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Dadi Kewl 11-24-03 09:39 AM

Twizzle [V5] Brixton
 
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Usual shit

Check in and spit..i'll spit after work :thumbup:

Go......... :flipoff:

-ElocuShun- 11-24-03 06:01 PM

this is my chickity check....
i'll spit wen i can padre...
watahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh....
big up to the swindom massive........................................... ..........

-ElocuShun- 11-24-03 06:51 PM

hello Swidon Swanky...lets Dance...Ima Key it Now

aight go ahead LiB, show peeps its easy for ya to take a Dive...
...b/coz ya cant provide the meta4's,so you were Ko'd by Meta 5
see your only Claim to Fame...is bitching that Cam' Bit off ya Shit..
....w/ your avater protesting your Claim,ya kicked yaself in A Pit
Because now Twizzle finds himself falling down a Brown Hole..(oops)
...he's been turning to the other side,w/out no self Control...
got a Wonka in your ava..where the Elevater flys out at the End..
but your ass reverses in Spiral, Your givin no Gold Ticket to Spend
no Doubt in the final Countdown, i Plagued you w/ Gangreen...
b/coz your lines be rotting apart n i jus Lubed ya up w/ Vaseline..(butt fucked)

Dadi Kewl 11-26-03 10:07 AM

your verses look ghost written. . .still, dont even bother to Post
and i kno your not stupid. . .Just posessed by a retarded Ghost.
make the most, I see u as the 1st to be banned for droppin shit
i belive i got dirt on you Phil. . . .And theres Six Feet of it.
I'm writin this At my workplace cuz you dont deserve my free time
Dumbass, tried to buy the 50cent cd...with four nickles and three-dimes.
U can see this battle aint testin me, not even breakin a sweat
Phil, you couldn't rock show's. . .If ya shoved your T.V Set.
you aint a vet,cant even drop a punch..every lines a disater
I got MERK across my knuckles...you just got plasters...

...blah keyed

Oh and your Cam biting line is false...my custom text said 'bite me'
Because my avy was a wonka choclate bar....not because he bit my shit

Votez plz

Dadi Kewl 11-26-03 03:06 PM

Uppers................
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.Iknoevel. 11-26-03 03:38 PM

opening - brix...both were nice but brix had a personal
flow - both
personals - brix
metas - twizzle
punches - twizzle
struct - brix
creativity - both
closing - brix

brixton = 4/8
twizze = 2/8
both = 2/8

overall - brixton

Dadi Kewl 11-26-03 03:43 PM

^Hop of his dick.....peon

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.Iknoevel. 11-26-03 04:04 PM

^^ i aint on it.......................

i voted honestly

chill

i tried doin the poll but i cant...so it dont matter
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Dadi Kewl 11-26-03 06:21 PM

^In that case......you

Honestly

Have no clue.....


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Emerge 11-26-03 06:24 PM

opener - brix
closer - twizzle
punches - twizzle
personals - twizzle
wordplay - brix
overal - twizzle

hit up my battle with rapid wit honest vote

$pitacular 11-26-03 06:28 PM

Yo Twizzle fo Shizzle, better punches, funnier and all around a better verse.... no beef Brix, you know I vote honest

but let the Wonka thang go dog.... that's why you lost. You tried to focus on keeping that Wonka shit goin and you lost all direction, you can do way better and you know it.

"i belive i got dirt on you Phil. . . .And theres Six Feet of it."
^^^budee budee budee and that's all folks!
peace yall

Dadi Kewl 11-27-03 07:21 AM

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da boxa 11-27-03 09:24 AM

in my oppinion this was a pretty good, battle, but twizzle took the win with more skill and overall it was more enjoyable....... i liked that line about the tv set, that was dope shit..............
.............twizzle.............................. ........
anyone wanna try me after this battle, bring it, pm me and i'll try y'as.

Dadi Kewl 11-28-03 07:38 AM

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Dadi Kewl 11-28-03 09:49 AM

Come on...............
Uppity up
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Dadi Kewl 11-29-03 07:14 AM

Ups.....................
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-ElocuShun- 11-29-03 07:37 PM

uppin for shizzle ___________________twizzle________________________ __________________________________________________ ________

Dadi Kewl 11-30-03 08:54 AM

up,



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-ElocuShun- 11-30-03 05:34 PM

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Dadi Kewl 12-02-03 09:38 AM

Last Up........
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MP~PHASIZ 12-02-03 12:25 PM

METAPHORES - Twizzle Stix
VOCABULARY - ...
PUNCHLINES - Twizzle Stix
STRUCTURE - tie
CREATIVITY - Twizzle Stix
PERSONALS - -Brixton-
OPENING - -Brixton-
CLOSING - Twizzle Stix
MULTIES - tie
FLOW - tie

OVERALL - Twizzle Stix

Dadi Kewl 12-02-03 04:21 PM

C'mon lets get this done...........
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menolin 12-02-03 05:12 PM

opener:Phil
closer:Phil
punches:Twizzle
vocab:Tie
wordplay:Twizzle
structure:Tie
overall:Twizzle

harder hittin punches won this battle, keep it up guys.




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^^^could ya plz hit this up with an honest vote^^^


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