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*DuLcE~MuErTe* vs. Tonya Montana
Femcee battle.......best fem wins
*you know the rules: no C/R votes, hate votes, bullshit unexplained votes etc.... 6-10 lines....no more no less due date......whateva is coo wit you.....I'm thinkin tomorrow by midnight no editing verse after each person drops (had that problem wit some bitch on anotha site) no bitchin, cryin, swayin, feedin, recyclin, bitin etc. that about covers it all........you wanna drop first or shall I?? |
...............:check:...............uppin for Ms. Montana to check in.................let's go mama...................:bored:
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yo holla tommoro...did'nt know you set this up...we meet iight
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.............. ready............... to.............. drop...............?...........
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Aight.....5 bars or 10 lines.........explanations at the bottom
Ma, "pullin out ya weave" don't mean you can lyrically bust~tracks Beat me? Please, this bitch stay "claimin shit" like the time you said you was just~black* 1 But chick you disgust~rap, you atrocious ma barely even a chump~at~ya~best I spit "cancer laced syllables" so betta check those lumps~on~ya~breasts 2 Heavyweight status, my pounds of punches'll even make the earth~sway Gut this wack bitch open and have her see more "red" than on her birth~day* 3 I seldom battle the fragile and pallid but in this case, fuck~it Rap's not really ya thing but you can still double as LaLa's puppet* 4 Put the pen down ma, ya shit ain't hard hittin matta fact ya writin's~gettin~soft Only way you winnin is gettin ridden like a bull cept hea you ain't fighin~to get em~off* 5 holla! :laugh2: ~explanations~ 1-I don't know much about her since I'm a newbie hea but I read she was claimin she was just black or somethin when she was mix 3- her birthday is valentines day 4- to me she kinda look like LaLa's puppet........lmao 5- She gets clit ridden like crazy I'm new and I can see it myself Anywayz uppin for her verse.........the clock is tickin ma :flipoff: <---had to add that too funny |
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............let's.................. ............................go.................... ..... ..........I see you there..................... |
whew.........
I got to admit that was a nice spit... I ain't into "stealin roles" but I'll rip-you-apart-bitch... this punch right here will make you remain silent friend... you love "protein" so welcome dicks-in-ya-mouth cause you in-'Vi-ta-min..{invite em in} I heard you look "nasty" in "bell bottoms" check ya hygenes..{high jeans}... my only personal is that you "piss" in your bed wakin up to night screams... like havin sex with "bad boys" you get fucked-at-WILL... you need "wins" cause you a W.oman I.n N.eed of S.killz...:noob: you wanna beat me to make history well chick try to... cause i'm the "marion jones" ov the Swamps my flow runs right "bayou" {by you}... :nono: |
took yo ass long enough.......nice spit mama.........but trust me ma only thing newb about me is the post count.........uppin for honest votes 1
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hmm... you sure you ain't lady d???........lmao!!whew!!!
hollaa............................!!! .................................... ........................................... |
Lady D???............who the fuck is that??............this 100 character shit is annoying...................
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uppin before i hit the bed again...............
maybe peeps in the morn will catch it!!!........... ..............i'm out!!..................... |
Uppin for some honest votes.............
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^^^^^^uppin this shit^^^^^^^
..........damn, man......can we please get some honest non c/r'din votes...............1 |
yo iz cats scared to vote on this..? da deal yall
come wit it........... ................................... .......................................... |
Shit this was a tight battle among some broads
Opener: DuLcE Punches: Tonya Personals: DuLcE ( I had to choose her cuz she doesnt know much about tonya or ne1 here but she still found some shit. Flow: Tonya Creative: Tonya Overall : Tonya (Barely) This shit was too close to call really In my opinion |
^^^yo on the real......you gotta be jokin......but its all good nigga........uppin fo some REAL votes holla.......peep the punches personals and multies.......lets get real now
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get ya votes on.............................................
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yall sleepin for real!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
dam!!!................................uppin for some luv... ............................................. |
word......uppin fo some honest votes fuck love........be as cold as you want just vote honest and in depth...........1
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Well this was a aight Battle The Suposed New Girl
was ok some of her shit was force and really didn't mean anything Tonya i thought Mighta Lost till this line: like havin sex with "bad boys" you get fucked-at-WILL... you need "wins" cause you a W.oman I.n N.eed of S.killz Damn that was hot Other than that yall we tied But that line stood out Vote=Tonya |
???......yo for real this site is seriously on some shit.......what didn't you understand and what was forced.....wow.....out of all the sites i been on this the only one that I got probs in........damn yo i tried to make shit easy for ya asses wit explanations.......anywayz uppin for better explanation and some more votes
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i aint polling but i think dulce has some tight shit..... i like her vocab...........and then we have our tonya who we all know is the big deal...........good stuff......dulce im sure u'll make it big with that use of rhymes...............pz........
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honestly tonya killt her on wordplay and punches..
dulce your structure was very newbish sorry but it was... dulce's vocab was aight but it didnt get her the win cuz she lacked hard punches.. i felt tonya came better than as of late the WINS line was pretty creative...coulda worded it better though anyway poll vote=tonya |
Beat me? Please, this bitch stay "claimin shit" like the time you said you was just~black* 1
^nice line from dulce Gut this wack bitch open and have her see more "red" than on her birth~day* 3 ^^illest it was mad simple but it was mad nice in a way I ain't into "stealin roles" but I'll rip-you-apart-bitch... ^^mad decent |
Beat me? Please, this bitch stay "claimin shit" like the time you said you was just~black* 1
^nice line from dulce I spit "cancer laced syllables" so betta check those lumps~on~ya~breasts 2 ^^nice Gut this wack bitch open and have her see more "red" than on her birth~day* 3 ^^illest it was mad simple but it was mad nice in a way I ain't into "stealin roles" but I'll rip-you-apart-bitch... ^^mad decent I heard you look "nasty" in "bell bottoms" check ya hygenes..{high jeans}... ^^str8 decent cause i'm the "marion jones" ov the Swamps my flow runs right "bayou" {by you}... ^^nicest one over all a tie doop... id like a 3 way battle with ya both would be interesting |
this was a nice battle
tonya came out with straight hits and took punches and flow catagories. dulce- she came with nice personals but should of shortend her lines to get a better flow, good verse though but over all i think that tonya took it with hard punches and it suprised me cuz she had a short verse please honest vote on this http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...9196#post979196 |
Tonya got it, better wordplays, and honestly she is the dopest person (Aside from her father..........ME) besides Cave Canem i've seen spit here.
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ok that was a good femcee spit there ladies. props to both
ok breakdown personals: tie punches: tanya flow:tie vocab: tanya multi: Dulce aight my vote goes to Tanya |
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