out ya mind thinking u can drop a ryme

Translucant 11-27-03 12:05 AM

listening to this guy is like listening to a fool
u got 5 from 4 thats a bunch of bull
I guess thats what happens
when you drop out of school
because every word you spit
sounds like your mouths fartin
when did u drop out
first grade or kindergarden

Translucant 11-27-03 12:22 AM

this was in retaliation to IT after he replied

son stop in your track cancel your bets
I cant understand you drop the tourettes
Get ready for death I'll make it painless
if your gunna drop rhymes plz speak english
god stop talkin someone get me a sedative
I hate all people who have speech impedaments

_ÑÒÀßÙSÈ_ 11-27-03 04:23 AM

aight yo

let me teach you something, you aint nothing but a hoe
translucent? that's right and i could see right through you with a blind eye fold
you the type of cat, who like to lie but rhymes for the rhyme
a stupid nigga, i guess...one of a kind
one of an asshole, i turn anger to love
you couldn't have a sharp shot, if you stuck a hangar in a slug


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