D.Dot vs Gunman tha Great
 

10 lines
no dick ridin
verses are due today

Bitch you actin' hard when we both know ya softer then tits
Get it through ya head, before I shove it down ya throat and leave ya asophagus split...
Mentally I'm beyond yours..its an understatement to say i'll hand you a loss
Ya tryna find victory, but the only thing your catchin is balls like Randy Moss
Mah fam is boss, you know I spit dat sick shit when I regurgitate
Faggot ass, youu got more fuckin dead lines than the pearly gates...
you tryna rap that's funny
Cuz when it comes to mics you cant ROCK-ET... like Jeff Van Gundy
You son me? ha, with no personals im hurtin you, the Fat lady now sings
You claimin street but never posted one block like yao ming
It takes one line to kill you cause all my words scar
and though you're under drinking age, you'll still get Served In A Bar

10 lines=5 bars. checking in and posting

Allow me to start by 'slapping' this kid with the first sentence so he'll know what the 'topic at hand' is all about//
because the fact is you have no 'gifts' like christmas at a muslum's house//
draw a picture of him losing, by 'connecting the dots' with what I wrote//
its easy for you to get ran through, cuz whenever you flow the response is more 'boos' like the audience was studdering ghosts//
'Picture' me losing to this herb,you won't 'see it' like taking flix with a broke lens//
Dot has no strength to 'pull' out a victory forcing him to 'shoot off at the mouth' like armless hitmen//
I'll serve,trash,and whipe up anybody in Dot's entourage like overzealous waiters//
The fact is i'm to advanced for Dot. i can win by 'bringing up old shit' like i'm raising used toilet paper//

If i need to explain any of these punches then you are all idiots. well Dot hurry hurry now my child time is ticking.

its only 4 bars i counted my shit wrong. if Loon Jr. wants me 2 i'll make up another bar real quick if not then fuck it leave it

lets get some votes, we can all join up and witness a murder. this shit dissapeared to page 4 in like 1 day. I don't even know if its in the right place if not then move it i didn't make the thread D.Dot did i don't know the rules and what not. lets get some votes

iight this battle was pretty one-sided

opening - dot
flow - dot
struct - dot
metas - G.T.G.
multis - dot
closing - dot
overall - dot

this was a wack battle.....but dot took it

my vote - D.Dot

Thanks yo

opening - dot
flow - dot
struct - dot
metas - G.T.G.
multis - tie
closing - dot
overall - dot

This battle was pretty sad but at least Dot showed up with his A game - Peace

Thanks man , this wasnt me at my best , I just didnt want to use my full skill against this whack cat

Upping
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Let's get this shit over wit so I could get a win on my record

Let's get this shit over wit..
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Bash took this, had more creative lines better punches and flow sctructure an wut not...Vote Bash And yo could you'z hit up my battle with an honest vote...its in my sig...thatnks

That shit was weak!!!!

opening - dot
flow - dot
struct - dot
metas - G.T.G.
multis - dot
closing - dot
overall - dot

Thanks yo , but This wasnt my best...

yeah your verse sucked. Kids here got IQs to match their shoe size (you included) lets get somebody with talent to vote.

Ok...Dumbass........

Let's get this shit over wit
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How weak , ..Ddot , harder punches, ..both came soft as fuck, used no complex, or ne thing, ..but D.dot hd a better overall

Thanks.
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~Flow: Bash
~Multies: Bash
~Opener: G.T.G
~Finisher: Bash
~Stucture: Bash
~Personals: Bash
~Punchlines: Bash

Vote:Bash