A2Z vs X Ecution
 

10 lines

blind spit

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Ill Spit IN 30 or less...thats what the ELBS said


its been too long since i battled....i forgot how much the 100 char rule irritated me.....

X-Ecutions Just A Rookie...This Kids Not Even Worth My Time
Cuz When His Comp Freezes...His Life Flashes Before His Eyes!
X Talks A Big Game... Just Beating New-Bs Triggers A Lot of Hate
But Just Cuz We Call You Pussy...
........................................ ...We Ain't Saying You Get Laid!
Are You Afraid? Good, Just Turn Around...Forfeit And Just Let It Be
& I Know How Many Vets You've Faced...Cuz Your Losses Are 33!
This Match, I'm On It... Its Even Done Before It Could Even Begin
Win? Ironic...Your Lines Are As Long As Your Scrolling List Of Wins!
When I First Registered...Your Record Gave Me A Respect For You
I See Real X Ecution...Can't Be Black, So He Uses Tie And Crew!


Good Luck X.


Edited For Spelling

After I vanish A2Z and add him to my list he becomes another soul in my can
Especially if your punches are weak, like you don’t contain bones in your hand
Your 10 lines won’t get any attention like Ja Rule Dissing a singer
You’re a generic gangsta who couldn’t clap 9’s if you was missing a finger
Even your family rejects you, why do you think you’ve been clapped dead om relation
And on the mic, it’s obvious your far from dope like crack heads on vacation
I suggest you never attempt to battle me again cause I’m simply to raw to mention
I’ll have to force writing utensils in your brain for you to draw attention
Take Lives From Whores I Leave Lights Out WIth This bitch Like Hes Blinded N Sore
now u boxed out, Like Ben Wallace Only wAy he b a Legend is When He Crash The Board's

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not a bad battle at all....
aight heres the breakdown
punches=x
flow=both
structure=jus a2z
sustainment=x
personals=x
metas=both
enjoyment=both
vote=x

x's was aight but a2z was jus too basic-punches
pz

MAKE SURE YA HIT UP THE TWIZZLE STIX BATTLE IN MA SIG YA'LL PZ

thx for the vote keep em commin...........1

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make sure ya hit the battles in ma sig ....i hit this up and post an honest vote on one of them pz................................................ .........

yo, x took this one, that other guy was wack. good job x..........
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Shut the fuck up herb..

A2Z murdered this kid, X had all played concepts and his lines were uneven and stretched. This is the reason I don't battle here, noobs and herbs who don't know how to read a halfway decent verse.

A2Z Came nice with the personals and wordplay, straight merked this kid.

Learn how to read a verse n00bs...

thx for the vote keep em commin...........1

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SOrry For Not Upping...I Was Deer Hunting...


Uppin This So So Fa Up That When You Read This It Busts Out The Top Of Your Moniter.

i gotta agree with Aisle, A2Z came a lot better on this. his lines were more even and he had more originality than X (though i'm not saying X's verse wasnt good)
"Win? Ironic...Your Lines Are As Long As Your Scrolling List Of Wins!"
that was my favorite line out of this whole battle...
vote-A2Z

sorry for some damn reason i cant fuckin vote this is bs-i dnt know why but if i get it to work an this battle aint over ill vote here pc~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

this was a pretty nice battle i was feelin it...A2z had a nice verse couple personals in there sum punches but not many that stood out ova all 5.1/10



X had the nice verse in this battle his punches was well thought out flow was on point and the wordplay was also well thought out that far from codope line was nice made me laugh ova all he took this with a rating of 5.5/10


vote=X



PS. vote on my battle with bloody!!!

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more votes people lets go stop sleepin.....................1

man this was a good battle bUtttttt....

v/A27
everyline he had cracked me upthey were hiting hard and the personals were dope..very creative...and X had stretched type lines and a27 killed it with the ur lines are strecthed like ur line of wins thingy...
so this battle was easy but good

A2Z took this easily...
His punches hit and an all round good verse
X has alot of strecthed lines that fuck with the flow
making it hard to read and get....punches were.........meh

V. A2Z

hit this up please..

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...15&pagenumber=1

Thanx

METAPHORES - A2Z
VOCABULARY - ...
PUNCHLINES - X Ecution
STRUCTURE - A2Z
CREATIVITY - A2Z
PERSONALS - A2Z
OPENING - X Ecution
CLOSING - X Ecution
MULTIES - X Ecution
FLOW - A2Z

OVERALL - A2Z

Really close...

It was...

I think the best line of the battle went to X...

"Crackheads on vacation"

That was funny as shit.

But overall, I think A2Z took him with better personals, harder punches, and better flow.

Still, this was a great battle.

But someone's gotta lose.

Props ta both.

Peace