MISTA RAEDAR VS X_Johnnywattz_X
 

NO CV,DR ,biting
8-10 lines
check in before spit
30 mins to drop verse
good luck

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This cat started a crew called da undefeated kingz when he got 9 Ls//
Mista raedar are u retarded ur not undefeated even ya record tells//
Ya lucky were not in person pussy cause ya ass prolly peeed ya pants//
Its like playin Russian roulette wit the chamber full there no chance//
If u check ya radar
.. my puches come at speeds to high for u 2 read//
my punches are hittin ya chest leavin u wit no choice but to concede//
This illiterate nigga dont know how to spell peep this bitches name//
Hes lame,ya need to join patty labelle cause u dont got no lyrical game//
I got this emcee shook like my rhymes lightning and my punches are thunder//
This is a blind spit Im a natural at dis shit like Im another stevie wonder/

This kids about to witness,the sikcness,leave this kat dickless/
Got this kid payin me 2G's to win like this was business/
I'll hit ya main source with 1 hit, like you was a poor bodyguard/
Your lines is like a broke-down car,i'm bout to send ya to the graveyard/
If this kids got wattz, I'm bout to Smack his lights out/
If rappin was chest, I'm ready to pull these nights out/
Throw some water on you,you electricuting yourself/
This kids like bacteria,because his raps is bad for my health/
Hit Johnny with 2 syllables (mista raedar) make him think twice/
I'm like a super villian,My lyrics is the only thing thats nice/

Flow: Tie
Punches: John
Excitment: John
Multies: none Really
Synonyms: Tie
Personals: John

VOTE = Johnny

His verse just appealed more to me. Yours was just didnt grab my attention enough mista. Straight battle though. Hey return the favor and go look at my battle.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=94390

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-High Class a.k.a Confusion

aiiight uppin this shit.............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ............

uppin 4 votes ya'll
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Ayo, go check my battle out and go make a vote, cmone now. Return the favor homies. aight

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-High Class a.k.a Confusion

^^u better shut tha fuck up i'll peep it later if got to say sometrhin pm me instead of freepostin in my thread

Ima have to go by punches and radar won but it was a close decision holla ~ .

WTF.... theres other subject besides punches......dogg dont vote if u dont no how..................................

Uppin 4 votes plz break them down.............................................. .
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METAPHORES - neither
VOCABULARY - neither
PUNCHLINES - X_JohnnyWattz_X
STRUCTURE - X_JohnnyWattz_X
CREATIVITY - X_JohnnyWattz_X
PERSONALS - X_JohnnyWattz_X
OPENING - X_JohnnyWattz_X
CLOSING - X_JohnnyWattz_X
MULTIES - neither
FLOW - tie

OVERALL - X_JohnnyWattz_X

Return the favor:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=94104

Both wack and for fucks sake, punches decide battles. Mista threw I think one semi wack punch and all of johnny's didn't hit. To make you happy mista came with better concepts to so

Vote - Mista

uppin 4 votes
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Uppin 4 some votes
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lol can sum 1 plz vote...got dayum how can u expect sum 1 to vote for u if u aint even gonna vote for sum 1 elses lets go..........

personals=johnny
creativity=johnny
punches(+2)=mista
structure=tie
flow=johnny

my vote=johnny.........3-2 very close battle...........

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flow- was a tie i guess
structure-X
personals-X
punches-X
laughs-X But Mista had me laughN cuz he Can't SPELL ;;;;CHESS

Vote X

return tha favor
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=94663

Uppin 4 votes
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The breakdown:


Johnny Wattz- Go0d drop, consistancy of punches was there. The only flaw was the beginning, didn't feel it too much. However, the bar in which you used "raedar" was hot. Usin the person's name in the verse provides a go0d punch. Ending was a lil played but decent. Go0d drop though for the most part.

Mista Raedar- Also a go0d drop. However, the consistancy wasn't there, you had the best and the worst punches of the battle. Beginning I was feelin a lot, go0d start and ending was go0d too. But sometimes, your setup was better than the acutal punch and although the ending was go0d, you should have switched them around, it would have hit harder. But go0d drop and very go0d flow.


My vote goes to Johnny becasue of the consistancy of his punches. Respect to both, pretty go0d battle. If the poll doesn't work, then tell a mod cause it'll be the first time I'll be pollin. Please hit the link up on the bottom, much appreciated pz.


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=94721