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deacon 11-25-03 08:30 PM

[week 6] 13. Mental God (3-2) vs 13.5 Thrust (3-2) vs 14. fgee (3-2)
 
topic: Fist full of answers

Due: dec 1st
Voting ends: dec 5th


THRUST WILL BE IN THIS AS WELL...3 way battle

vote.
a.
b.
c.
explain your votes

Mental God 11-25-03 09:06 PM

why am i 13th place now? i was in 11th last week and i won....

whatever... check i guess

fgee 11-25-03 11:35 PM

this fucking gay
3 way battles suck..
and i get a loss for no showing?
balls....

Thrust 11-26-03 12:08 AM

i agree on the 3 ways...
i was matched wit deacon n cam...
it gives u a higher risk of losing than every1 else...
but shit happens i guess....

o n uh...my rankings went down also...
it seems the 2-0 kids are just ranked over us...

check

fgee 11-28-03 07:33 AM

fuck this im out
the league has gone to shit...

Mental God 11-29-03 06:27 AM

can we get like a day extension on this? i was banned for a minute and forgot bout this and thanksgiving. I can write it tomorrow if i can get an extension?

Thrust 11-29-03 09:51 AM

^it's due on the 1st...it's only the 29th
can't you have it done4 by then...
n it looks like it'll just be me n u on this 1

Mental God 11-29-03 09:57 AM

yeah i will have it done... good luck

Thrust 12-01-03 06:45 PM

Fist Full of Answers

My lethal rages, Brutally cavin in faces
Daring situations, Daredevil's the occupation
My life mistakin, With each breath i'm takin
Inhalin deadly flames N' heart keeps racin
Increasing the risk of engagin' handcuffs
Behold freedom at stake when i'm wound-up
Act tough, Overconfident, However you put it
Answerin thru knuckles, It's just how i prove it
My thoughts is cruel n'... who gives a shit
It's my life, N' i'ma keep on livin it, Bitch
Criticize, It's only bringin on the attention
Fists to membranes, Got ya fenced-in
Pumpin up the tension, Elevatin my reign
Foul comments will only remain a stain
If i didnt mention, Ya shit just don't fly
Ensure when i cock back n' fists collide

Question it bitch, You'll get a fistfull of answers
Dear, I'ma turn Donald n' Blitson into prancers
Counteract your minds wit a new view on me
Fist full of answers, Fuck those fictional stories

I'm what you dwell on, No other choices
I stand valuable like limited Rolls Royces
Fuck mainstream, Along wit the underground
Hear it thru my lyrics, Visions is sound
Any qeustion mark thrown, I'm tossin exclamations
Any discriminatin upon me is a false statement
Love me, Can't be explain by words
My popularity is strait on, Ur's...a Curve
No Dodgin it, Hell i'll even grant you warrantys
As miles add on, You still can't get away from me
I'm present, Forever like a big brother to look up to
My physcopathic path might just collide wit you...
In fact it has, Your hate amongst me won't last
Fist full of answers, Demise concludes your ass

Question it bitch, You'll get a fistfull of answers
Dear, I'ma turn Donald n' Blitson into prancers
Counteract your minds wit a new view on me
Fist full of answers, Fuck those fictional stories

Fuck comin soft
My power engages
A penny for my thoughts
And your questin ceases

Mental God 12-02-03 01:36 AM

ok im about to write my verse right now.... should be up in not too long.

Mental God 12-02-03 03:26 AM

Ok Here's Mine... It Was VERY Last Minute. Props To Thrust... You Have An Ill Peice Man... I Couldnt Let Something Like That Go To Waste. So Here Is Mine.

A fist full of answers, is going to leave the questions at hand
You can be supplied the knowledge, but you need the demand
To take Command, to desire to understnad
What the questions are really asking, helping your mind expand
Into the land, where the questions originally came from
The names crumble under the sun, and then your brains numb
Untill the rains come, and wash away your understanding
You curse at the heavens, why are the questions so demanding
Why is sacrifice so outstanding, when you have nothing to lose
A fist straightened up your views, but you still end up confused
And now theres now excuse, there is no self-justification
The fist could fix the world, if not for misinterpretation
But determination, of dreams from imaginations
Will never bring the world to peace, because discrimination
Has blessed our nation, and were too ingorant to face it
So we replace it, with fake answers that just re-trace it

Mental God 12-02-03 03:36 AM

Matches I Voted On...

High Class Vs Someone
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...3241#post953241

Feeble minded Vs Nok'd Vizion
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...3245#post953245

Dadi Kewl 12-02-03 07:30 AM

Nice battle...

Thrust:Your verse showed potential, the flow was solid
Nice use of vocab, story wise...it wasnt that good, no real story
to follow more a verse of thought, taking on the agressive
approach to the verse i felt your verse lacked creativity (althougth) i saw some creative elemnts, and showed a lack of concept ideology.

Ill mental: Nice little verse...i liked the concept,
and the wordplay...a solid flow, and good structure
There was no dofference in quality in the verse...apart from
Ill showed more creativity and produced some v.good imagery
Therefore i vote

V. Ill mental

Thrust 12-02-03 04:38 PM

hmm... ok

uppin for this...

i'll edit this with my votes

MC Jan It ReKnow 12-02-03 04:58 PM

two of my favoritee hoes here..


i dont feel that this one was that close. to me, Thrust came well more prepared than hoebag. his verse was well on point, had a good solid structure and a good flow.


hoeface rushed it too much, Cody is more than capable of competing with anybody on RB topical wise, he just needs to stop being a hoe and put his ass into it.


vote- Thrust.

Key-Low 12-02-03 05:47 PM

Nyce battle, too mad fgee punked out and ill mental dropped a quickie, many solid bars in both, tha breakdown....

Thrust: Rhyme Scheme: 8, Flow: 7.5, Story: 8.5, total: 24

Ill- Mental: Rhyme Scheme: 8, Flow: 8, Story: 7, total: 23

close battle, you both had solid verses, length in my eyes killed ill mentals, thrust you dropped a hott one, even dropped a hook, lol,
vote - thrust, no hard feelins, may tha best man win, hit up my battle, stay real, peace, 1

Mystery~murdera 12-02-03 11:06 PM

yea, I feel Thrust took this by more than a little bit.
His piece was consistent where as Mental's was...
ehhh sometimes. Both drops were nice though.

vote - trhust

Xeon 12-03-03 11:49 AM

the wordplay on trust was sick
nice vocab,,not a cry for me stry but not to thug.

mental had a sick story - wordplay and mults
but i felt his story more......
i related to it so he got t

vote mental

both had a sick battle

deacon 12-03-03 12:08 PM

Yeah im thinking thrust had the upper hand because he prepared for his more...Mental i've seen great pieces from you mayne...this one was good but not enough to edge the win...

vote=thrust

High Class 12-03-03 07:39 PM

I didnt know you are aloud to vote on your own crew hommie. Why is that legel here, but not in the Front lines, and such?
( and yes I know both of them are in your crew, But not with rules battle. I just wanna know why this is aloud. )

-Mental God, you where straight hommie. I wasnt feeling it to much, not that its bad or anything. I think your flow dropped off at some points of time. Maybe work on Vocab as well...

-Thrust, I thought this was pretty good. I liked the vocab, and the flow of the lines. My only suggestion is to work on a better rhyme scheme. Other than that, good imagery and allusions. Nice drop hommie, worked with the topic good.

Vote - Thrust

OUT

-High Class a.k.a Confusion

Mental God 12-03-03 08:12 PM

ok, thrust you win... like i told you on aim homie, your verse was better. Good Job!

Key-Low 12-03-03 08:21 PM

now vote on our battle, lol, stay real, peace, 1

Thrust 12-03-03 10:33 PM

i'm plannin on it maddawg...
thanks mental...nice quick piece
o n...the reason why crew votes are allowed...
cuz in SS we stay true...
we're not gon' dickride here

Mental God 12-04-03 12:24 AM

^^^Word To That

deacon 12-04-03 01:14 PM

exactly...anything that is out side of this league is thrown out as far as hate and what not...only legit votes and i trust each member on that....

Mental are you still in soft focus noticed you changed your sig..

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Maven 12-07-03 01:41 PM

Thrust wins
[closed]


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