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kaos theory-vs-dreamer
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im bout rearrange ya brain lyrically, they call me dreamer cause ill bring ya pain physically, mentally and spiritually//
theres no doubt ill win this bout, cause im ~sending a trap~seems like you got diarrhea at the mouth, so im ~ending ya crap~// I spit shit you cant forget, you tried a quick hit, but you cant brake a brick with a stick, stupid// im deleting ya ~claim to fame~completing the strain on ya brain,you should change ya name cause i ~aim to shame~ niggas thats lame// are you ready for dismantle, keep the machete, steady by the handle, ya skills should be blew, like a candle, you beating me is like Ru(ru paul)beating a fag scandle// how you going to ~contest the champ~you fighting a giant, im bout to~molest this tramp~better than kobe bryant// and leave him teary eyed and weary, change his loud profile, to a queit smile, and call him the calm theory// |
Is he going to spit or am i going to be sitting in this mufuca for ever zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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yo someone put this retard to sleep.... this mans-cripled... its that damn-simple
fuck it...i'll knock you out so hard.... you'll be dreaming longer than rip van-winkle/ this guys got talent?? size wise... his shit comes up to about my leg-femur trying to rap??get tha pillow and blanky... say goodnite to this day-dreamer/ my brains-crude... to this lame-dude...i'm a make a win slot... and push your face-through i'm ashamed-of-you....this bitch couldnt play me...if i was a nintendo game-cube/ trying-to-play??this cross dressing queer puts on more make up than violent-jay by-tha-way... this fags loss record is longer than most liscence-plates/ do you have AIDS??dreamer's tha ideal example of trying to cum-from-behind this kids dumb-and-blind....you just got jacked!! only thing you is a record of one-and-nine/ |
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enjoyment - kaos
structure - kaos wordplay - koas punchlines - koas creativity - dreamer flow - koas metaphors - none overall - koas http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=94131]Phayme vs Justin Kredible[/url] [url= |
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enjoyment - kaos
structure - kaos wordplay - koas punchlines - koas creativity - dreamer flow - koas metaphors - none overall - koas.................. |
1 over Hannibal. your not aloud to quote votes.
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o yea.... can sum1 vote on this battle? http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=93664 I would appreciate it very much. Thanks
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enjoyment - kaos
structure - kaos wordplay - koas punchlines - koas creativity - dreamer flow - koas metaphors - none peace overall - koas |
my vote goes to chaosssssssss..................................... ..............
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thanks for tha vote rap.............................................vo te ..............................................quit sleepin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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punches=kaos
flow=kaos structure=kaos creativity=tie overal=kaos good battle ya both had good spits but kaos had better punches! vote= kaos return favour, drop an honest vote at this link! http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=94077 |
thanks kid............................................... ..........................................damn this shit takes forever.........................for real
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this was a nice battle hear...dreamer has potential...you got forced barz...work on your structure..ya opener was'nt that good...you had nice punches but they really did'nt cause an
impact..disses were so so.. be a lil more creative..nice closer which was ya best... kaos opener was nice but elementary...tha game cube line was way to basic for a punch..nice wordplay off the name...ya 7&8 line hit with a decent punch... both need to elevate a lil but i vote kaos..he edge with a betta flow also |
aight thanks tonya.............._____________________
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kaos flow was betta and he has betta lyrics......................////////////................._________________________________ __betta in every aspect
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thanks man.........................................lets get one more poll vote now
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Ok kaos killed him in most ares vote=kaos
Battle being slept on please vote http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=94374 |
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