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1liner vs dez.
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aight checkin in whats the due time holla back .................................................. .............................................
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umm...shall we say 40 minutes from your next post?
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done 40 min from NOW............................................... .................................................. ................................
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"YOURE~WACK~DAWG, YOU HOG ALL THE WACK YOU WACK HOG, SHIT GETS FOGGY IN THE "FOG"//
^see how stupid that shit looks? kid thinks hes got dope wordplay... well, i'm not sold watch me crack his fungus..to prove i break the mold L's like a post 9/11 dealership.....offering 0% interest 9-15 isnt just a record, its also his average bench press! 'gainst Dez hes always less...... like a pint to a gallon what good'll your e-guns do? i wear an i-vest when im battlin kid your joke, he who says otherwise is nothing but a liar new-b posts never even have half a dope punch.. theyre all wack..especially the 1liners **keyed after reading one of his battles**** |
You could Have a million actors trapped in ya ass~ and stuffed in ya glands
but thats the only way your Raps~ could ever be backed by a popular demand i'm Grab"n a preist to Bless me Right--- so i can grab all ya D/r's and turn there necks RIGHT so all you got LEFT is the THEFT that would immediatly ~Supress ya Hype'' like a glock with out tha light--u could obses me for life u could copy and spit every word i speack ~twice~and evey breath i breathe~~ and still not do it right You aint evil or see though SO U COULD NEVER Posses these EYES AND THATS WHY as u predictid ur only gunna be a Texcee for LIFE You could neva Break this or~Stop-This-Hammer- from leaveN you face-less --shot in ya grammar --and show u the tru meanin of Race-ist Prop-a-gan-da |
punches- dez
flow- defiantly dez wordplay- 1liner i guess structure- dez vocab- both opener- dez closer- dez's closer was funny when ya think about it it's hilarious made me laugh more- of course dez final vote- dez theres my vote and dez wins easliy |
i guess this dude Didnt look at were he's from to get my punches
anyways uppin again Shit i din't even use wordplay But i get the cat LMAO |
I don't even know if i'm allowed 2 vote so if i'm not then just erase it
punches-Dez watch me crack his fungus..to prove i break the mold L's like a post 9/11 dealership.....offering 0% interest ^^those were the 2 best punches in the battle, both from Dez wordplay-1liner You could Have a million actors trapped in ya ass~ and stuffed in ya glands but thats the only way your Raps~ could ever be backed by a popular demand ^^the best wordplay of the battle i don't vote on structure Flow-1liner would've won if it wasn't for this-----------u could copy and spit every word i speack ~twice~and evey breath i breathe~~ and still not do it right ^^^5 times longer then the rest of your bars personals-nobody vocab-i didn't really see any from anybody Opener-Dez Closer-1liner, because Dez's doesn't rhyme-------kid your joke, he who says otherwise is nothing but a liar new-b posts never even have half a dope punch.. final vote=3 Dez 2 1liner Vote-Dez |
aight 1liner ya produce sum good shit but ya flow and structure kill ya...follow dez's example bra..
breakdown= punches-dez structure-dez flow-dez creativity-1 enjoyment-both metas-both sustainment-dez..threw more vote-dez due to flow n better punches good battle ya'll pz |
opposite of down.
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illadelph is like the sun cause we shine with rhymes, underground is like the moon you only see us at times..
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flow: dez, easily...
wordplay: 1liner, barely... personals: dez had that openin personal i guess... opener: c ^^... multis: 1liner... metas: tie... closer: niether was good... winner: dez takes this...nice battle though... hit this up if u can... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=94171 |
punches - dez
personas - dez wordplay -dez vocab - tie opener - dez closer - dez overal - dez 1liner what the fuck is up with ure structure man that shit was fucking off really badly...if u gonna battle in elevated atleast try to come nice with structure it's the least u can do homie no hate dez was too much for you dog and quantity dont matter only quality peace hit up my sig with honest vote peace |
Dez be crazy illin'
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yo dez got this shit nukka, pm me for a battle some time, i'll take you on, and for 1liner, go back to normal frontlines your aint a competator yet............................................... ..
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shit i think i need to write more, or my server is fuckin up again, if my vote doesn't go through i'm sorry, mabie a mod will put it in there, yet again, my vote goes to dez..................................
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ok, here it is:
DEZ kid thinks hes got dope wordplay... well, i'm not sold watch me crack his fungus..to prove i break the mold ^^^ aight, more wordplay than punch here 7/10 L's like a post 9/11 dealership.....offering 0% interest 9-15 isnt just a record, its also his average bench press! ^^^nice, decent punch, original 8/10 'gainst Dez hes always less...... like a pint to a gallon what good'll your e-guns do? i wear an i-vest when im battlin ^^^so-so....creative 6/10 kid your joke, he who says otherwise is nothing but a liar new-b posts never even have half a dope punch.. theyre all wack..especially the 1liners ^^^broke structure here, decent punch though 7/10 TOTAL: 28/40 (70%) and.... 1LINER You could Have a million actors trapped in ya ass~ and stuffed in ya glands but thats the only way your Raps~ could ever be backed by a popular demand ^^^nice opener, decent punch 8/10 i'm Grab"n a preist to Bless me Right--- so i can grab all ya D/r's and turn there necks RIGHT so all you got LEFT is the THEFT that would immediatly ~Supress ya Hype'' ^^^ok, meaning is questionable, trying too hard here... 5/10 like a glock with out tha light--u could obses me for life u could copy and spit every word i speack ~twice~and evey breath i breathe~~ and still not do it right ^^^weak punch, learn how to spell dog: speak, every 5/10 You aint evil or see though SO U COULD NEVER Posses these EYES AND THATS WHY as u predictid ur only gunna be a Texcee for LIFE ^^^ weak punch 6/10 1st line was stupid You could neva Break this or~Stop-This-Hammer- from leaveN you face-less --shot in ya grammar --and show u the tru meanin of Race-ist Prop-a-gan-da whats race gotta do with it? eh.... 5/10 TOTAL: 28/50 (56%) work on structure, but you got potential vote goes to dez peace |
Dez easily wins..First, you could tell he aint try, and why even try, the other kid seriously needs help with his battle. I ain't seen a sretched bar verse since I was in B.R.E
Vote-Dez |
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