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*DuLcE~MuErTe* 11-24-03 09:04 PM

*DuLcE~MuErTe* vs. Tonya Montana
 
Femcee battle.......best fem wins

*you know the rules:
no C/R votes, hate votes, bullshit unexplained votes etc....
6-10 lines....no more no less
due date......whateva is coo wit you.....I'm thinkin tomorrow by midnight
no editing verse after each person drops (had that problem wit some bitch on anotha site)
no bitchin, cryin, swayin, feedin, recyclin, bitin etc.

that about covers it all........you wanna drop first or shall I??


*DuLcE~MuErTe* 11-24-03 10:27 PM

...............:check:...............uppin for Ms. Montana to check in.................let's go mama...................:bored:

Tonya~Montana 11-25-03 02:31 AM

yo holla tommoro...did'nt know you set this up...we meet iight

holla............................
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*DuLcE~MuErTe* 11-25-03 08:56 PM

.............. ready............... to.............. drop...............?...........

*DuLcE~MuErTe* 11-25-03 11:48 PM

Aight.....5 bars or 10 lines.........explanations at the bottom

Ma, "pullin out ya weave" don't mean you can lyrically bust~tracks
Beat me? Please, this bitch stay "claimin shit" like the time you said you was just~black* 1

But chick you disgust~rap, you atrocious ma barely even a chump~at~ya~best
I spit "cancer laced syllables" so betta check those lumps~on~ya~breasts 2

Heavyweight status, my pounds of punches'll even make the earth~sway
Gut this wack bitch open and have her see more "red" than on her birth~day* 3

I seldom battle the fragile and pallid but in this case, fuck~it
Rap's not really ya thing but you can still double as LaLa's puppet* 4

Put the pen down ma, ya shit ain't hard hittin matta fact ya writin's~gettin~soft
Only way you winnin is gettin ridden like a bull cept hea you ain't fighin~to get em~off* 5

holla! :laugh2:


~explanations~
1-I don't know much about her since I'm a newbie hea but I read she was claimin she was just black or somethin when she was mix
3- her birthday is valentines day
4- to me she kinda look like LaLa's puppet........lmao
5- She gets clit ridden like crazy I'm new and I can see it myself

Anywayz uppin for her verse.........the clock is tickin ma :flipoff: <---had to add that too funny

*DuLcE~MuErTe* 11-26-03 12:21 AM

.....................
............let's..................
............................go.................... .....
..........I see you there.....................

Tonya~Montana 11-26-03 12:34 AM

whew.........

I got to admit that was a nice spit...
I ain't into "stealin roles" but I'll rip-you-apart-bitch...

this punch right here will make you remain silent friend...
you love "protein" so welcome dicks-in-ya-mouth cause you in-'Vi-ta-min..{invite em in}

I heard you look "nasty" in "bell bottoms" check ya hygenes..{high jeans}...
my only personal is that you "piss" in your bed wakin up to
night screams...

like havin sex with "bad boys" you get fucked-at-WILL...
you need "wins" cause you a W.oman I.n N.eed of S.killz...:noob:

you wanna beat me to make history well chick try to...
cause i'm the "marion jones" ov the Swamps my flow runs
right "bayou" {by you}...


:nono:

*DuLcE~MuErTe* 11-26-03 12:40 AM

took yo ass long enough.......nice spit mama.........but trust me ma only thing newb about me is the post count.........uppin for honest votes 1

Tonya~Montana 11-26-03 12:43 AM

hmm... you sure you ain't lady d???........lmao!!whew!!!
hollaa............................!!!
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*DuLcE~MuErTe* 11-26-03 12:58 AM

Lady D???............who the fuck is that??............this 100 character shit is annoying...................

Tonya~Montana 11-26-03 04:37 AM

uppin before i hit the bed again...............
maybe peeps in the morn will catch it!!!...........
..............i'm out!!.....................

*DuLcE~MuErTe* 11-26-03 10:06 AM

Uppin for some honest votes.............
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*DuLcE~MuErTe* 11-26-03 01:24 PM

^^^^^^uppin this shit^^^^^^^

..........damn, man......can we please get some honest non c/r'din votes...............1

Tonya~Montana 11-26-03 03:10 PM

yo iz cats scared to vote on this..? da deal yall
come wit it...........
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Slim Thug 11-26-03 03:15 PM

Shit this was a tight battle among some broads

Opener: DuLcE
Punches: Tonya
Personals: DuLcE ( I had to choose her cuz she doesnt know much about tonya or ne1 here but she still found some shit.
Flow: Tonya
Creative: Tonya
Overall : Tonya (Barely) This shit was too close to call really In my opinion

*DuLcE~MuErTe* 11-26-03 04:26 PM

^^^yo on the real......you gotta be jokin......but its all good nigga........uppin fo some REAL votes holla.......peep the punches personals and multies.......lets get real now

Tonya~Montana 11-26-03 06:01 PM

get ya votes on.............................................
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....................honesty plz.......................

Tonya~Montana 11-26-03 07:32 PM

yall sleepin for real!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

dam!!!................................uppin for some luv...
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*DuLcE~MuErTe* 11-26-03 07:43 PM

word......uppin fo some honest votes fuck love........be as cold as you want just vote honest and in depth...........1

1liner 11-26-03 07:58 PM

Well this was a aight Battle The Suposed New Girl
was ok some of her shit was force and really didn't mean anything

Tonya i thought Mighta Lost till this line:
like havin sex with "bad boys" you get fucked-at-WILL...
you need "wins" cause you a W.oman I.n N.eed of S.killz

Damn that was hot
Other than that yall we tied
But that line stood out
Vote=Tonya

*DuLcE~MuErTe* 11-26-03 08:02 PM

???......yo for real this site is seriously on some shit.......what didn't you understand and what was forced.....wow.....out of all the sites i been on this the only one that I got probs in........damn yo i tried to make shit easy for ya asses wit explanations.......anywayz uppin for better explanation and some more votes

executive 11-29-03 12:03 PM

i aint polling but i think dulce has some tight shit..... i like her vocab...........and then we have our tonya who we all know is the big deal...........good stuff......dulce im sure u'll make it big with that use of rhymes...............pz........

MyNd. FuLL 11-29-03 12:12 PM

honestly tonya killt her on wordplay and punches..
dulce your structure was very newbish sorry but it was...
dulce's vocab was aight but it didnt get her the win cuz
she lacked hard punches..
i felt tonya came better than as of late
the WINS line was pretty creative...coulda worded it better though

anyway
poll vote=tonya

KeyMo Thera P 11-29-03 12:36 PM

Beat me? Please, this bitch stay "claimin shit" like the time you said you was just~black* 1
^nice line from dulce

Gut this wack bitch open and have her see more "red" than on her birth~day* 3
^^illest it was mad simple but it was mad nice in a way

I ain't into "stealin roles" but I'll rip-you-apart-bitch...
^^mad decent

KeyMo Thera P 11-29-03 12:40 PM

Beat me? Please, this bitch stay "claimin shit" like the time you said you was just~black* 1
^nice line from dulce

I spit "cancer laced syllables" so betta check those lumps~on~ya~breasts 2
^^nice
Gut this wack bitch open and have her see more "red" than on her birth~day* 3
^^illest it was mad simple but it was mad nice in a way

I ain't into "stealin roles" but I'll rip-you-apart-bitch...
^^mad decent

I heard you look "nasty" in "bell bottoms" check ya hygenes..{high jeans}...
^^str8 decent

cause i'm the "marion jones" ov the Swamps my flow runs
right "bayou" {by you}...
^^nicest one


over all a tie doop... id like a 3 way battle with ya both would be interesting

Kautious 12-11-03 11:39 AM

this was a nice battle

tonya came out with straight hits and took punches and flow catagories.

dulce- she came with nice personals but should of shortend her lines to get a better flow, good verse though

but over all i think that tonya took it with hard punches and it suprised me cuz she had a short verse

please honest vote on this
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...9196#post979196

Gunman tha Great 12-11-03 02:24 PM

Tonya got it, better wordplays, and honestly she is the dopest person (Aside from her father..........ME) besides Cave Canem i've seen spit here.

Remixed Illusion 12-11-03 02:33 PM

ok that was a good femcee spit there ladies. props to both
ok breakdown

personals: tie
punches: tanya
flow:tie
vocab: tanya
multi: Dulce

aight my vote goes to Tanya


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